Hi guys this is a message for WhiteBoy50000: I know this story is not very
interesting I use to not be real into it and I didn't like it that much but with the new
Twist that I have planed for this I think it might turn out okay.
And if you can I'd like you to keep reviewing I like a challenge especially when its to make someone like my story.
~For any one~
Well I still need more reviews on who should die right now I have 1 for Sango any one else want
to review and tell me? I can't add more chapters until I know who's going to die.
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Kagome woke up in the middle of the night after hearing someone's voice, but she didn't catch what it said. She looked around to see everyone sleeping still except Hiei. She moved over and sat on Koenma's sofa to read. Hiei noticed her and decided to join her.
~Hiei's Thoughts~
(Wow I never noticed how much I like Kagome)
(Shit did I just say that?)
(Why me?)
(Stupid demon instincts)
~Authors Pov. ~
"Why are you awake?" Hiei asked Kagome
"I thought I heard someone" replied Kagome as she looked up from her book.
"Oh" Hiei murmured
"Um Kagome.. do you like Kurama?" Hiei asked in such a low voice if Kagome was any further away she might not have heard it.
"He's a good friend, but not in the way that you are implying" Kagome answered back with a tint of blush on her checks.
~Kagome's Thoughts~
(Amazing he's really opening up to me)
(Maybe I could fall in love with him)
(No, no bad Kagome he's Kizu's)
(But he's so cute and he seems to like me)
(NO NO NO)
~Normal Pov. ~
Kagome was taken out of her thoughts by Hiei asking her something.
"Um. Kagome..er.. are you seeing anyone?" Hiei Asked in a low and shaky voice.
Kagome blushed again. "No I'm not seeing anyone. Why do you ask?" Kagome said in a squeaky voice.
"Um.er.. Willyougooutwithme?" Hiei blurted out really fast.
"What!" said a very confused Kagome.
~Kagome's Thoughts~
(OMG did he just ask me out?)
(What should I do?)
(Man I really like him, but he's Kizu's)
(I'll just accept and figure it out later)
~Normal Pov. ~
"Um sure Hiei" Kagome said a little shakily.
"Really?!" Hiei asked
"Yeah sure" Kagome said while blushing 5 different shades of red.
But little did they know a fox kitsune was listening to their conversation.
~Kurama's Thoughts~
(No.. I really liked her)
(So go get her back)
(Shut up Yoko I can't do that she wants to be with Hiei)
(You're hopeless)
~Normal Pov. ~
Hiei then realized how close his body was to Kagomes. His body started to work by it's self. His demon instinct took over and in a flash Hiei was kissing Kagomes. Kagome at first was stunned but started to kiss back. Then while Kagome was kissing Hiei a picture of Kizu flash in her head. Kagome broke away from the kiss.
"I'm sorry Hiei I just can't go out with you."
"Why?" Hiei half asked half pleaded.
~Hiei's Thoughts~
(Why can't she?)
(I think I'm in love with her)
(Why am I showing my emotions to a worthless human?)
(She's not human remember?)
(And you love her a lot)
~Normal Pov. ~
"Because... I can't" Kagome said with tears coming down her face.
Kagome then ran back to her sleeping bag and curled up into a little ball. (Okay imagine a huge room in Koenma's spirit world place and all of the characters are sleeping in there in sleeping bags.)
~Kurama's thoughts~
(Yes she turned him down)
(Yeah but what is she dose the same to us Yoko?)
(She won't I know she's a good kid)
~Normal Pov. ~
Kagome eventually fell back to sleep. (It's not morning yet). And left Hiei to sit on the roof and cry for the rest of the night (Didn't know he was so weak oh well it's my story). And left a fox to his thoughts.
~Kurama's Thoughts~
(I will make you mine Kagome)
~The End~ (at least of chapter 7)
Well there is part of the twist anyone see it coming? It will get even more twisted trust me. Okay I think this story is going to be a Kagome/Kurama I'm not quit sure but I'm leaning towards it. And I still need to know who is going to die: Kagome? Sango? Or Kizu? Oh yeah and this story might get sad a bit just to war you. Please review
Ja ne
~Ryoko
interesting I use to not be real into it and I didn't like it that much but with the new
Twist that I have planed for this I think it might turn out okay.
And if you can I'd like you to keep reviewing I like a challenge especially when its to make someone like my story.
~For any one~
Well I still need more reviews on who should die right now I have 1 for Sango any one else want
to review and tell me? I can't add more chapters until I know who's going to die.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Kagome woke up in the middle of the night after hearing someone's voice, but she didn't catch what it said. She looked around to see everyone sleeping still except Hiei. She moved over and sat on Koenma's sofa to read. Hiei noticed her and decided to join her.
~Hiei's Thoughts~
(Wow I never noticed how much I like Kagome)
(Shit did I just say that?)
(Why me?)
(Stupid demon instincts)
~Authors Pov. ~
"Why are you awake?" Hiei asked Kagome
"I thought I heard someone" replied Kagome as she looked up from her book.
"Oh" Hiei murmured
"Um Kagome.. do you like Kurama?" Hiei asked in such a low voice if Kagome was any further away she might not have heard it.
"He's a good friend, but not in the way that you are implying" Kagome answered back with a tint of blush on her checks.
~Kagome's Thoughts~
(Amazing he's really opening up to me)
(Maybe I could fall in love with him)
(No, no bad Kagome he's Kizu's)
(But he's so cute and he seems to like me)
(NO NO NO)
~Normal Pov. ~
Kagome was taken out of her thoughts by Hiei asking her something.
"Um. Kagome..er.. are you seeing anyone?" Hiei Asked in a low and shaky voice.
Kagome blushed again. "No I'm not seeing anyone. Why do you ask?" Kagome said in a squeaky voice.
"Um.er.. Willyougooutwithme?" Hiei blurted out really fast.
"What!" said a very confused Kagome.
~Kagome's Thoughts~
(OMG did he just ask me out?)
(What should I do?)
(Man I really like him, but he's Kizu's)
(I'll just accept and figure it out later)
~Normal Pov. ~
"Um sure Hiei" Kagome said a little shakily.
"Really?!" Hiei asked
"Yeah sure" Kagome said while blushing 5 different shades of red.
But little did they know a fox kitsune was listening to their conversation.
~Kurama's Thoughts~
(No.. I really liked her)
(So go get her back)
(Shut up Yoko I can't do that she wants to be with Hiei)
(You're hopeless)
~Normal Pov. ~
Hiei then realized how close his body was to Kagomes. His body started to work by it's self. His demon instinct took over and in a flash Hiei was kissing Kagomes. Kagome at first was stunned but started to kiss back. Then while Kagome was kissing Hiei a picture of Kizu flash in her head. Kagome broke away from the kiss.
"I'm sorry Hiei I just can't go out with you."
"Why?" Hiei half asked half pleaded.
~Hiei's Thoughts~
(Why can't she?)
(I think I'm in love with her)
(Why am I showing my emotions to a worthless human?)
(She's not human remember?)
(And you love her a lot)
~Normal Pov. ~
"Because... I can't" Kagome said with tears coming down her face.
Kagome then ran back to her sleeping bag and curled up into a little ball. (Okay imagine a huge room in Koenma's spirit world place and all of the characters are sleeping in there in sleeping bags.)
~Kurama's thoughts~
(Yes she turned him down)
(Yeah but what is she dose the same to us Yoko?)
(She won't I know she's a good kid)
~Normal Pov. ~
Kagome eventually fell back to sleep. (It's not morning yet). And left Hiei to sit on the roof and cry for the rest of the night (Didn't know he was so weak oh well it's my story). And left a fox to his thoughts.
~Kurama's Thoughts~
(I will make you mine Kagome)
~The End~ (at least of chapter 7)
Well there is part of the twist anyone see it coming? It will get even more twisted trust me. Okay I think this story is going to be a Kagome/Kurama I'm not quit sure but I'm leaning towards it. And I still need to know who is going to die: Kagome? Sango? Or Kizu? Oh yeah and this story might get sad a bit just to war you. Please review
Ja ne
~Ryoko