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The Animal team had made a huge tree house out of bamboo. N. Gin was pouting. Ripper-roo went up to N. Gin and started talking in his laughy language. "Ha hoo hee ha ha hoo?" Translation, "What's the matter with you Rocket Head?"
N. Gin ignored the comment and sighed. "The team is called team animal, BUT I AM NOT AN ANIMAL!"
"Hee hroo." Translation "Sucks to be you."
Team Mask's shelter was…I'm ashamed to say…a bush. At least, until Py-ro set it on fire. Then their shelter was a rock. A really small rock.
Team Bandicoot's shelter was a hut made of logs. Crunch did all the work. Pinstripe was polishing his gun. "My precious…. "
Ripper-roo snuck into Team Bandicoot's shelter. He pulled out two sticks of dynamite and ignited them. He set them down, laughing evilly. But he forgot he was supposed to run. The dynamite exploded and the shelter was gone, black soot left behind. Ripper-roo was sitting right where the shelter used to be, covered in soot.
The Bandicoot Team surrounded Ripper-roo, not looking too happy. Ripper-roo blinked two times and Pinstripe aimed his gun at Ripper-roo. Ripper-roo let out a screech of fear and ran away.
Cortex slapped his forehead. "I forgot WHY I created him…"
Digigirl0093: My chapters may be short. Don't bug me. PLEASE. This is my first Crash bandicoot story.