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After they had left, she stared at the clean white business card…until her eyes filled with tears and it blurred her vision.
"But why?" She thought. "Is it because of my appearance?" she wondered, remember the slim, tall and striking Isabella bitch who was all over Draco.
She peered down at her chest. It was surprisingly quite flat. She remembered Isabella.
Her chest was pretty big, and of course, Italians HAVE big boobs…
Hermione stood up and placed herself in front of the full-length mirror, examining herself.
She had wasted away for the last couple of years, gradually thinning and thinning until she became no more than skin and bones. She was quite short, but not stout. Her baggy sweater hid most of her physical appearance.
She had waited for the last ten years, and then he returns…just with another woman.
She couldn't take it.
All the memories...
As a child, she knew Draco. Their parents were friends, and as a result, they did everything together. In fact, Draco was the first boy to see her naked! She had their first kiss when she was only 7 years old, and at 10 years old, they declared that they would be together forever.
When he left to university, he was only 18, and she was 17. They had dated countless times, and had many kisses. She was distressed after he left to America, and she didn't have the money to study overseas. In the end, she finished university, just barely, and decided to work. All this while, she had still been deeply in love with him, and now…this had to happen…
She could do nothing but cry.
She wept for a few more hours, and then with a lot of thinking and with a resolute smile, she picked up the phone and dialed the number on the business card.
She got the machine.
'You have reached Mr. Draco Malfoy's office. Please leave a message after the beep...BEEP."
Hermione hesitated, but finally spoke with a wobbly voice.
"Draco...can you meet me at the cafe on 5th avenue? Tomorrow at 3pm. I need to talk to you..." she mumbled and then slowly put down the phone.
She thought she would never stop crying.
hehe. There's a lot of moping around, just to keep you entertained (maybe not, but STILL!) action will come later in the story...