Authors note: well it's the next chapter and I hope the story is getting better it is really hard to type up your ideas up.
Disclaimer: The song I used here is Kiss from a Rose by Seal(yea that's right) hey I think it works well with the story it'd like your opinions on how it worked with the story it is actually a beautiful song.
Middleton University Girls' dormitory. (The same night)
Kim Possible and her roommate Monique have just ended their all night study session and are getting ready for some well deserved sleep.
"Man I never should have taken this psychology class I heard rumors it would be rough, oh well thanks for helping with my studies Kim". Monique says while rubbing her eyes.
"Its no big Monique glad to help, I took a psychology prep class back in high school".
Then she gives her friend a sly look "if you knew the class was so hard, then why did you sign up for it?" she asks already knowing the answer had to revolve around some boy
"Well if you must know miss nosy, there was the cutest guy signing up for the class and I got caught up staring at his gorgeousness. Before I knew it I had signed up for the class too.
Kim starts laughing at the truth of the matter "Well what's his name anyway?"
"I think its Chris but what I do know is he has the most gorgeous blue eyes" Monique replies as she seems to be lost in a trance remembering the boy.
Kim chuckles again "it's good to see you've got your priorities straight".
Monique tosses a pillow at her and says "I'm sorry we all can't be lovely dovey married couples like you and Ron, speaking of which I believe it's been almost a year since you two got together".
"Yea" Kim says quietly reflecting on this "time really flies by, it's been a great year though"
"At first I was always afraid this wouldn't work and ruin our relationship, but it seems that our bond just continues to grow everyday". She says as she lies down on her bed.
"Awww, that's so beautiful" Monique says lying down on her own bed
"It might be too soon to think about this, but right now I couldn't see myself with anybody else".
There was a brief silence in the room as both girls began reflecting on the impact of this statement. Moments later Monique speaks up.
"Well how far have you two gone, have you guys gone to the next level yet?" Monique asks.
"No, I'm just not ready for that yet, I mean not emotionally ready I'll know when the time is right". Kim replies after thinking about it for awhile.
"How does Ron feel about that, you can't tell me it's never come up he is a guy" Monique inquires.
"Actually it has and it really brought our relationship a step forward" Kim says as she begins to tell Monique the story
"It was six months after the prom, during the Middleton founders' day festival; we were watching the fireworks on lot's hill. It was beautiful night and the hill was overlooking the town, we had driven up there and had left the car radio on as we watched the fireworks.
"That sounds so romantic" says Monique practically in tears.
"It gets better" says Kim smiling.
Kim rests next to Ron as they lie on the grass listening to the music; suddenly I'll Be comes on the radio.
"Oh my god I love this song, it's so beautiful" says Kim.
Ron in mock shock replies "Seal, Kim you might as well put on some Kenny G. I mean you can fill an Oak tree with that much sap".
Kim looks at Ron sternly "and what is wrong with this song it's sweet and it's about real love".
Ron continues to tease her "Kim you are such a girl, always wishing for your knight in shining armor to carry you to some romantic wonderland, well to bad this is the real world and things don't work that way".
"I guess your right Ron" she says "I should forget about it since I have a bf that doesn't have a romantic bone in his body".
Ron seeing this as a challenge grabs her and begins tickling her "not romantic huh we'll see about that" he says.
While he is tickling her, they roll down the hill and when they come too a stop Ron lands on top of her, he then notices how much she glows in the moonlight and as he brushes her hair away from them he gets lost in her green eyes.
There used to be a greying tower alone on the sea.
You became the light on the dark side of me.
Love remained a drug that's the high and not the pill
"She's so beautiful" Ron thinks, being unable to resist he begins to kiss her passionately, enticed by her sweet fragrance
But did you know,
That when it snows,
My eyes become large and,
The light that you shine can be seen
Kim accepts the embrace kissing him back she wraps her arms around him and pulls him closer as they become lost to the music and the night. Ron's hand explores the rest of her body as they continued to kiss. This was the heaviest and most physical it had ever gotten between them as they caress each other's body with great passion.
Baby,
I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the grey.
...kiss from a rose on the grey.
Ooh,
The more I get of you,
Ooh...
Stranger it feels, yeah.
And now that your rose is is in bloom.
A light hits the gloom on the grey
A few minutes later Ron breaks the kiss he wasn't sure he was ready for this, but if it was what she wanted he wouldn't let his fears hold them back.
KP are you sure about this" he looks into her eyes "is this ok with you?" he asks
She isn't sure herself if she is emotionally ready for this next step, but she was too scared and ashamed to admit this too him.
"But this what couples do" she thinks, "Ron has been so good to me if he wants this then I'll just accept this"
"Yes I am" she says to Ron finally and closes her eyes.
Ron takes this cue and reaches his hand under her shirt and resumes the intense kissing. As he is about to attempt to remove her dress he sees a single tear escape from beneath her closed eyelids. Seeing this Ron somehow knows the truth immediately, and feels a slight pain in his heart. He then rolls off her without saying a word and lays on his back next to her as they were before any of it had started.
There is so much a man can tell you,
..there...woa...
So much he can say.
there's so much inside.
You remain,
you...
My power, my pleasure, my pain, baby
To me you're like a growing addiction that I can't deny.. yeah.
Won't you tell me is that healthy, baby?
Kim is obviously shocked by the sudden stop "Ron what's wrong" she asks
Ron avoids her eyes and looks up at the stars "you know I think I'm coming down with a cold, it's probably best if we stop"
Kim could see through his lie and continues to protest "Why did you stop Ron, tell me the truth".
But did you know,
That when it snows,
My eyes become large and,
The light that you shine can be seen
Ron is silent for a few minutes, and then finally speaks in a more serious tone.
"Don't ever do something like that again" he says to her forcefully.
Kim is shocked; Ron had never talked to her that way before this was definitely a first.
"Kim I know you always wanted your first time to be just right, and if you weren't ready why didn't you just tell me do you think that low of me that I wouldn't understand or that I didn't care about your feelings at all".
"It would have been a terrible mistake if I kept going; it's feels like I was just about to force myself on you".
"Ron I'm sorry" she says looking down at the ground.
He then grabs her down toward him until they're eye to eye "if you're not ready I'm not ready, don't ever force yourself to do something of this magnitude if you don't feel right about it, even… even if it's for me".
Kim then begins to tear up a little as she rests her head on Ron's chest.
"Thank you" she says while lying on his warm body so close that she could he hear his heartbeat.
Baby,
I've...
I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the grey.
been... kissed from a rose on the grey.
Ooh, the more I get of you
...ooh...the..
Stranger it feels, yeah
stranger it feels, ...yeah.
Now that your rose is in bloom.
A light hits the gloom on the grey.
After several more minutes of silence Ron breaks it again.
"Kim" he says
"Yea Ron" she says still enjoying the warmth of his body.
"That was the hardest decision I have ever made in my entire life" he tells her.
Hearing this revelation Kim starts laughing.
"You think that's funny, I am really doubting my manhood here". He says amused that she was laughing so hard
There is so much a man can tell you,
..there...woa...
So much he can say.
there's so much inside.
You remain
you...
My power, my pleasure, my pain.
To me you're like a growing addiction that I can't deny, yeah
Won't you tell me is that healthy, baby.
Soon they both break out laughing.
"Here's what I'll do for you Ron, we can go to Bueno Nacho, and you can have all you can eat my teat".
"Sounds good" says Ron smiling but he remains lying on the ground now with his legs crossed.
"Okay you are not moving I thought that would have gotten you up and running" she says
Ron face turns red "uh... I don't think I'll be able to get up for awhile, at least for another few minutes"
"Why?" She says "What would keep you from….. OH" she exclaims as she realizes why his legs were crossed
"Yea" replies Ron
"But it's been at least ten minutes since we stopped" she says in amazement blushing now just as hard as Ron was
"Trust me I know, let's just lay here for a couple of more minutes"
"Alright" she replies contently and lays a light kiss on his lips
Yes I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the grey
I've...been kissed from a rose on the grey.
Ooh, the more I get of you
...ooh...the..
Stranger it feels, yeah
stranger it feels. ...yeah.
And now that your rose is in bloom
aah-ee-aah...
A light hits the gloom on the grey
He smiles at her "you know that's not improving the situation at all, I think you're making it worse".
He then starts laughing "maybe it would help if you left all together"
"We just laid there laughing for the rest of the night", Kim says to Monique returning from the memories of that night.
Monique sighs "you are so lucky girl I wish I could meet a sweet loving guy like Ron".
"Yea I am lucky, well goodnight Monique".
"Goodnight Kim" she says back.
Five minutes later Ron busts through the door of the room and turns on the lights.
The girls become startled, as Ron stumbles into the room.
"Ron do you know what time it is" Kim asks, then her attention turns to his tattered clothes covered in dust and his swollen face where he took a punch from one of the androids.
"What happened to you Ron, you look terrible have you been fighting.
"No time KP, Yo Mo' can you excuse us for a moment? Kim my room now"
"What, why can't this wait until morning" she says rubbing her eyes.
"No time" he says again "there is too much going on" he grabs her arm and begins pulling her out the door.
"Ron I'm not dressed properly to go out" she exclaims
"Don't worry its late no one's going to see you, this is an emergency any way".
As they disappear through the door Monique can't help think about what that commotion was all about.
Authors note: well this chap was shorter than chap 2 and man love scenes are just as hard as action scenes to write, but I think it's a good transition piece remember to review guys I'd like a little more feed back especially any tips
