First of all I have to thank all of my reviewers and those of you who have read the story but didn't review. That fact that you gave the story a chance makes you deserve a thank you from me. Kim Possible has such great characters who have so much depth its really fun to write fics about them. It just goes to show you how great the show is.
Looking back on the story I realize there was so much more I could have done. I wrote Through the years to see if I could tell a story, I wrote the vengaza arc to see if I could keep a story going over a long period of time. Both of the stories were stepping stones for me.
So I've come to a decision while I'm posting up my next story (which I am working on right now look for it soon) I will also be rewriting this story, because there was so much more I wanted to add but I didn't think I had enough skill to do it justice.
Rewriting the story I will do a couple of things.
Add more depth to June's character (give her a little more in the back story department and personality) i will do the same for Astuzia
Introduce more character from the GJ's base early on( for example I'll give more scenes to Johnson, McEwing and the old doctor earlier in the story).
Try to keep theKim and Ron in character a whole lot more( I did my best, and I think I did a decent job of it but what do I now).
Severely improve the first chap (I think it may have turned most people off before they read the rest of the story).
And of course grammar and spelling corrections
OK so thats it, Thanks again. Look out for my next story and Kim Possible: the vengaza arc director's cut.
P.S Vengaza is dutch for Vengeance yeah its corny but I couldn't think of a better name