Disclaimer, warnings and review comments: A new section for my fic! I don't own Naruto, but the OC Aoi is mine (big deal...)Beware the OOC-ness and possible grammar/spelling errors.
hujin: I'll mantain my style of paragraphing in this fic. I do know that it gets harder to read (not as hard as a single chunk of text), but my objective is to paragraph when an idea ends and a new one starts. If this had your usual third person point of view, where you aren't allowed to comment (as the storytellerdoes not exist), it wouldn't make sense to paragraph according to ideas. But i'll remember your advice when writing other fics. Back to your review... So you do not mind the OC? The main character of the fic? Congratulations, you did the right thing. Notice that i don't described him; all that i said was his age and name, mostly. Sincerely, he is only a bridge between the reader and the happenings. But don't tell him that or he'll get sad. Thanks for the advice on the lack of characterization; i knew that it wasn't only me that felt it... I'll do my best!
animewatcher: Would you believe that i never, ever truly studied english? (sure, there is the english that they teach at the school,. but it's worth nothing) I dedicate my english to my brother (who did studied), videogames rpg (they are the basis of it) and internet on general (fanfics included, specially for vocabulary). I too think it's going to be good (if it isn't already... That's for you readers to decide).
(sorry for the stupidly large comments, but my first reviewers needed special treatment. Thanks you two!)
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Ninth Chapter - Cutting Triumph
A ninja explained why we had to come back later: "I'm sorry, hokage-sama is with her student, Haruno Sa-- Forget it, hokage-sama is waiting for you." He noticed Sakura-A and realized his mistake. Except that it probably wasn't a mistake; so there must be a Sakura in. So thanks to the clone we quickly entered Tsunade's room.
"I'm in the mid-" Tsunade stood there, with Sakura-N at her side, in front of a book. The scene is much alike to the last time i saw doubles meeting. "Sakura-chan?" Naruto asked. "Hm?" Was the only answer that Sakura-N could give. Then, unexpectedly (it's Naruto, so expect the unexpected), Naruto walked to Sakura-N and hugged her, then he rested his head on her shoulder.
Everyone watched in silence. Sakura-N, however, looked totally puzzled (not that i wouldn't be, if i was her). Then, Naruto broke the hug and started to talk: "This is a Sasuke clone that comes from the same world as my clone. The Sakura clone is from other world, and she almost killed me. Sakura-chan is, uh... er... Sakura-chan! And the blonde is Tsunade baa-chan, sh-- Ow! Okay, she is hokage." The one that interrupted him was, obviously, Tsunade. But now i understand the hug; it was his daily Sakura-chan Cheer Dose. a reinforced one because of the past incident with Sakura-A.
"Hokage-sama, do your world knows a way to traverse dimensions? I need to go back to mine and help my people fight a great evil, called Kyuubi." Sakura-A was on her knees. Tsunade had a horrified look on her face. "Get up. I'm afraid that i cannot help you, but would you mind telling me the story about the demon?" Sakura-A stood up, and started:
"It is a long story. In short, twelve years ago, the most powerful ninja of Konoha, the fourth, battled a nine-tailed demon. He badly injuried the demon, but Kyuubi won and claimed Yondaime's body as his own. Then, he reduced his new himself to the size of a newborn, and began to grow again. During ten years, all the adults believed that the kid was a baby in which the demon was sealed, with the use of a forbidden jutsu. Also, the baby lived normally, since the beast still wasn't in his full power. He was named Naruto. However, after he recovered totally, and even became stronger, he took control of Naruto, and started his vengance. It's been two years since then."
They saw the Kyuubi war; but the older one saw victory. The younger one is living a defeat. So Tsunade must be able to understand Sakura-A's pain. "You are free to stay in Konoha for the time you want. You will be staying at your double's houses. It is okay with you all?" Sasuke-F and Sakura-A nodded. "And Sakura... Enjoy the stay. Relieve yourself from this nightmare called reality and go eat ramen or something like that. I'll do my best to find a way to send you all home."
Now that i remember, that includes me... I've been so focused on the others that i forgot that i'm from another dimension too. "For now, what must we do to help?" Sasuke spoke for the first time. "Leave it to me; if i ever need you, i'll ask." Hokage-sama assured. "Naruto, take them to their new houses." Just before we went out, Sasuke asked: "Is everyone in the houses of their replicas?" This remembers me another thing; why there isn't no other me? "Yes." The oldest in the room answered Sasuke's question.
Twelve o'clock. And walking. "Naruto, can we go first to your home?" I'm sure that i know why Sasuke wants this... "Why?" Dumb question, Naruto. "My Naruto. I want to see him." Didn't i say it was a dumb question? "Well, okay..." And so we four go to Naruto's house. As we are about to enter it, i hold Sakura-A's pulse and decide to try to guess a certain thing:
"Seeing a replica of your worst enemy kissing a replica of your boyfriend isn't a good thing, is it"
"How did you knew...?"
I smiled.
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A/N: Being reviewed is a great feeling, trust me. Besides, it proved that most of the flaws i feared were true (grammar/spelling/characterization), so i'll pay attention now. If you feel that this chapter is better than the others, thank hujin for that. Anyway, the -F/-N/-A notations are finally being useful!
Can you guess how Aoi was able to figure that Sakura-A had Sasuke as her boyfriend? Next chapter it'll be revealed. Also, don't forget the usual review (for the usual reasons) and keep on reading. Last thing; the firstone-shot is already on So those who like extreme fluff and this fic, go read it! And if you want toread a story based in this, review the one-shot and ask for it.
