Author's Note: First off thanks a bunch for the reviews! Hugs all around

Secondly, this is a bit more hentai than I had been writing, but no citrus in sight-don't worry readers (and a sorry to those who wanted lime-action). Alright, here are the Houshi's thoughts on a certain dark-haired chick we all know!


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Mittomonai Hitoku (Indecent Hiding)

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I close my eyes and there she stands

Glaring at me, hair loose and open hands.

"What are you doing, Houshi?" she demands.

Inuyasha just looks on, he understands

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The predicament I find myself in.

I want this woman with a fire in my skin,

With a passion that's tantamount to sin.

But can only gaze on and keep emotions within

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My heart, closed tight so no one may guess,

Especially her, my strong fighting princess.

If my feelings came to light and I were to express

Rejection would soon follow, not the coveted "Yes."

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That is how I came to this hiding place

I trekked to ever-so carefully, no trace

Left as to my whereabouts. She will soon grace

My eyes with her form, causing my heart to race

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At the sight of her body, such a splendor

To behold. She strips and does best to render

Me weak-kneed, willing to completely surrender

To her body (and spirit), which is firm yet tender.

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Rivers trail down her skin, slowly driving me insane.

I want to follow their paths, desire causing pain

Both external and internal, but I'm forced to abstain

Movement and instead revel in the visible body and bane.

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I suddenly feel improper, the robes I don causing shame

To swell within my heart and mind. "You're to blame,"

I whisper at her; she's the reason I felt the need and came

With voyeuristic intentions and a craving to feed the flame.

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It is not just her body, though lithe and slim,

Which draws me here once more. Not a whim,

But a deep longing in my core that will not dim

My want to see her as she comes to wash and swim.

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Along with physical I want her soul, her spirit, her heart;

Her entire being is quite a work of art,

From her fiery temper which fuels the smart

I feel at the flick of her weapon to when-I start.

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Her head is inclined to my supposed clandestine spot.

Sharp eyes search and I feel as though already caught.

I want to run from the upcoming beating but just squat

And wait for inevitability. Vision rests on me and I become hot.

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"Pervert!" she screams and reaches for nearby clothes

To cover her majesty, and still I cannot move, I froze

The moment she saw me. I stiffen for the blows

That will come, yet my need for her stays-even grows.

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A familiar slap back at camp the forest will produce.

Kagome-sama shakes her head, finding my ways no use

And Shippo silently agrees. Only the half-demon is not obtuse

To the truth in my ways and the affection no pain can reduce.


Hope y'all liked it! Threw it together on a whim and now I have a good idea for the next 3 installments so get ready. BTW, do you peeps like the different rhyme schemes I'm using or would you rather me keep to one format. Feedback peoples!

Rebecca Ashley

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