Disclaimer. My disclaimer rules
Because it is a haiku
Naruto's not mine..
Once again, I'd like to thank you all for your reviews. Being told over and over again that my story is worth continuing really makes me feel good about my writing ability. One reviewer told me this story was too good to not continue.
So to all of my fans, I dedicate this chapter to you.
Once again, this is pretty much a rewrite of chapter three from Naruto's point of view. Next chapter I'll get to the real story. So, enjoy.
To Hell With the Consequences
Written by PHreek-Boi
Chapter Four: A Dream Come True
Well, kit. I must say, I'm impressed.
Nngg... wha? Kyubi? I was sleeping, you know.
How can you be asleep with your lady love next to you?
I'm tired, jackass. Last night was exausting. Really exausting. Who would have thought I'd have it in me? God, how many times did we go, anyway?
I lost count at seven.
Really? That many? I am the man. I gotta admit, though, I never thought me and Sakura would end up here. Of course I always hoped we would. At least since I turned fifteen. It's an amazing feeling, waking up next to the woman you love. And I can't think of another time when I was so happy.
Heh. Sakura thinks I'm still asleep. My forehead's tingling where she just kissed me. It filled with the same warmth and tenderness I'd shown to her over the years. I bet she's wondering how she ever lived without me.
A little full of ourself, are we?
Pshht. Like you know anything, fox. Come on, we just had sex. And I know for a fact that she expressed her enjoyment more than once.
You realize that now you two can't be just friends anymore, right?
Yeah. To be honest, it scares me a little. I mean, what if I blow it? What's going to happen then? Like you said, sfter something as big as this, we can't go back to being friends.
The question is, kit, was it worth it?
Totally. If I could go back in time and do it again, I would. A thousand times over. I love Sakura, and I want to be with her.
Then be with her.
What? No snippy comeback? Jeez, fox, you're losing your edge. Seriously, you wouldn't believe how utterly fantastic I feel, just laying next to her. I can honestly say there hasn't been a time more perfect than this in my life. Ever. If I could have one wish, it'd be that we could stay here, in this moment, forever.
That's so sweet. I think I may be ill.
Gee, thanks fox. Nice to know my happiness sickens you.
Oh, you're very welcome. Say, kit, how do you think people will react when they hear you two are together?
I really don't know. I hope Sasuke's pissed. Or, even better, that he cries. God knows that bastard deserves it, after what he put Sakura-chan through. For once I want to a hurt look on his face, so I can tell him to suck it up and get out of my face.
You've grown a backbone. I'm impressed.
Oh, joy of joys. I've always wanted to gain your approval. Just like I've always wanted to have a tooth pulled without any sort of anaesthetic.
What of her parents? It's been my experience that human parents react poorly to their daughter losing her virginity, especially to a boy they don't like.
You know what? You're a buzz killer. Sakura-chan could get in a lot of trouble because of me. For sure her parents aren't gonna be hapy we're seeing one another. And if they find out about last night, well, I'll probably end up stuffed and mounted over their mantle. But we'll cross that bridge when we come to it. Me and Sakura are together, and they can't do anything to change that.
Uzumaki Sakura has a nice ring to it.
Well, yeah, it kinda does. But I don't think I'm ready to get married. I'm only seventeen. That kind of commitment would require someone of a much higher maturity level then I possess.
Man, I can't wait to tell the guys that me and Sakura-chan hooked up.
Lee's gonna be mad. He's had a crush on Sakura-chan for as long as I've known him. Shikamaru will probably tell him I'm doomed, and that a relationship is 'more trouble than it's worth.' But he has a right to be jaded. I mean, he is living with Ino, after all.
I can barely stand it. I know it's early, but Sakura-chan probably has to take off soon, and I wouldn't want to miss out on my good morning kiss.
"Mmm... Hey Sakura-chan." She seems surprised that I'm awake. I guess I'm a better actor then I thought. She looks so cute when she's startled. Man, I can't believe we're together.
"Morning, Naruto-kun." Okay, that just didn't sound right.
"I'd rather you just called me Naruto." I've always been just Naruto to Sakura-chan. I like it that way, so why change things? So I smile at her, and she smiles back, shyly.
It's great to know I have such an effect on her.
"Naruto." I love kissing Sakura-chan, just like I am now. It just feels so natural. "Last night was... wow."
"Yeah." You know, if I was smiling any wider, I'd probably pull muscles. And the shy smile on Sakura's face is driving me crazy! "It really was, wasn't it?"
"Mmm-hmm." My god, she's hot. If I don't find something to distract me, I might just have to act on the urges my hormone-riddled body is encouraging my to. Wow, that's a beautiful sunrise.
"Check out the sunrise, Sakura-chan." She jumped when I spoke. Startled her again. Could she get any cuter? But she seemed pretty caught up in me. Like I said, I'm glad I can have such an effect on her. "I don't think I've ever seen one quite like it. It's beautiful, don't you think?"
She really seems entranced by the sunrise. It's like the universe put it there, just for us. "It's amazing."
"It can't even begin to hold a candle to you, though." My god, was that ever cheesy. Hey, is she blushing? She is! "My, Sakura-chan, are you blushing?"
Okay, she's kissing me now. I'm surprised that she's not mad at me. I... Oh, wow. She's sucking on my tongue. I can't believe she's sucking my... Ow! She bit me!
"Whay'd you do that, Sakura-chan?" Time for the Uzumaki super-secret weapon. The puppydog pout. No girls can resist the puppydog.
"Don't tease me." Her voice has this thick, sugary sweetness to it that clearly broadcasts the message 'don't fuck with me', "I should really head home, Naruto. My parents'll be up soon, and they'll be pissed if I'm not home."
"Aww." Time to try the puppydog again. Maybe this time it'll win out. "But what about 'breakfast'?" I can see in her eyes that she knows exactly what kind of breakfast I'm in the mood for.
"Sorry, Naruto. I really can't." Ooh, shot down. This sucks.
"Alright." She looks like she feels guilty "Come by later?" I wish she would stay, but she has a point about her parents. I wouldn't want her to get in trouble because of me.
Suddenly, her eyes glimmer misheviously.
"On second thought, Naruto, 'breakfast' sounds great."
She's staying? I guess she feels the same way about consequences as I do.
Besides, what's a couple more hours anyway?
A/N: Chapter four, ticked off. I figured since I've already gotten twelve reviews for chapter three, I might as well post this now. The next chapter will be in the third person, so it may take a couple of days. Until it's up, enjoy!
Because it is a haiku
Naruto's not mine..
Once again, I'd like to thank you all for your reviews. Being told over and over again that my story is worth continuing really makes me feel good about my writing ability. One reviewer told me this story was too good to not continue.
So to all of my fans, I dedicate this chapter to you.
Once again, this is pretty much a rewrite of chapter three from Naruto's point of view. Next chapter I'll get to the real story. So, enjoy.
To Hell With the Consequences
Written by PHreek-Boi
Chapter Four: A Dream Come True
Well, kit. I must say, I'm impressed.
Nngg... wha? Kyubi? I was sleeping, you know.
How can you be asleep with your lady love next to you?
I'm tired, jackass. Last night was exausting. Really exausting. Who would have thought I'd have it in me? God, how many times did we go, anyway?
I lost count at seven.
Really? That many? I am the man. I gotta admit, though, I never thought me and Sakura would end up here. Of course I always hoped we would. At least since I turned fifteen. It's an amazing feeling, waking up next to the woman you love. And I can't think of another time when I was so happy.
Heh. Sakura thinks I'm still asleep. My forehead's tingling where she just kissed me. It filled with the same warmth and tenderness I'd shown to her over the years. I bet she's wondering how she ever lived without me.
A little full of ourself, are we?
Pshht. Like you know anything, fox. Come on, we just had sex. And I know for a fact that she expressed her enjoyment more than once.
You realize that now you two can't be just friends anymore, right?
Yeah. To be honest, it scares me a little. I mean, what if I blow it? What's going to happen then? Like you said, sfter something as big as this, we can't go back to being friends.
The question is, kit, was it worth it?
Totally. If I could go back in time and do it again, I would. A thousand times over. I love Sakura, and I want to be with her.
Then be with her.
What? No snippy comeback? Jeez, fox, you're losing your edge. Seriously, you wouldn't believe how utterly fantastic I feel, just laying next to her. I can honestly say there hasn't been a time more perfect than this in my life. Ever. If I could have one wish, it'd be that we could stay here, in this moment, forever.
That's so sweet. I think I may be ill.
Gee, thanks fox. Nice to know my happiness sickens you.
Oh, you're very welcome. Say, kit, how do you think people will react when they hear you two are together?
I really don't know. I hope Sasuke's pissed. Or, even better, that he cries. God knows that bastard deserves it, after what he put Sakura-chan through. For once I want to a hurt look on his face, so I can tell him to suck it up and get out of my face.
You've grown a backbone. I'm impressed.
Oh, joy of joys. I've always wanted to gain your approval. Just like I've always wanted to have a tooth pulled without any sort of anaesthetic.
What of her parents? It's been my experience that human parents react poorly to their daughter losing her virginity, especially to a boy they don't like.
You know what? You're a buzz killer. Sakura-chan could get in a lot of trouble because of me. For sure her parents aren't gonna be hapy we're seeing one another. And if they find out about last night, well, I'll probably end up stuffed and mounted over their mantle. But we'll cross that bridge when we come to it. Me and Sakura are together, and they can't do anything to change that.
Uzumaki Sakura has a nice ring to it.
Well, yeah, it kinda does. But I don't think I'm ready to get married. I'm only seventeen. That kind of commitment would require someone of a much higher maturity level then I possess.
Man, I can't wait to tell the guys that me and Sakura-chan hooked up.
Lee's gonna be mad. He's had a crush on Sakura-chan for as long as I've known him. Shikamaru will probably tell him I'm doomed, and that a relationship is 'more trouble than it's worth.' But he has a right to be jaded. I mean, he is living with Ino, after all.
I can barely stand it. I know it's early, but Sakura-chan probably has to take off soon, and I wouldn't want to miss out on my good morning kiss.
"Mmm... Hey Sakura-chan." She seems surprised that I'm awake. I guess I'm a better actor then I thought. She looks so cute when she's startled. Man, I can't believe we're together.
"Morning, Naruto-kun." Okay, that just didn't sound right.
"I'd rather you just called me Naruto." I've always been just Naruto to Sakura-chan. I like it that way, so why change things? So I smile at her, and she smiles back, shyly.
It's great to know I have such an effect on her.
"Naruto." I love kissing Sakura-chan, just like I am now. It just feels so natural. "Last night was... wow."
"Yeah." You know, if I was smiling any wider, I'd probably pull muscles. And the shy smile on Sakura's face is driving me crazy! "It really was, wasn't it?"
"Mmm-hmm." My god, she's hot. If I don't find something to distract me, I might just have to act on the urges my hormone-riddled body is encouraging my to. Wow, that's a beautiful sunrise.
"Check out the sunrise, Sakura-chan." She jumped when I spoke. Startled her again. Could she get any cuter? But she seemed pretty caught up in me. Like I said, I'm glad I can have such an effect on her. "I don't think I've ever seen one quite like it. It's beautiful, don't you think?"
She really seems entranced by the sunrise. It's like the universe put it there, just for us. "It's amazing."
"It can't even begin to hold a candle to you, though." My god, was that ever cheesy. Hey, is she blushing? She is! "My, Sakura-chan, are you blushing?"
Okay, she's kissing me now. I'm surprised that she's not mad at me. I... Oh, wow. She's sucking on my tongue. I can't believe she's sucking my... Ow! She bit me!
"Whay'd you do that, Sakura-chan?" Time for the Uzumaki super-secret weapon. The puppydog pout. No girls can resist the puppydog.
"Don't tease me." Her voice has this thick, sugary sweetness to it that clearly broadcasts the message 'don't fuck with me', "I should really head home, Naruto. My parents'll be up soon, and they'll be pissed if I'm not home."
"Aww." Time to try the puppydog again. Maybe this time it'll win out. "But what about 'breakfast'?" I can see in her eyes that she knows exactly what kind of breakfast I'm in the mood for.
"Sorry, Naruto. I really can't." Ooh, shot down. This sucks.
"Alright." She looks like she feels guilty "Come by later?" I wish she would stay, but she has a point about her parents. I wouldn't want her to get in trouble because of me.
Suddenly, her eyes glimmer misheviously.
"On second thought, Naruto, 'breakfast' sounds great."
She's staying? I guess she feels the same way about consequences as I do.
Besides, what's a couple more hours anyway?
A/N: Chapter four, ticked off. I figured since I've already gotten twelve reviews for chapter three, I might as well post this now. The next chapter will be in the third person, so it may take a couple of days. Until it's up, enjoy!