Love, Hate, and Competition
Chapter 4
By Dee K
YYYYYEEEEAAAA here it finally is the fourth chapter of love, hate and competition. I'm going by what's on the top of my head so feel free to give me pointers and/ or advice. I also need pairs and characters. and i dont own any of the inu or yuy character only Aku. Well not to wait any longer LETS GET IT STARTED IN HERE.
Chapter 4
Kag pov
It was half way through the night and I danced with each of the hot boys at least five times. After my dance with Youko and Kurama the rest seemed to get possessive. So after the tenth dance strait I went to sit down.
"Man kag, you're on a roll tonight." Sango said coming to sit at the table with her. She had on red hip hugger jeans and a red shirt with glitter on it. Her hair was let down some going over her shoulders, her make was light she only had red eye shadow and lip gloss on. Sango and I have been friends since 1st grade when she moved to town. She was very out going and very protective of her friends. She only fought with a reason so getting her made would only mean death.
"Yeah, you came here to meet people you don't know and you're dancing with the guys." Rin said she was wearing a blue shirt that hung past her knees but one side stopped at her waist, with blue jean low rider. Her hair was in micro braids that stopped to her mid back. She only wore lip gloss and light blush. I met Rin when I just entered middle school. Her family moved from Okinawa to Tokyo. She was shy but when she would go to the club and had a few drinks she could be a girls gone wild but with clothes on.
"I'm trying but its like every guy that talks to me is either a jerk or just wants one night." Kagome said putting her head on the table.
"Don't worry Kag. Im sure the perfect guy will come soon." Said Kayori. She had on a black tube top that stopped 1inch below her breast, with the words 'look but don't touch' in red, with black low rider jeans that showed her name in kanji on the side of her stomach. Her black hair with white highlights was pulled back in to a high ponytail. Kayori and I met a few months after I met Hiei, which was in 3rd grade. They're cousins and she came to live with them. She's nice, she'll put you in your place or threaten you when you either cross the line or need to shut up other than that she's very calm and collected.
"may I have this dance." We all turned our head to lookup. Our breath got caught in our throats as we stared at perfection.
"I think I've died and gone to hell." I heard Kayori say. I could say the same thing for someone as good looking as him in heaven would be considered a sin.
"And who are you asking to dance." Sango said after she regained herself
"This lovely lady right here." His red eyes turned toward me as he extended his hand. My friends looked at me their eyes telling me to go. I guess Kayori got tired of waiting so she decides to help. She took a needle out of her pocket and stuck me on my leg.
Reg pov
Kagome hopped up and the only thing to keep her from falling was to grab the guys hand. "Um, I'm Kagome." She said rubbing her hand on her leg while glaring at Kayori.
"Aku."
"Huh"
"My name is Aku." Just as he finished saying that the song goodies by serria(i hope thats right) came on
"May I have this dance."
"Sure."
As they walked to the dance floor we go back to the table with the girls
"I can't believe you stuck her." Sango said laughing
"Hey, she was taking to long. And a guy that devilishly hot should not be kept waiting." Kayori said taking a sip of her drink.
"Um did ya'll hear that" Rin asked looking around
"What." Sango said looking at Rin
"It like someone was growling." Rin said
"It was probably the base, don't worry." Kayori said getting up to dance
"Yeah, ok." Rin said as her and Sango got up
Else where in the club
"Be quiet Inuyasha." Miroku said
"How can I, I mean we're already at it for kag and then this guy just walks up and tries to take her I cant see how ya'll can just stand there and take it." Inuyasha said gulping down his drink.
"Its just the matter of patience Inuyasha." Youko said looking at a red headed girl at the bar.
"Since we have three hours left how about we spend it on something." Miroku said looking at a group of girls that walked by. "I'll be right back."
"Might as well." Yusuke said as him and Kawabara walked off.
"See you at closing time." Kurama said him and Youko walking to the bar.
"I'll be back." Hiei said walking off
"is it me or is that guy getting a little close." Inuyasha said as a waiter came and brought some more drinks, he was looking at kagome and Aku dance
"We cant do anything about it so how about we go find some girls." Naraku said standing up.
"Yeah, sure."
Bar
After dancing for five songs strait Kagome and Aku sat at the bar talking.
"So when do you start?" kagome asked
"next week, I'll be there when they get my papers strait." Aku replied. They were curtly talking a bout school. Aku would be going to her school.
"I could show you around if you like." Kagome said taking a sip of her drink.
"I'd like that." Aku said. Just as kagome was about to talk Sango came over.
"kag were about to go are you ready." She said.
"yeah. I'll see you Monday ok." Kagome said
"can I get your number."- Aku
"yeah here. Bye"- Kagome
"Bye."-Aku
yeah I finally did along chapter(ifs its long to some standards). But people I have some good and bad news. Which one first. Good-I read my email and those who sent In characters have made it in the story. Im on two different sites the reviews are mixed with each other, so here they are.
Reviewer - character
Kariisme - Kayori
Lady Gina Goddess of the Wind- Stephanie
Kill-all-flamers -Ceres
Sesshoumaruobsessed -Shinta and Eris (2 char)
Ice Youkai Enchantress -Aiko
Kurama Mate 2003- Celeste
Tai-youkai-Chan -Sai
Baka Kitsune Bri -Kya
Lady Lilly -Kelly
Darkened Witch -Kaylie Hiome
Lilaznyme -Tenshi Akuma
Kary Asakura and Mimi-Chan -Kary Asakura
Fire Kitsune -Kazumi Yuki Kuromatsu
I'll still be taking in characters if you want to send them. And now for the bad news are you ready. There will be no demons in this story. Now if you want me to I'll keep your character in but without the demons attributes, but if you want to put your characters as a demon in a story of mine check out my other fics: High school fame fun, Revenge Never Tasted So Sweet, High Places, and Reality's Dream.
If you have any questions please feel free to ask. Also if you don't see your name or your character it doesn't mean any thing, you just probably sent you character after I checked my mail and stuff. Thanks to all of my reviewers. With out ya'll I would not be doing this.
Thanks,
De K