Thank you Kirsten for the addition of your two commas to my written copy of this chapter.
"Why Severus, why? What did she do to you? Why did you kill her?"
"She killed Draco, Minerva. Why do you care anyway?" Severus asked
"I loved her, Severus. Now she's gone." Minerva sobbed into her hands.
"Minerva, she killed Draco because he was gay."
"I hate you!" Minerva grabbed her wand and uttered a spell at Severus.
When the clouds of smoke dissipated Severus was gone. In his place though was a small bat.
Minerva stalked away and Severus, still being disoriented, didn't see Mrs. Norris creeping up on him.
Mrs. Norris jumped on Severus and sank her fangs into his flesh. Severus squeaked and struggled, but it was no use.
Mrs. Norris ate him.
Really, really short I know. Well, at least short when compared to some of the other chapters I have written. It just happened that way though.
Kirsten: I found a comma you didn't add.
Amber: YAY! Another chapter posted. Still working on writing the ninth though. I'm kinda worried about your mental stability tough. I really, really miss you a lot. Kisses and Hugs