Thank for your review ! I wrote till chapter 28 and the story isn't finished yet. Hope you'll enjoy. It's writing at the past tense after a few chapters but I was lazy to change in the first chapters, lol. I'm not a native speaker.
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CHAPTER 3
" I think I'm pregnant ! No, I'm sure I'm pregnant ! That
's not that hard to say. There aren't many ways to say that. I'll
tell him tomorrow " Shelby thinks on her way to her dorm.
The next morning they go to the breakfast. Scott's been waiting for Shelby
for a few minutes in front of the door. He calls her when she arrives. She
stops in front of him and they kiss.
Sc : So what did you want to tell me yesterday evening ?
« Oh, I forgot » she thinks.
S : Huh…
Sc : Hurry up Shelby, we don't have the entire day… They're waiting for
us inside. Or we'll be interrupted by Peter again like yesterday.
S : I…
Sc : You what ?
S : I think I'm pregnant. No…
Sc : No ! But what are you talking about ? I'm confused !
S : Scott, I'm pregnant.
We can see panic on Scott's face. He would never have thought about that !
Sc : You're joking, right ?
S : No
Sc : What ? But how ? You're sure ?
S : Calm down !
Sc : Calm down ? Easy to say ! That's funny … no, that's not…
S : I had lots of nauseas those last days and it became stronger yesterday.
And I went sick again.
Sc : Yes, it's the fish.
S : No it was a pretext not to have questions to answer.
Sc : And you…
S : I had a pregnancy test which was positive so I'm pregnant.
Sc : Oh my God…
Peter opens the door and see the theirs face.
P : Are you coming ? We're waiting for you inside. You know it's
breakfast time !
Shelby enters before Scott and Peter follows. He knows something's
wrong with those kids.
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