JUST RE-DOING MY SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES!!!!!! NOTHING NEW HERE MOVE ON THOSE WHO'VE ALREAY READ THIS!!!!!!!!!
CW: (cowers) oh god please don't hit me my faithfull wonderful reviewers! I know I said I would update on Wednesday but I couldn't think of anything good and also I got distracted with stupid crappy induction week at college XO yea its stinks but im getting to know new people slowly also theres this one guy whos a twin...(drools)
Sora and Riku: (puts up big umbrella from drool)
CW: he's so cute! Well he is to me anyway and he wants to be an animator and fly to Japan! XD hes my dream guy! And he has a twin for fucks sake! I've never known any twins before so im happy about that...sadly we are both shy (especially him but that's what makes him so dark and mysterious!) im trying to talk to him but I cant think of anything good to say around him and completely embarrass myself in front of him! anyway I made him laugh and smile! I sed for him to pack me in his suitcase when he flies to Japan! XD I must get to know him more and be more confident!!!!! Anyway on with the story! Oh yea for two days I lost my voice cos I think I swallowed a spider in my room while sleeping (o.O) it was hysterically high and squeaky and kept going out-
Riku: WRITE THE GODDAMN CHAPPIE FOR FUCKS SAKE I GOT A BONER THE SIZE OF THE STATUE OF LIBERTY HERE!
CW: FINE! GOD DAMN MUSES ITS ALWAYS ME AND MY MAN AND MY DICK JEEZ...
Oh yea BEWARE there is a disgusting part in this chapter so keep your eyes peeled!
Sora: with a food peeler?
CW: (sighs) I swear it's like living with a three year old
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Okay now this Riku guy is a total jerk! With a capital 'J'! Not only has the rain soaked through my jeans and into my boxers but my dick has solidified into an icicle from the cold, at least it feels like that anyway. Yes! I'm in the fucking rain AGAIN! All because cheese dick in front of me with his girly silver hair can't start his motorcycle. Retard.
He told me it was working fine this morning. Yes I suppose it did arsehole that was when it was NOT fucking raining!
My teeth constantly chattered in my mouth while I rubbed my bare arms trying to get some warmth into them. No use there. I sighed and quickly looked away blushing when I realised I had been staring at Riku's arse for the last five minutes. Wait a minute did I just blush??? Crap.
"Don't worry I'll get it working in no time, just needs a little love" He said over his shoulder. I could tell he was cold from the rain, his shoulders were continually shaking. Why am I even caring if he's cold or not? I'm fucking freezing and pissed off cause he said that ten minutes ago! And another thing-
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"HAH! What'd I tell ya? Here put this on" He tossed me a black helmet and hopped onto his bike.
I snatched it from the air glaring at him. The bastard got it started.
"What's the matter? Can't fit all that cute spiky hair in the little helmet?" Riku snickered at his own joke. How childish is that?
"No!" I said through clenched teeth. I'll show him cute! I quickly shoved the helmet only to realise that it was too small and one of my spikes had been squished down covering my left eye. Riku only smirked at this. God! When am I ever going to stop embarrassing myself in front of this guy?
Cautiously I hooked my left leg over the seat and sat down. Why hasn't he gone yet?
"I'd hold on if I was you, it'd be best to wrap your arms around my waist"
Thank God this is a black helmet otherwise I would have given him the privilege to laugh at my ever growing blush. "What so I can give you a 'hard on' on the ride to your apartm-ARGH!"
The little pig flew down the road laughing at me because I was clutching onto his waist for dear life at how friggin fast he was going! You can laugh at me if you want for having my eyes closed the whole time through the ride but I've always felt a little queasy whenever I'm on something fast that I can't control. I think I threw up three times after going on the waltzers at the fun fair two months ago. You can blame Kairi for that she just LOVES fast rides.
"We're nearly home, just a little bit further!" He shouted over the noise of the engine.
I could barely hear him let alone nod to let him know that I had. I creaked my eyes open a little to see where we were. A lot of good that did everything around us was whizzing past. Blurs of colourful dots and darkness swarm threw my vision as I tried to keep a level head. My stomach was twisting so badly I thought I would throw up rite there in the helmet.
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CW: okay sicky part! But it's not too graphical...really it's just plain crap and I agree with Starlit-Chaos' review here that it wasn't so grosso...meh
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Finally we screeched to a stop outside tall apartment complex. Like the hotel it looked dead, run down and abandoned. I collapsed on my right side into a heap on the ground, ripped of the helmet and unhappily emptied my stomach onto the grass. It was painful and disgusting to put it in nice terms since I'd barely eaten.
I coughed violently and felt tears streaming down my face. My nails scraped into the dirt as I felt another wave of sickness 'punch' me in the pit of my stomach.
"Hey are you okay?" Riku rubbed my back. Yeah like that could stop this pain, but it was a nice gesture non-the less. "Come on lets go inside, you'll get even more sick if you stay out here any longer." He carefully tried to get me up without touching my stomach as best as he could.
I stumbled at first but gradually walked forward in a straight line...at least I thought I did. Riku had his arm slung across my back and kept glancing at the side of me nervously as if I'd fall any minute now. I wiped my mouth on the back of my hand then on my jeans, they were already wet so it didn't matter...boys have disgusting habits.
I was barely aware that we had made it to Riku's apartment until I was facing a bright red door. I leaned against the wall next to the door as Riku dug his hand into his pocket for the key.
I don't know if it was my imagination or the fact that I was totally nackered but I thought I saw a dark shadow opposite us in another apartment. It looked as if it was watching me intently, in a kinda menacing manner, which really unnerved me.
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"Okay you'll have to be quiet, I don't want anyone to wake up." Riku whispered to me. "Sora?"
"Wha? Oh yea, I'll be quiet" I gave him a reassuring smile to let him know I was okay...he didn't buy it, typical.
"What's wrong?" He asked.
I turned back to the door opposite. But it was closed. "Nothing"
Riku's apartment was...quaint to say the least. Besides the countless dirty dishes, rubbish everywhere and odd smell every now and again one could really get used to a place like this. He kinda reminds me of...
"Sorry about the mess, with a job like mine you tend to let things go" He said sheepishly kicking an empty crisp packet, he acts like a little kid sometimes I swear.
...me.
"It'ss salright" I said slurring my words then cringed as I felt another wave of pain in my stomach. It wasn't as bad as before but it still fucking hurt. I wasn't even aware that Riku was right in front of me until a glass of dark bubbly liquid was pushed under my nose.
I frowned and seemed to be staring at it forever until I came back to my senses and asked, "What's that?"
"Coke"
I frowned even harder. "Coke?" I looked up at him in a disbelieving stare. I did a double take. Woah. Even in this dim light his eyes still sparkled like gems. Ugh you would have at least thought my raging hormones would have stopped by now after all the shit I've been through tonight.
"Wow" Riku breathed staring right into my eyes. "You have really beautiful eyes. I mean uh you should really drink that it'll settle your stomach and then you can go and s-sleep in m-my uh bed, yeah my bed." He quickly handed me my coke and hesitantly walked into the living room.
I couldn't move. I was completely frozen on the spot. Did he just give me a compliment? Why was he blushing so much? Why was I blushing so much for that matter! This is so confusing.
I could vaguely even remember walking or in my dazed state stumbling into what looked like Riku's room. I didn't drink the coke. I couldn't. All I could think about was Riku and his beautiful eyes.
I was too tired to realise that Riku was sleeping in his bed soundlessly and didn't notice that his hair was a bit shorter than before as sleep over took me.
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CW: God you will not believe how crap I think the middle and end of this chapter is. Seriously I don't like it that much...maybe because im not so good with writing minor angstyness (not a word! made up by me!XD) and probably also cause I felt kinda depressed while writing this but that's just me! im more into a deeper darker angst that will soon appear in my other kh fic I have swimming in my head but that wont be up soon, I still have to plot it out unlike this chappie at the mo! Yep that's rite kiddies (or I shud reali say young adults since it is rated 'R') each chappie of my story is on a whim...dangerous I know but its pretty gd so far dnt ya think? Except 4 this chappie its was to say it nicely...shit and bollocks! XO how I so don't like it! Riku's personality will definitely change and so will Sora's!
Sora: why the hell did I blush so much in this chappie?
CW: oh pipe down you! Your gonna be getting massive boners by the time im finished with u!!
Sora: (gulps)
Riku: who's in bed with MY SORA??
CW: oh that? You'll find out in the next chappie! But you wont find out about the shadow in the other apartment til later...hehehehehehe
Sora and Riku: O.O
CW: the next chappie will get into the funny sarcastic way again b sure of that! God the lil ideas of this story is so bugging I just want to scream them out at you lol oh and don't worry this story has a plot...or does it??? MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Sora and Riku: o.O
CW: now review wenches! Lol do u want to see a fucked up sora or don't you? Don't you want to see riku and sora sucking off each other? No? you'd better! If you do REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW! Also responses to my wonderful amazing reviewers are underneath!
Responses to reviewersTyri Dragonite – (hides from ur really big grin) too much light! (hisses) I'm a vampire! Lol
Tris – (claps you on your back) well done for reviewing! Thank you so much! And don't worry I can barely write good grammar sometimes. XP
Legolas19 – I have updated but this one was shit next one will be better! (runs away)
Yumi Saruwatari – GOD that's a mouthful! Awww u love my story too? Well too fucking bad cos im gonna take it off the internet soon cos it stinks! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA...not really lol XP
dragonchild – your looking forward to more? Im not looking forward to going to college today! Lol
camigirl4k3 – holy shit girl you scared the living daylights out of me! When I was reading your review I crapped myself! Lol. Yep men always fart and scratch their balls! (shudders) its so sick!
Toni – (huggles you) awwww how cute you'll be my fan! Yay! XD omfg! You've neva pictured Riku as gay?? Lol dw I didn't either until I went on the 'R' fanfics hehehehehe enjoy them while you can!
VampssAmby10210 – I swear you ppl and your goddamn long names! Lol yep we have a giggler over here!!!!!!! Lol just hope your not as bad as my friend! She drove me mad!
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