CW: (cries) this just wont do! I say I'll update, then I couldn't cause I had the flu, then it was Christmas (hope everyone had a gd one!) then homework attacks and swamps me like the plague! XO
Riku: ha ha!
CW: now I have to finish and make a giant sculpture for art for my final piece in three weeks!!!! (dies) o.O so my updates will be a bit slow and I'm sorry for that but I must pass this course if I want to get a job in art!! So please enjoy this very long chappie that has taken me days to write (collapses at her keyboard) -.- being a poor art student is hard!
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"Aha! You're ass is mine Sora!"
"Goddamit! How did you overtake me?" I muttered as I tried to gain more speed by pressing the x button harder, but failing miserably. We were playing Crash Bandioot's Crash Team Racing game on the PS2 and right now Ez is kicking my butt. It's not fair! She hasn't got a cute silver haired bimbo sucking and nibbling on her right ear lobe.
Total distraction city! Especially when his left hand is down the back of my boxers, seductively rubbing and entering my butt hole every now and again.
"I WIN!" Erin declared triumphantly, throwing her hands in the air. I threw my controller down on the floor in defeat and sighed. Riku suddenly caught me off guard and pushed his lips up against mine.
"Eww guys! Please, I'm eating!" I heard Ez whine and take a bite out of something.
Riku pulled away from our kiss and pulled a face at his younger sister. "Then stop eating then!" He growled.
"I can't help it. I'm hungry!" She whined, taking another bite out of her chocolate bar.
"You can't help anyone!"
"That's not true!" She cried. "If I hadn't have left my red t-shirt on top of Sora's clothes, then you two would never have fucked each other!"
"WHAT!???" I screeched.
But all she did was giggle uncontrollably. That evil, conniving, mischievous little bitch! How could she make me loose my virginity like that! With one…hot…teasing…fit…smooth…silver-haired bish-OKAY SHE'S FORGIVEN!!!...but only because her older brother is sexy and…horny…nearly all the time…like me. Heh.
"Ez where are the tickets?" Riku asked as he started to form small circles with his forefinger on my lower back. I could feel my eyes start to close and I leant sideways, resting my head on the crook of his neck. Last night was so tiring, I slept for about two hours with my head on the reception desk when I figured no-one would be booking into a crappy hotel at four in the morning.
Twelve hours later and I'm still fucking tired, but not as much as Riku was. He started to fall asleep when we had stopped at a set of lights on the way home. I had to literally put my freezing cold hands under his leather jacket after shouting at him for ten minutes before he woke up. It was fucking hilarious, he crapped himself and fell off his motorbike!
"In my room somewhere…why?"
"'Cause fatty, the concert is tonight!" Each time Riku moved his jaw it caused his silver bangs to tickle my nose, making it really itchy. Stupid, long, soft, girly hair! What concert is he on about anyway?? "So could you please go find them and then I'll make you some food"
"YAY! Ok I'm going" I woke up suddenly when I felt Riku stand up and walk over to Ez to help her up. "Ah, thank-WOAH!" I looked up to see what was going on and frowned when I saw Erin holding her stomach with a shocked daze on her face.
"Ez?" Riku asked her with a hint of worry in her voice.
"It kicked! This is so cool, I can't believe it just kicked!" She cried happily while still holding her stomach.
"I-it did?" Riku asked as I saw him blink disbelievingly.
"Here" She said and placed his left hand on her bulging stomach. "Sora you too" Beckoning me with her hand. I quickly stood up and walked over to them. Ez took my right hand and held it on her belly. This is so weird.
A couple of minutes later I raised an eyebrow at her. "Nothings hap-AH!" I suddenly withdrew my hand as soon as I felt her belly jump. That's fucking freaky man! It's like out of the film Alien. "Jeez that thing can really kick!"
"It feels really weird" She said, scratching her lower back. "Like a muscle spasm or something"
"I thought that book I gave you said that it starts when you're at 20 weeks. Why is it so late?" Riku asked her while crossing his arms over his chest.
"I dunno" She replied shrugging. "I might have then but it felt more like fluttering rather than this. I kinda just forgot about it."
Riku rubbed his eyes and ran a hand through his hair looking completely shattered. "Okay, just…go get the tickets will you?"
Ez brushed a few stray hairs away from her face and walked towards her room smiling contently. I followed Riku into the kitchen smiling at the way the perfect curves of his ass moved in the material of his boxers. He flipped the switch on the kettle and slid down the cupboard doors onto the floor, cradling his sleepy head in his right hand with his elbows on his knees.
"You look like shit"
"Thanks for noticing" He replied while closing his eyes.
I took a small teaspoon out of the cutlery drawer and pulled off the lid of the sugar bowl. "So what concert are you going to?" And why wasn't I told about this!? This means I'll be all alone working tonight…fuck.
"We, are going to see Slipknot"
"But we have work tonight"
"No we don't. I only work on Mondays, Tuesdays and Fridays, and so do you." He yawned out loud and started to rub sleep out of his left eye, making him look like a five year old…girl.
"So who's Slip-whatssit?" I asked confused as I started to scoop a heaped teaspoon of coffee into Riku's mug.
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I don't know how it happened…and I don't think 'stud butt' knows either.
One minute we're talking casually to each other and then the next we're all over each other! Hot, sweaty bodies pressed up against each other, rolling around on his bedroom floor. Riku's only got his jeans on while I've got nothing. I'm starting to think he really is a pervy little bastard, that prostitute job has probably screwed with his brain besides his dick…which is very hard against mine right now.
We we're supposed to be getting dressed to go to the concert but I guess Riku must be in heat right now. I'm just trying to figure out if its possible that someone can be on it twenty four/seven.
He broke our heated kiss and pulled playfully on my bottom lip, running his top front teeth over the cool metal of my lip ring. "Ow!" I said glaring at him. I started to run the tip of my tongue over the hole where the piercing came through in my mouth, trying to make the pain go away.
"Sorry" He whispered and started to plant kisses along my jaw line, down towards my neck. I leaned my head back to give him better access and moaned softly when he started to grind his dick against mine. I arched my back as I felt tingles of pleasure shoot down my spine. He's evil! He keeps moving faster and harder!!!
I can feel his hand slipping further and further south along my hip, as soon as he reached my groin I was…
Ding dong
…saved by the bell. WOO-HOO!...I mean um, shit…that's too bad.
Riku stopped what he was doing and looked up at his bedroom door. "Shit" He muttered. "EZ GET THE DOOR!"
Ding dong
"EZ!"
Ding dong
"Fuck, she must be in the toilet again" He muttered and pressed his soft, pale lips against mine, holding it. "Be ready in about five okay?" He said as he pushed himself off me. As soon as he left the room I poked my tongue out at him.
That jerk! He makes me all horny for nothing and leaves me here stark naked!!!!...even though I already was to begin with, but still! I feel used. AND I DON'T EVEN HAVE TIME FR A COLD SHOWER!! I eased myself off the floor and took out a clean pair of boxers from Riku's chested drawers. He'd cleaned out a whole drawer just for me which is pretty nice of him even if he has left me with a boner right now.
As soon as I put them on I pulled on a pair of baggy jeans, hoping that they would hide my erection till it went down.
"SORA HURRY UP!"
Shit.
Where the hell are all my t-shirts!!?? I hate it when you're rushing around and can't find any damn thing you need!
"SORA!"
GODDAMMIT! "I-I'M COMING!" Fuck it! I quickly grabbed the nearest black top out of Riku's wardrobe and whipped it over my head, not caring what I looked like. I rushed out the room and stopped dead in my tracks when I saw a girl about the same age as me peering past Riku at me as he was pulling on his leather jacket.
Why is she staring at me like that?
"Who's that?" I asked Riku suspiciously, glancing back at the girl in front of the apartment door. She was a little bit shorter than me with delicate features on her pale heart-shaped face. She had a calmness about her that seemed to show through her light hazel eyes. Her long auburn hair was in a low plait that hung over her left shoulder. A few strands framed her face making her look more ethereal. She wore striped green and black, long-sleeved top that cut off just below her shoulders, showing her graceful neckline and plain, ripped jeans with the button undone to show her small, perfectly round stomach.
Great, another person who's pregnant. What is it with all these women getting pregnant all of a sudden? Did everyone just decide to all go to a secret orgy in a random place and fuck each other without any protection.
"That's Matt's girlfriend, Ryan" Riku replied and then turned to face Ryan, making hand gestures to her and said "Ryan this is Sora". What the hell??
She smiled shyly and raised her hand in a short wave. She turned back to Riku, giggling and quickly moved her hands in different positions using her fingers on her palms. Okay, now I'm totally confused.
After she had finished Riku looked back at me and smirked. "Isn't that my shirt?"
I looked down and blanched at what I had picked out in my hurried state. It was a black, smooth top with a small silver zip leading down from my left collarbone to my right hip. Another shorter zip was undone at the bottom of the shirt, exposing my bellybutton to the cold. The sleeves were a black net see-through material.
All in all it looked like a pussy girly top…which is so typical of Riku.
I scratched my head nervously and grinned. "Um…can we go now?"
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Ugh I'm so naïve. Riku had to practically spell out to me that Ryan was deaf. I just thought they had some secret coded language that only they could use. At least I know who Matt knocked up now with his split condom. Heh. She seems pretty happy about it, constantly smiling and full of silent giggles, very different to Ez.
Hmm, maybe I should hide that Lem-sip box when no-ones around. And then confront Ez about it, but then…what would I say to-
"Hellooo Sexaaay!"
I sighed and rolled my eyes as I felt Courtney wrap an arm around my waist. I haven't known the guy for long and already he's coming onto me. Yes Courtney is a dude, he has a girly name just like me. He also openly admitted that he's bi-sexual and has tried to commit suicide on numerous occasions because of racist insults he's gotten from evil people who don't like black people.
He's kinda short for a boy and is a really lightweight when it comes to drinking. Riku isn't helping at all! He's just laughing at me blushing while drinking his crummy beer. ASSHOLE! I'm being humiliated and he's not. Helping. One. Bit!!! Let's see how funny he thinks it is when I shove that beer bottle up his ASS!
I took another swig of beer and looked around, trying to forget that I can feel Courtney's fingers playing with the side of my pants and sliding his fingers over my hips. Ugh I feel so violated.
This place is huge. Most of it is just like a giant hall with toilets on either side and rows of seats in the back, like the ones at a baseball match. The stage is quite big too with massive speakers on either side of it, they look about 10ft tall! There's a whole swarm of mosha's, emo's and goth's all around the place in their groups of friends. But mostly they're surrounding the front of the stage, pushing and leaning on each other to get closer even though no-ones on stage yet except for fat, hairy sound people checking the instruments and crap.
We're more near the back, all of us drinking alcohol and underage, but who gives a shit.
"Riku! Over hear dude!" I saw Riku look behind me and followed his gaze. Oh God the giant is back with his mistress!...aka Jenna-Rai and Travis. Both of them were smoking joints and Jenna seemed to have a green cast on her right arm.
"Travis! My man! Hey Jen what'd you do to your arm?" Riku asked as they walked over.
She took another drag on her joint and breathed in deeply. "I sprained it, dunno how" She replied as tiny wisps of smokes escaped her mouth in between words. "You want?" She asked him and offered him her joint.
I raised an eyebrow as I saw Riku take the joint without hesitation, he brought it to his lips and sucked in the smoke. He grinned as he exhaled and stared down at it. "This is good weed, where'd you get it?"
I nearly choked on my drink when I heard him say that. Riku smokes weed!?? Another thing I didn't know about him. Jenna took the joint back off him after his second drag and simply replied. "Alyx"
"Alyx…is here? Where?" Riku asked with wide eyes. Ha ha, Riku's scared of a girl! No wonder he's gay. Stupid twat.
"At the bar mate, getting shit-faced" Travis replied then walked over to me. "Hows the piercings? No infections?"
"No-ah!" he pulled my bottom lip down and checked my lip ring. He's still really, really tall, I feel like a midget. Ugh I can't believe he's doing this in front of everyone! I don't even though where his hands have been, now I'll get an infection for sure!
"Pretty good twerp" He said grinning and clamped me on the back, winding me. At least he made Courtney get off me, thank God! And…did he just call me twerp?? What is it with people and calling me names!!! It's so frustrating!!!
I almost wet myself as soon as the lights went out. I can't find the stage, and something keeps touching me!!
Suddenly a bright flash of red light sparked into life on both sides of the stage, lighting up the whole arena. The crowd roared as the sound of someone half screaming, half growling with drums, a bass and electric guitar playing in one big mesh. Either the lead singer is on pms or she has serious issues, she likes to scream…a lot.
Indeed I will condescend
Exhausting every trace to give you,
What you asked for
Everything you demanded you bleed right from me
At last, I will be free
And the phoenix rises
Invasion of my last hope
For once just know your place
We are only human
Everything you demanded you bleed right from me
So weak you cannot see
And the phoenix rises
Corruption at its finest,
Corruption at its finest.
I felt a shiver go down my spine as she screamed for the last time making the crowd go wild. I can't see what she looks like because I'm right at the back but it looks like she's got short boyish hair cut at the back and strands of black hair to her chin framing her face. The ones holding the guitars both have dark red hair, the one on the left with the pale face has it just above her shoulders and the tanned one has it cut to her earlobe. I cant see the drummer clearly either because of the drum kit, all I can see is her head and her long, brown hair.
"Pretty sexy for a girl band huh?"
I jumped when Riku slid a hand around my waist, playing with the zip on my top, which was starting to cling to me like a second skin it was so fucking hot in here! HAVEN'T THESE PEOPLE EVER HEARD OF AIR-CONDITIONING!!!??
"Yeah their alright" I replied while looking back up at the band. The raven haired girl was gulping down water and spat it back out at the crowd, making them scream for more. "Where have you been?"
He grinned at me with a weird wink in his eye and poked out his tongue. I blinked and didn't even notice that the band had started playing again, causing everyone to head bang and loose themselves in the music.
She is not scared to die..
The best things in life drive her to cry.
Crucify then learn..
(Take so much away from inside you, makes no sense, you know he can't guide you, he's your fucking shoulder to lean on, be strong!)
Sit and watch me burn
(Take so much away from inside you, makes no sense, you know he can't guide you, he's your fucking shoulder to lean on, be strong!)
"Is that…?" I asked him while still staring at the white pill on his tongue.
"Yeah, you want?" He said, but I could barely hear him over the music.
"Yeah" I mouthed. I know I shouldn't but I really don't give a shit, if Riku's taken one already then it's got to be ok. I mean what could go wrong?
She's led to believe, that it'd be ok,
Look at your face, scarred in dismay,
But times have changed and so have you..
I think I'd rather crucify then learn
(Take so much away from inside you, makes no sense, you know he can't guide you, he's your fucking shoulder to lean on, be strong!)
Sit and watch me burn
(Take so much away from inside you, makes no sense, you know he can't guide you, he's your fucking shoulder to lean on, be strong!)
Riku grabbed my hips and pushed me against him. Okay, I guess he wants to give it to me the hard way. I felt my eyes start to close as I saw him lean in closer. I licked my lips nervously just before they touched his. He tasted of booze but I didn't care, he was already opening his mouth, granting me access. As soon as our tongues touched I melted into the kiss. I licked the pill of his tongue, feeling it start to dissolve on my tongue. Instinctively I swallowed it. I broke the kiss from Riku and looked up at him frowning. "That wasn't a tic-tac was it?" I don't feel anything! Not one single, goddamn thing!
He chuckled and bent down, licking my earlobe. "Give it time!" He shouted over the band.
Humph, yeah right.
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Fuck! Oh God, I take it all back! It wasn't a tic-tac, it's the real thing, and it's FUCKING FANTASTIC!!!
Speaking of fucking, Riku and I have somehow ended up in the male toilets, completely naked, shagging like there's no tomorrow. Half an hour after taking it and everything seems…wonderful. From the piss covered floor to Riku gripping and massaging my ass while I bounce on top of his hard dick.
Every tingle of pleasure throughout my body seems to be intensified. Even the blaring, thumping music of the band we paid…or in this case, Riku paid to see, I can feel every vibration of each beat through the walls, the floor, everywhere.
"Oh God…Sora!" Riku quickly crushed his lips against mine as I continued to bounce on top of his throbbing dick, while mine was rubbing achingly against both our stomachs. I don't care that if I cum, that we'll be covered in sticky, white goo. I don't care that my ass is gonna kill in the morning, I don't care if anyone catches us. All I care about is Riku.
Riku with his cute butt and sexy body with tight, smooth muscles. His 'come to bed' aquamarine eyes and his gorgeous smile. I don't even know what I'm saying anymore. I can't think straight, all I can think about is Riku right in front of me making cute little noises.
I can feel us both start to tense up, ready for our climax. Our breaths coming out in short gasps. I placed both my hands on Riku's face as I started bouncing faster and harder. I pushed my lips against his as best as I could, running my tongue over every crevice in his mouth. I planted haste kisses along his jaw line from his mouth and rested my forehead on his shoulder as I felt the heated tingles of pleasure through my dick, nearing my orgasm.
After one final bounce, I threw my head back and moaned out loud just as I felt a warm, wet sensation in my butt.
Suddenly everything seemed to speed up. It was like in a weird, hazy dream. We kissed, cleaned ourselves, kissed more got dressed and then we're out in the crowd, jumping to the music.
All the colours from the stage are starting to mix together, making a pretty rainbow…really pretty. But not as pretty as Riku.
I bleed for this and I bleed for you
Still you look in my face like I'm somebody new
TOY – nobody wants anything I've got
Which Is fine, because I'm you're made of
Everything – I'm – NOT
If you're a 555, then I'm 666
If you're a 555, then I'm 666
(What's it like to be a heretic?)
I giggled as Riku started to lift me up in the air. Everyone in the crowd started to grab hold of me, lifting me through the air. I was flying, flying towards the stage with the pretty colours and tall men in overalls and weird masks. I laughed out loud when I felt people grab my ass, it's so funny, really, really funny!
I gave out a silent yelp as two men in dark uniforms pulled me off the crowd, over the barrier separating the crowd from the stage. I wobbled a bit as they pushed me back to the side of the stage, through the barriers again where the crowd was little.
Stupid jerks…and where the hell is Riku? I want him.
I squeezed past people trying to find my silver haired bishie. Everyone in the crowd looked so happy, but I wouldn't be happy until I found my Riku! The music is sooooo loud, I can't hear myself think…am I thinking???
I quickly looked over at the bar and saw my Riku with four beer bottles. I clapped my hands together, giggling and ran over to him, causing everyone to stare at me oddly.
I wrapped my arms around his waist and snuggled him tightly, purring at how soft his skin was, even though he was wearing a t-shirt.
"Having fun?" He asked looking down at me.
I grinned widely and nodded vigorously up at him while accepting the beer he offered me. We both gulped it down fast, which caused my head to spin, making me more nauseas. I stared wide-eyed as Riku finished the rest of his beer. I giggled to myself and leaned forward to try to lick some of the spilt beer that had dribbled down his chin.
Riku started to moan quietly as I sucked the last of the beer from his bottom lip, sliding my tongue between his parted lips. I stopped when I saw someone tap Riku on the shoulder, causing him to pull away. I mewled at the loss of his touch and growled at the other boy who had disturbed me and my Riku.
He had spiked hair and deep brown eyes that were almost as black as his hair. He had a black zip earring in his left ear and wore a simple Slipknot t-shirt with baggy trousers. Probably from far away he'd look straight, but up close he looks like a gay squirrel. Heh heh, Squirrel Boy!
I looked up at Riku for moment and saw him blink a couple of times as if trying to register something, heh he looks so cute and funny like that. I hugged him tightly around his waist and snuggled his chest again. He's really warm.
"Um…uh, Alyx! Hi, how are you?" Riku asked the guy in front of us. I giggled at the man, he looks soooo pissed, Riku's in deep shit! Ha ha!
"You prick! You said we were going on a break, now you're cheating on me with a gimp like him." He shouted at my Riku! Bad squirrel, bad! Someone should shove a acorn up his butt hole.
Riku sighed as I listened to the funny noises his stomach. "Alyx, there was nothing between us, you weren't my boyfriend."
"Oh so now he is!?" He pointed a finger at me glaring, his finger smelled of fish…ew.
Riku looked down at me and smiled cutely as I gave him my cheesy trademark grin. "Yeah, He's my boyfriend."
Wow this is SO COOL! I'm Riku's boyfriend!!! La la la la la…which is really weird because he never asked me, but I don't care! He's my Riku and Alyx is about to throw a full bottle of beer on Riku. Uh oh.
I quickly grabbed my other beer and poured it all other Alyx's head.
Both Riku and I burst out laughing at Alyx's face. The squirrel had a shower in beer!!! HAHAHA!
I yelped as Alyx tackled me to the ground, trying to strangle me with his hands. I couldn't stop laughing, this is so funny! I'm going to die laughing!! Drips of beer was splashing onto my face from Alyx's as he tightened his hold on me, causing me to laugh silently at him as I couldn't breathe.
Alyx's eyes widened as two hands roughly grabbed him by the shoulders and pulled him off me. I started coughing really badly on the wet floor, clutching my throat and then burst into a choking laughter causing everyone to stare at me. That was great! Can he try to kill me again?
Riku pulled me up and kissed the top of my head. "Are you okay? Sorry about him, he's just a psycho"
I kissed his nose, making him chuckle. "Yep! But I wasted all my beer, can I have more?" I asked him, bouncing on the soles of my feet.
"Sure"
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You know what's really funny? No wait! It really is! Beer makes me SUPER HYPER! I keep bouncing which causes Riku to laugh at me and that makes me bounce more because Riku is really cute and sexy when he laughs!! I love it!
I think we're at his apartment…are we at his apartment?? I don't know! And I don't care because I'm with My Riku! He's so great! He hasn't asked me out but I SO knew that he was my boyfriend! I mean who wouldn't? We've had tons of sex and kisses and…other things…I can't remember right now. Ooo cool we're inside!
That's so weird cause I thought we we're still at the concert, but that must have ended, which is kinda crap cause Slipknot were only on for an hour, even though we missed half of it.
Riku tripped over a crisp packet near Erin's door which caused us both to burst out laughing in the eerie silence. I can't believe he just did that! He's such a klutz! We couldn't stop laughing as we went into his room and collapsed on his bed in a fit of giggles. I rolled onto my side and then everything faded into black.
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CW: that, friggin, chapter, took, so, long, to, write!!!! XO bastard thing! But I'm quite proud of it. what do you guys think?? Sora on Ecstasy and booze was so weird to write, but then so fun too!! Lol, I bounce to whenever I'm hyper or haven't eaten in the day.
Sora: o.O
CW: the first band was Kittie (Talena I luv so much! She's so adorable and dead looking XD) and the songs were No Name and Brackish. And Slipknot's song was The Heretic Anthem. Ahh so cute! In other news I must do this for the safety of you guys, even though I really hate to do it!
Don't do drugs!
Drugs are terrible! They damage you're health and wreak your life! Even one Ecstasy tablet can KILL YOU!!! But Sora and Riku are idiots so screw them…
I have never taken Ecstasy but here are some facts about it that I got from the net!!!
WHAT ARE THE EFFECTS?
MDMA is a "mood elevator" that produces a relaxed, euphoric state. It does not produce hallucinations.
MDMA takes effect 20 to 40 minutes after taking a tablet, with little rushes of exhilaration which can be accompanied by nausea. 60 to 90 minutes after taking the drug, the user feels the peak effects.
Sensations are enhanced and the user experiences heightened feelings of empathy, emotional warmth, and self-acceptance.
The effects of 'real' ecstasy subside after about 3-5 hours.
Users report that the experience is very pleasant and highly controllable. Even at the peak of the effect, people can usually deal with important matters.
The effect that makes MDMA different from other drugs is empathy, the sensation of understanding and accepting others.
And that's it! so goodnight, cause I'm shattered and I might update this weekend too! Also good news!!! My dad has finally told my mother (the bitch) that he's divorcing her and moving out with me in a nice, well furnished flat for 6 months…lets just say she wasn't too happy (bursts out laughing) the sales people are coming on Friday to come and put the house up for sale! Woo-hoo!!! (dances) can't wait!!! But it also means I have to clean my room. (dies) anyways please review and goodbye!!
Responses to reviewers
Toni – I tried to update as soon as possible but life sorta gets a hold of me, it's a drag, especially homework and college and RUN AWAY! It's not too late, lol and I feel sorry for you! (huggles you)
Tyri Dragonite – Yay! My legs are healed! Thank you! Lol aww (glomps you and gives you a shot-gun) use it well!! Lol
Elysha and the Bluegayle – (huggles you) thank you!!
Rinoki Rio – AHH! Don't eat me!! If I could, and if I had the money, I would send you a Lost Prophets ticket, also THANK YOU!!!! (glomps you till you can't breathe) I made such an arse of myself with that tiny mistake on my Christmas story on the last chappie! About selphie serving sora, but I did intend it to be yuffie, I just sorta wrote selphies name for some reason o.O but I cleared it up thanx to you and someone else who said it but I can't remember who…??
Angel-Wings6 – lol I see you love my story lots! I will try to update as best as I can!! Life is such a drag!!
BlueEyedDemon – looks like good luck is finally coming my way!! XD ahh Riku, so horny and yet so delicious!!
Keera – (hides) Keera the Kidnapper!! Evil! Lol I will never write for you!!! Mwhahahahahaha!
Flare – yay more petting!!! (purrs) sadly I didn't need to threaten anyone (cries) fuck, oh well no more evil mom! (jumps for joy)
Shadow-Angel-of-Silence – for a silent angel, you really can talk! Lol I'm jkin! Ooo…um okay I won't make you embarrass yourself about your dream…lol I think I know where it's going (looks at riku and sora) anyways don't worry I won't kill myself…yet, and if we weren't sick perverted girls then we would be boring!! XD
Evilgoddess1990 – arigato! And I hope this chappie was funny enough for you XD ahh drugged up sora!!
Addmoose2004 – aww poor you! (hugs you) evil cami, lol. All mothers are idiots, they say they want children then when they got them, they wanna kill them! WELL, it's their own friggin fault not to figure out that their kids change when they reach their teens!!! So screw them! I would have wacked your mom with the vaccum! Lol and don't worry about not reviewing on chappie 11, I'm just glad that you reviewed anyways.
Mugs – eh hehehe sorry you had to wait such a long time again, been really busy and depressed these last couple of weeks! I even cried on Christmas day…but lets not tlk about that (sweat drop) cool! (tries to eat falling cottage cheese balls and flaming marshmallows and glomps Ron) THANK YOU!!! (huggles goth Sora and Riku Plushies and gives each of you a choccie chip cookie)
IlUvToRnAnDsOrA – aww your welcome!! Ooo Torn tis cute!! Thank you!
Sira – sorry you had to wait so long for this one too! I know this is pwp chappie too but wait till the next chappie (cackles) lol I blame kairi's parents!!! Oh and trust me I'm like you! Smutty fanfics rule!! Ahem yeah it nearly killed me trying to do the same style for this chappie, thank you saying I kept it up! (gives you a cookie)
Johnny-Depp-Luv – thank you! And I will try to update again this weekend!!!
Shady gurl – eww I'm not gonna be like Jordon and her husband with their sex tape!! Lol even though theirs got stolen…ha ha! Losers. Next chappie soon!...hopefully.
Ilovefredgeorgeandsugar – (gives you sugar with george and fred plushies) lol thank you and enjoy!!
Brittany – arigato! And I will try to update more, I promise!
XxX Chains XxX – puffy is a little dog and yes Vincent was with him, I just had this funny vision of Vincent being totally camp! Lol eh well it was funny in my head anyways.
Hoshi – ah! My Japanese is so crap but Arigato! And I'm gd you? I only know a few words…don't kill me! (cowers)
Ashley bluesmmers – aww you got flamed for your first fanfic?? How terrible! (huggles you) I never flame, and never will, its so stupid!! But a slash scene in the first chappie would be so hot!! And addict ppl to your story!! Ugh ppl are weird! And thank you for your kind words!!
SilverMist – o.O evil spoons (cowers) I updated! No more hitting with plushie hammer (cries) lol ah yes gd old Riku, gotta love his horniness!
Hikkix2 – yep life without swearing would be crap and he's a very annoyed teen, most of the time, until Riku molests him that is! Lol arigato!
DMFerby – thank you! Making Sora cute and innoncent would be weird for this story, also he's 17 and pretty pissed off at everything that goes wrong in his life, lol he's weird!
Greengirl – lol go pee girl! Ahh you're just like Sora! Don't care what anyone thinks when you do something natural! I will continue to make you crack up as much as I can!!