I'm not sure whether this should be rated "R" for this chapter now. What do
you think? Oh, and, tags didn't show up so well because of the ff.net
server or something...I'm going to try brackets this time...hopefully those
will work better...
Chapter Three: Jailbreak
English Version
Tuesday – Day Two
"Ughh..." Gordon lurched to his feet and slowly opened his eyes. Where was he?
[You're in the county jail. You had passed out from the pain or something, and I took control. Now that you're up, I can begin the fun. Mr. Freeman, I hope you don't mind, but I'm taking control again. ]
[Actually, I do mind. ]
[Too bad. It doesn't matter whether you like it or not. I'm taking control. ] Suddenly, Gordon was drawn back from his mind, and all he could do was look through his eyes, hear through his ears, and smell through his nose.
"Hey! Pigs! Get over here!" G-Man – In – Gordon yelled. A cop idly looked up from his newspaper. "Yeah, you. Put down the donuts and get your lard ass over here!" The cop put down the newspaper and stood up slowly; his finger hovering over his tazer the entire time.
"What is it...Uh..." The cop looked at a sheet of paper. "...Gordon?"
"I just thought you might want to know how you're going to die."
"Oh, I get it. You go, 'Oh, you're going to die,' and I go, 'No, please don't kill me. OK, I'll let you go!'" The cop snorted. "Nice try, but I've been in this business a long time. You can't fool me."
"No, nothing like that. I mean, more like...Aliens killing you." G-Man – In – Gordon's eye's widened. The cop snorted again. Angry, G-Man – In – Gordon gave the cop the finger, and instantly disappeared.
"What the hell?" The cop got up and walked over to the cell. "Hello? Mr. Freeman? Don't make me get the court involved!"
Meanwhile, in the dimension that doesn't exist -~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~
[Where are we now?] Gordon tried to blink. He failed. The G-Man was still in control.
[We're back in the undeveloped dimension.]
[I thought you said it was an undeveloped universe.]
[I changed my mind.]
[Look, whatever. What are we doing here?]
[I want you to meet the Zoc't'vicians. I want you to meet your ultimate doom.]
[Good, so you're going to kill me?]
[No, but I will terribly injure you.]
[But then you won't be able to use me anymore.]
[Actually, Mr. Freeman, I will. I can create a new body, and move both of our minds into it.]
Damn, Gordon thought. [OK, so let's go.]
[Eager to meet your life of eternal pain, Mr. Freeman?]
[No, but I'm tired of you talking.] There was a sudden flash of light, and then, next thing Gordon knew, he was standing in front of a horde of Xen-like creatures.
[Yes, Mr. Freeman, they ARE much like the Xen, aren't they?] Gordon said nothing. The G-Man let out a series of clicks and whistles. Every creature turned to Gordon and began to walk forward. [Oh, I almost forgot.] They were suddenly in the black universe/dimension again. Gordon had his own body back. So did the G-Man.
"What? Why?" Gordon looked at the G-Man, then at his hands, then back at the G-Man.
"I want you to experience the pain yourself. Anyways, you wont be able to run." The G-Man chuckled. "Let's go back to meet your...new life." With that, they were back on the Xen-like planet. A seven-foot tall Zoc't'vician stepped forward and grabbed Gordon.
Gordon cried out, but was soon silenced by being squeezed tightly by the alien with both of its hands. Soon, tears were running down Gordon's cheeks as he was tied to a violent-looking contraption. His legs were tied to ropes, which were attached to a wheel. His arms were tied to wooden planks riddled with holes. From what he could tell, behind every hole was a half-inch metal nail.
Being a scientist, Gordon could see where this was going. Then something happened that he REALLY didn't like. A leather-like headband was put around his head, also with holes. Directly outside the holes were very thin metal needles. Two additional needles came out of the headband and rested in front of his eyes. Everything was mechanical, and would definitely be very painful.
"Well, well, well, Mr. Freeman, isn't this dangerous-looking? Let me assure you...it is. You'll be sobbing for your mommy soon. And when you're almost dead, I'll transport you to the void and make a new one of you. You'll never die. I'll always keep you alive. Once your spirit's broken, and your will's gone, I'll take you back to Earth, and begin the invasion."
"Please...don't do this..." Gordon was having trouble talking between sobs.
"Oh, I almost forgot!" G-Man began to talk to the Zoc't'vician. The alien being nodded, and strapped a last band around Gordon's neck. This band also had two needles on opposite sides of his neck.
"Oh, God...No..." Gordon closed his eyes, and began to try and ignore what was about to happen. The G-Man talked in the alien tongue. Following the order was a slow creaking. The creaking sped up, and turned into a whirring. First, Gordon's legs began to be stretched. Gordon clenched his teeth. He heard and felt one bone pop, then the next. His eyes flew open, and traveled down to his legs. His veins were rupturing, and his legs appeared to be bleeding. They felt like they were bleeding, too. The roller turned one final time, and then stopped. His legs were completely dislocated, and couldn't move. But Gordon could still feel the pain.
"Hurts, doesn't it, Mr. Freeman?" The G-Man chuckled and narrowed his eyes. Gordon feebly nodded. "Well, it's going to get worse. Much worse." The G-Man began to rapidly converse with another alien. The alien responded. Then a nail by his forehead began to spin, and moved closer. It drilled less then an inch into his skull, and stopped. Gordon's face was wet with blood and tears. The nail was pulled out. One at a time, this process happened for every nail around his head. Blood pooled around his feet, and Gordon's muscles began to spasm. Just when Gordon thought it was at it's worst, the needles in front of his eyes began to move forward.
"Oh...God...Not that.... Please, not that..." The needles move very slowly into his eyes. All Gordon could see was red. Blood everywhere. The needles went into Gordon's neck, and he blacked out.
OK, That's all for chapter three. What do you think? It's defiantly more violent than the previous chapters, but...Yeah. OK, please review now!
Chapter Three: Jailbreak
English Version
Tuesday – Day Two
"Ughh..." Gordon lurched to his feet and slowly opened his eyes. Where was he?
[You're in the county jail. You had passed out from the pain or something, and I took control. Now that you're up, I can begin the fun. Mr. Freeman, I hope you don't mind, but I'm taking control again. ]
[Actually, I do mind. ]
[Too bad. It doesn't matter whether you like it or not. I'm taking control. ] Suddenly, Gordon was drawn back from his mind, and all he could do was look through his eyes, hear through his ears, and smell through his nose.
"Hey! Pigs! Get over here!" G-Man – In – Gordon yelled. A cop idly looked up from his newspaper. "Yeah, you. Put down the donuts and get your lard ass over here!" The cop put down the newspaper and stood up slowly; his finger hovering over his tazer the entire time.
"What is it...Uh..." The cop looked at a sheet of paper. "...Gordon?"
"I just thought you might want to know how you're going to die."
"Oh, I get it. You go, 'Oh, you're going to die,' and I go, 'No, please don't kill me. OK, I'll let you go!'" The cop snorted. "Nice try, but I've been in this business a long time. You can't fool me."
"No, nothing like that. I mean, more like...Aliens killing you." G-Man – In – Gordon's eye's widened. The cop snorted again. Angry, G-Man – In – Gordon gave the cop the finger, and instantly disappeared.
"What the hell?" The cop got up and walked over to the cell. "Hello? Mr. Freeman? Don't make me get the court involved!"
Meanwhile, in the dimension that doesn't exist -~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~
[Where are we now?] Gordon tried to blink. He failed. The G-Man was still in control.
[We're back in the undeveloped dimension.]
[I thought you said it was an undeveloped universe.]
[I changed my mind.]
[Look, whatever. What are we doing here?]
[I want you to meet the Zoc't'vicians. I want you to meet your ultimate doom.]
[Good, so you're going to kill me?]
[No, but I will terribly injure you.]
[But then you won't be able to use me anymore.]
[Actually, Mr. Freeman, I will. I can create a new body, and move both of our minds into it.]
Damn, Gordon thought. [OK, so let's go.]
[Eager to meet your life of eternal pain, Mr. Freeman?]
[No, but I'm tired of you talking.] There was a sudden flash of light, and then, next thing Gordon knew, he was standing in front of a horde of Xen-like creatures.
[Yes, Mr. Freeman, they ARE much like the Xen, aren't they?] Gordon said nothing. The G-Man let out a series of clicks and whistles. Every creature turned to Gordon and began to walk forward. [Oh, I almost forgot.] They were suddenly in the black universe/dimension again. Gordon had his own body back. So did the G-Man.
"What? Why?" Gordon looked at the G-Man, then at his hands, then back at the G-Man.
"I want you to experience the pain yourself. Anyways, you wont be able to run." The G-Man chuckled. "Let's go back to meet your...new life." With that, they were back on the Xen-like planet. A seven-foot tall Zoc't'vician stepped forward and grabbed Gordon.
Gordon cried out, but was soon silenced by being squeezed tightly by the alien with both of its hands. Soon, tears were running down Gordon's cheeks as he was tied to a violent-looking contraption. His legs were tied to ropes, which were attached to a wheel. His arms were tied to wooden planks riddled with holes. From what he could tell, behind every hole was a half-inch metal nail.
Being a scientist, Gordon could see where this was going. Then something happened that he REALLY didn't like. A leather-like headband was put around his head, also with holes. Directly outside the holes were very thin metal needles. Two additional needles came out of the headband and rested in front of his eyes. Everything was mechanical, and would definitely be very painful.
"Well, well, well, Mr. Freeman, isn't this dangerous-looking? Let me assure you...it is. You'll be sobbing for your mommy soon. And when you're almost dead, I'll transport you to the void and make a new one of you. You'll never die. I'll always keep you alive. Once your spirit's broken, and your will's gone, I'll take you back to Earth, and begin the invasion."
"Please...don't do this..." Gordon was having trouble talking between sobs.
"Oh, I almost forgot!" G-Man began to talk to the Zoc't'vician. The alien being nodded, and strapped a last band around Gordon's neck. This band also had two needles on opposite sides of his neck.
"Oh, God...No..." Gordon closed his eyes, and began to try and ignore what was about to happen. The G-Man talked in the alien tongue. Following the order was a slow creaking. The creaking sped up, and turned into a whirring. First, Gordon's legs began to be stretched. Gordon clenched his teeth. He heard and felt one bone pop, then the next. His eyes flew open, and traveled down to his legs. His veins were rupturing, and his legs appeared to be bleeding. They felt like they were bleeding, too. The roller turned one final time, and then stopped. His legs were completely dislocated, and couldn't move. But Gordon could still feel the pain.
"Hurts, doesn't it, Mr. Freeman?" The G-Man chuckled and narrowed his eyes. Gordon feebly nodded. "Well, it's going to get worse. Much worse." The G-Man began to rapidly converse with another alien. The alien responded. Then a nail by his forehead began to spin, and moved closer. It drilled less then an inch into his skull, and stopped. Gordon's face was wet with blood and tears. The nail was pulled out. One at a time, this process happened for every nail around his head. Blood pooled around his feet, and Gordon's muscles began to spasm. Just when Gordon thought it was at it's worst, the needles in front of his eyes began to move forward.
"Oh...God...Not that.... Please, not that..." The needles move very slowly into his eyes. All Gordon could see was red. Blood everywhere. The needles went into Gordon's neck, and he blacked out.
OK, That's all for chapter three. What do you think? It's defiantly more violent than the previous chapters, but...Yeah. OK, please review now!