The Intruder
{Jag's POV}
I saw her first at my home. She was holding a sobbing Cherith, but her own eyes
were blank. At the time, I hadn't realized who she was – I thought she was just
one of Cherith's many friends, trying to give some flimsy excuse of support. I
didn't care, then. I hated her on principle, hated that she was here,
during a time of private, family grief.
I glared at her as I walked past, but she barely seemed to notice. Though the
'Intruder' murmured comforting nothings to my sister, patted her shoulder, and
let Cherith soak her shirt with tears, the 'intruder' just stared at nothing,
appearing to be moving automatically. It didn't occur to me that she might be
grieving for Davin – I just saw her blankness as another insult. She couldn't
even pay any real attention to her friend, I thought.
That night, I punched through a glass window. To this day, I don't know if I
was really aware of it; I only remember being so angry with my older brother,
my idol, for dying, for leaving me, that I struck out. My mother walked in and
saw me staring at my bloody arm. She broke down in tears again, because she
knew why I had done what I had. The girl appeared again, then, and glared at
me. Now I know it was because in her own grief she hadn't the patience to see
me hurt my mother, but then her derisive look fanned my hatred. Her distant
brandy eyes were judging me, shaming me. She was probably mad because I woke
her up, I thought crossly.
I was blind to how she soothed my poor, broken mother, who was usually so
strong, and how she supported my mother to her room. I ignored the way the two
embraced, but if a stranger had walked by, they probably would have mistaken
the two for a mother and daughter saying goodnight.
Another reason to hate the then-anonymous intruder.
When my mother was sleeping once more, the girl grabbed me by the arm and
dragged me down to the kitchen, where she crisply bandaged my wound. The
silence between us was cold, our distaste for the other heightening the tension
to almost unbearable levels. Still, when she looked at me with her empty eyes,
I thought I saw a spark of empathy.
I hated her for being able to sympathize with my pain although my hatred was
probably obvious even to the rocks in my mother's garden.
The next morning was Davin's funeral and I was a basket case. I locked myself
in my room, swearing viciously at anyone and everyone, refusing to go the
funeral. Logically, I knew Davin was gone, but I didn't want to face it – couldn't
face it. Though my father pounded on my door and demanded that I come in a
broken voice that I had never heard him use before, though my mother pleaded,
and though the cold voice of the intruder told me that if I didn't come out she
would fry my 'cowardly, fair-haired, stubborn ass, Chiss-wannabe brains', I
defied reason for once in my life.
I couldn't go to the funeral – if I did, I would break down.
Finally they left, though I had a large, blackened hole in my door from when
the intruder took her blaster to my door. My father stopped her (though he only
seemed to be doing it because it was the 'right' thing to do) before she got
in, however.
I can't explain what I did during the two-hour period that I spent locked up in
my room. I think I threw things (with the 'Intruder' as my imagined target), I
probably argued with my brother as if he were still there, and more than likely
I screamed at myself for being unable to save Davin.
The only thing I remember clearly is that I broke into Davin's room. I went
over his things, looked at the old holos that cluttered the room, studied the
unfinished homework piled on his desk. A datapad came to my attention and I
picked it up. A quick scan identified it as a letter and, looking over my
shoulder as if expecting my brother to burst in, demanding that I explain what
I was doing, I read it.
It was addressed to 'Jay', a familiar enough name. Davin had had scores of
friends, but his closest friend, he had claimed, was a New Republic girl named
Jaina Solo. The two had met through some mishap several years back. Something
to do with Davin stowing away on a ship and almost being thrown into jail. I
hadn't met the girl myself, as my schooling and piloting kept me away from home
often. I recall noticing that Davin's face would always get soft and content
whenever he brought up 'his' Jaina. I hated and loved her, for that. Hated her
for taking up such a special place in my brother's heart, as if we were
competing for the biggest chunk of Davin's heart. Loved her for making him so
happy, for – probably – giving him the love that no one else could offer him.
The letter's topics ranged from asking if she was okay, to how her family was
dealing with the war, to talk about some guy named Zekk, and planning their
next meeting. A yearning to be there with her, helping her fight against "those
kriffing 'Vong" was expressed a couple times. The concluding paragraph became
more personal, however, and I put the data card down, a little ashamed of my
nosiness.
The sound of a speeder motor broke into my thoughts, and I didn't have to look
outside to know that my family was returning from the funeral. The urge to run,
to hide from them and friends' pitying expressions filled me, and I retreated
out the backdoor before anyone even opened the front door.
I wandered about the grounds until I found myself at the clearing where they
had buried my brother. I hadn't wanted to see the grave, hadn't wanted anything
to do with it, but my feet were guided by something other than my conscious,
rational mind.
I stopped abruptly while I was still amongst the trees. The reason for my halt
was not hesitance to see Davin's grave, but from the sight that met my
bewildered eyes.
In a sobbing heap by my brother's tombstone, the 'intruder' had broken out of
her numbness.
I don't know how long I stood there, watching her cry in a way that I could
not. When at last her weeping eased, she wiped her eyes and stilled. "You can
come out, you know," she whispered, causing me to start. I hadn't known that my
presence had been noticed.
When I didn't answer, she shifted, so that she was looking at me. "I was just…I
needed to say my goodbye privately, I guess." Her voice was hoarse from crying.
She slanted away from me, her fingers reaching up to trace the characters on
the tombstone. I wanted to blast her fingers for that; Davin was my
brother – why should a stranger be able to grieve when I couldn't?
"Why are you here?" I demanded, stepping into the clearing. "You're not from
the Chiss colony." I realized it only now.
She shook her head and smiled crookedly; there was more bleakness than humour
in the gesture. "Dav and I…we were very close." She straightened suddenly, her
eyes catching mine hesitantly. "He talked about you lots. He liked you best of
his siblings, you know."
I knew; I hated that she did, too. "Who are you?"
"Jaina." She looked away from me; now, I know that she was hiding a new set of
tears. "Dav – Dav called me 'Jay', though. You'd know me by that name."
I froze as everything suddenly made sense. Thrawn's teeth. So this…this was
Davin's best friend. This was the girl he'd fallen in love with, if the last
bit of that kriffing letter was any indication. And I had hated her for the
spark of empathy she felt for me.
"I apologize, Miss, I – I didn't realize…" I stuttered awkwardly. We had never
met before this.
We should have.
She smiled wanly. "Yeah, well. You were never home, were you?" Was there
bitterness in her tone? To this day, I don't know for sure.
"I guess not."
She stood, retreating behind her mask of impassiveness once more. Her eyes
lingered a long moment on Davin's grave, her fist clenched, and I knew that her
grieving, while hidden, would not be over for a long time. "I should go. Let
you say good-bye; he was your brother, after all." She turned slowly, heading
back for the house.
"Wait!"
She paused, but did not look at me. "Yes?"
I swallowed. "When are you leaving?"
"I have to be back for a mission in a few days. I'll need to leave right away
to be there on time."
I nodded, looking from Davin's grave, to his best friend. He loved you! Do
you know that? I wanted to ask her. I didn't. "There's a letter for you, on
Davin's desk," I offered instead. "I think it's finished – I didn't really read
it." At least, not all of it, I amended silently. "He'd want you to have
it."
"Thank you." The words were quiet, but she looked over her shoulder once, and I
almost drowned in the gratitude that filled her eyes. "I'll be sure to…pick it
up." She left then; perhaps she understood that while she was there – the very
girl that I had practically competed with for my brother's love and attention –
I could never grieve for Davin.
When I returned, she was gone, and so was the letter.
She left a card with the words "Thank you" on my pillow.
Finally, I cried.
Replies to Reviews :D:
Garnet Turner – thanks :D hopefully I'll be posting pretty regularly…I have a few of these written already, so I just need to space 'em out and then post them :)
Jaina – I know :( I'm so mean…originally I was going to start just with this 'viggie' (The Intruder), but then I thought I should introduce dav properly. Unfortunately, that means I had to break a few hearts, especially on JC :| :P
~TJF
