Live2Write4Ever
2005-05-12
ch 3, signed:Hey, thought I'd give you another review. Nice start. I don't think Wanda's fat but that's my opinion. You're doing a great job with English. And I feel special cuz I can actually understand some of the Spanish you say! I'm taking Spanish at school and this is my first year. Can't write a fanfic in Spanish yet tho...well anyways great job. Hope you update soon, por favor:)
Ginger Charpentier
2005-04-11
ch 3, signed:
Hiya mate! It's not that your story is bad or something. It's just, I can't imagine Juan thinking that Wanda's a nerd or something...He loves her
Anyway keep on writing mate!
Thanks for the reviews, people!
For Live2Write4Ever: I personally don´t think that Wanda is fat too. But you know, those popular guys love to exaggerate... Really good that you´re understanding my spanish, because I don´t officialy learn it, just know something because my mother´s family is from Spain, and yeah, my native language (Portuguese, I´m brazilian :p) is a bit similar to spanish. Like dutch is similar to german. Thank you for your review and the kind words, muito obrigado, or gracias!
For Ginger Charpentier: Yes, Juandissimo actually loves Wanda, but how he start to do it, we will see in a future chapter!
Now, to the next chapter!
When Juandissimo gets closer of Wanda, she looks angry.
What do you want?- Said Wanda.
-Ahn… I… I´m sorry.- Said Juandissimo.
-Good for you.- Wanda continues to eat chocolate and to read her book.
" You can talk this Juan, you can¡Usted puede!" Think Juandissimo. "It´s just calm down and start to talk slowly and cleary. Let´s begin…" -Iloveyouwandaijustdidnttalkthisbeforebecauseimtooshy!- Yelled Juandissimo.
-Sorry?- Ask Wanda. -I… I love you Wanda. "Great. Now I oficially started this, and I can´t give up. ¡Gracias, animal estúpido!" Think him, sarcastilly.
Wanda blinks for at least five minuts.
-Are you kidding me, right?- Said Wanda, seriously.
-No! No, it´s true! Sure!
-Oh, yeah. And I´m a Anti-Fairy.- She makes a dumb face.- Look, I´m Anti-Wanda and I eat with my feets! Oh, Please. This joke is too old. Go and return to Blonda.
-No, it´s true now! Sure!- Juandissimo don´t know what more he can talk to convince her.
-Sure, it´s true. You can prove?- Said Wanda, sarcastlly.
-I can!
At this moment, Juandissimo kiss Wanda in her lips. A fast kiss, but Wanda looks totally surprised.
-You… you kissed me!
-Yeah. You believe me now?
-Yes…- This can´t be true. Juandissimo kissed her! And this wasn´t a dream!
"Yuck! I kissed a loser! And the weirdest thing is that this wasn´t bad at all. This was just… strange." Think Juandissimo.
-I can´t believe…- Said Wanda.
-You don´t need other kiss to believe, need?- Said Juandissimo, impatiently.
-This would be good… I mean, No, I don´t need. This was enough. I believe you.- said Wanda, smiling.
-That´s good. I will look for you after my English class. Don´t look for me, I will look for you! Remember it, ok? Bye!- Juandissimo flies away.
-Bye…- Wanda start to pinch herself, to have sure that don´t was another dream. But this is not necessary. The kiss was surely real!
Juandissimo flies the more fast he could. "How I can leave that happens with me?" Thinks him. "But I start it, and I will finish! This is only tree days! And three days isn´t too much…" -Mr. Magnifico! You´re excessively late!- Yelled his english teacher.
-Sorry! I really don´t want, I mean, a thing happens with me and… -The class is over.- Said the teacher.
-¿Qué?- Yelled Juandissimo.
-You hear. You don´come for your class! What you´re thinking? That you can do all you want here? Of the next time, I will give you one detention! Don´t repeat this never more!
-But…Sí, profesor .- Juandissimo flies slowly out of the classroom thinking of how he hate Willis. At this moment, and on the front of Blonda and the popular girls, he see Wanda running to reach him.
-Hey! Juan! Come here!- Yelled Wanda, running.
-Wanda! What do you think you´re doing?- Juandissimo whispered, nervously.
-Juan… -Not now!- Juandissimo jumps into a bush.- Jump to there too!
Wanda jumps too.
-Uh, Juan… Why we are hiding in this bush?
-Who said we´re hiding? Of course we´re not hiding! We´re… uh…Talking in bushes is the newest fashion way to talk, you don´t know?- Said Juandissimo, wishing that Blonda has not seen him with Wanda.
-No…- Said Wanda.- But is good that you told me.
-What do you want, Wanda?- Said a tired Juandissimo.
-How come "What do you want"? I only want to stay with you!- Yelled Wanda, louder that Juandissimo wish.
-Yes, I know, I know, but I must stay with you now? I mean, I must go home...- Whispered Juandissimo.
-Aww… Do you really must? Because I think we could go to…- Started Wanda.
-Well, go first. I will meet you in the corner. I must do something before… -Ok. See you later, Juan!- Wanda jumped out of the bush.
Juandissimo wait for a few minutes and jumped out too.
-Hi, Juan!- Yelled Blonda, running to talk with him.- Where you was? I was looking for you!
-Sorry, Blonda. But I was… At this moment, Blonda breathed hardly and sneezes.
-Atchoo!
-Uh, Blonda? Are you feeling well?
-No. I´m with a allergic reation. Do you… Atchoo! Do you jumped into a bush or something like this?- Said Blonda, looking angry.
-Yes… I mean, no! Of course not!- Yelled Juandissimo.
-I´m… Atchoo! I´m allergic of a certain kind of bushes. Atchoo! Oh, great. I will must stay in my house for a few days… -Really? I mean, oh, poor you!- Said Juandissimo- I will visit you in your house. Now, I must go, bye.
-Bye… Juandissimo is acting weird today…- Thinked Blonda.