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"What happened to your parents?" Dawn asked. Hiei wondered whether or not he should answer.

"Hn. Fine, I'll tell you, but if you tell anyone, I'll kill you." Hiei said. Dawn smiled, she had Hiei's trust, and that was good enough for her, but she let him tell her the story. Hiei was about to tell her everything, but decided not to.

"My mother's dead and I know nothing of my father. I'm forbidden so I was banished from where I lived and I became a thief. Koenma found me and made me be a spirit detective." Hiei said. Dawn stared at him, knowing she had not recieved the whole truth.

"You're not telling me everything, give me more details." Dawn said. She stopped the car suddenly and turned to look at Hiei. Hiei 'hn'ed and looked out the window, avoiding Dawn's gaze.

"Fine, be like that. I don't care," Dawn said, then mumbled, "not like I expected you to tell me." It was soft enough so Hiei would think she intended for him not to hear it, but loud enough so that he would. Dawn started driving again, but this time faster. She passed the speed limit and was now driving at eighty miles per hour. Hiei was terrified and holding on to his seat for dear life. Dawn slowed down for two reasons. One, smoke was coming out of the car, and two, she had almost no more gasoline. She pulled over and got out of the car. Hiei was still gripping the seat and she chuckled.

"That's what you get," Dawn said. Then, she looked at him and then at the floor. "I'm sorry, Hiei. I should have known better. I know your past has been hard, I can see it in your eyes."

Hiei looked at her and let go of the seat. 'This onna's mood changes so rapidly,' Hiei thought.

Dawn sighed and sat down on the sidewalk. She looked around. The road was dark and no one else was around. It all looked deserted. The streetlights were the only things there, making the stars dis. No sound could be heard and it all seemed peaceful.In fact, there was really nothing but fields, the road, the trees and the streetlights. Hiei slowly got out and joined her on the sidewalk. Dawn suddenly stood up and started walking in the direction they were going when the car broke down. Hiei joined her, and each, not saying a word, kept walking. After about thirty minutes of walking, Dawn spoke up.

"Where is the nearest town?" She asked Hiei. Hiei closed his eyes, took off his bandana, and then put it back on.

"Not far," Hiei responded. Dawn looked at the floor, and kept walking. Hiei walked after her. They soon got t o a town, but it seemed abandoned.

' I guess no one's awake at this time.' Dawn thought. She looked around her and all that could be seen were houses. Not very big, one-story houses. There were broken windows in some and some of them appeared to have been burned long ago. There was no sound but the wind. There were also no lights now, not even street lights.

"Hey, Hiei, let's go inside one of these houses. They look abandoned anyway." Dawn said. Hiei 'hn'ed and she jumped in through the broken window of a house. She felt around for a light switch on the walls and finally found one. She turned the lights on and looked around. She was in the kitchen. There was something weird about it though. It seemed like whoever was here just ran off, leaving everything in its place. The refrigerator was wide open and it stank of rotten food. There was food on the table also, but it was rotten and had a lot of bugs in it. The dishes were dirty and there were broken plates. Dawn made a disgusted face and walked into the next room. It wasn't that much cleaner. It was a living room. There were empty soda cans on the floor in the middle of the room and there was one that was full in a table next to the sofa. Dawn looked around and touched the sofa. It was still warm, as if someone had been there moments before.

Hiei soon followed after her. Dawn lied down on the sofa and closed her eyes.

"It's late. I'm going to sleep. You should too. Take the other sofa." Dawn said. Hiei 'hn' ed and sat down on a windowsill above the other sofa. Dawn sighed then chuckled. Dawn awoke in the morning to Hiei's yells.

"Onna! Get up! Now!" Hiei yelled. He was standing in front of her yelling but Dawn was still asleep. Dawn yawned and sat up. She looked at the window, saw it was still dark out and groaned. She lied back down, or actually let herself fall.

"Onna!" Hiei yelled again. Dawn groaned again, but this time louder. She finally sat up again. She saw Hiei and put her arms around his neck. Hiei froze. She stood up, still holding him and leaned against him. Hiei was still unmoving. After about five minutes, Hiei looked down at her and found out she had fallen asleep. He grunted. Then, he decided to get her up by yelling out her name, or rather, what he called her.

"Onna!" Hiei yelled. She didn't even move, leaving Hiei very confused. He had no idea what to do to get the girl up. He took his bandana off and closed his eyes. Suddenly, as if in a trance, Dawn took her arms off of Hiei and sat on the sofa, but she was still asleep and her eyes were still closed. Hiei decided to go train and so he left Dawn to sleep and went outside. After a while, Dawn woke up herself. She stood up and looked out hte window. It was morning now, but for some reason, everything seemed dark. The sky was almost completely covered by clouds, there was no light in any of the houses, and there were trees everywhere, providing more shade then was needed. She quickly glanced around, hoping to find a door, or an exit. There wasn't one in the living room so she decided to go through the window which Hiei had taken the liberty of opening. Once outside, she walked to the nearest tree and looked up. Sure enough, there was Hiei. Though, this time, instead of his usual black cape, he had on a blue shirt with no sleeves.

"Hey Hiei, why didn't you wake me up?" Dawn asked. Hiei glared at her.

"I did, onna. You went back to sleep," Hiei replied.

"Huh? I don't remember that," Dawn said, "oh wait, now I do. I went...to sleep...on...you." She said weakly. Hiei glared at her more.

"hehe...sorry. Are you going to kill me?" Dawn asked.

"I can't," said Hiei. Dawn looked at him with a puzzling look.

"Whaddaya mean you can't? Am I a special case, because you always threaten to kill Kuwabara," Dawn said.

"Hn. I'd go to spirit world prison." Hiei said. Dawn chuckled.

"You know what would be really funny? Putting you in jail. Don't get me wrong- I don't want you in jail, I'm just saying that...you know what, I don't know what I'm saying. Don't mind me I'm just talking for no reason," Dawn said. She paused. "Well, actually, I have a very good reason. You see, you hardly ever talk and I have to make up the amount that you don't say, but should be said otherwise we're just wasting it. Do you get it? I have to talk for us both. Everyone says I talk a really little bit, but those who really know me don't. They think I talk too much and are begging me to shut up. That's only because I don't like talking to people I don't know. Then again, a person once told me, 'If you can't talk to strangers, how do you make friends?', and I'm guessing they're right. I mean, you can't meet anyone unless you talk to them and you can never talk to them unless you know them and that would take a long time, and eventually the person would get tired of you because you're not talking to them and you can't explain why you're not talking to them because you can't talk to strangers. Do you get what I mean?" She looked up at Hiei, who she noticed, was gone. She sighed and leaned against the tree.

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