EVERYONE READ THIS IMMIDIATLY OR I WON'T UPDATE AGAIN! Ok for one of my next coming chapters I'm going to have Ash ask Kurama about Hiei's Jagan eye. Well I need a good definition for what it exactly is or at least something detailed enough. If you have a definition please send it to me in a review A.S.A.P!
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Chapter 4
With a smirk towards Suiichi (Kurama) Hiei turned back towards Ash. Grabbing her arm he flittered away (You know with those cool black lines.) from view.
Reappearing in a empty part of the park he let her go. "W-what was that?" She said wide-eyed. (Again, oh sorry for my intrusions I'll try and stop) 'That's odd I was sure the first thing she asked was 'what are you''
"That that was my running." (I don't know if it really is or not but I'm just going to say it's his running.) Hiei said sitting in front of Ash.
"But, it felt more like teleporting." Ash said her eyes still wide, "Demon speed comes in handy now and then." He said shrugging his shoulders. 'I don't get it, he acts as if this is something you see everyday.' Ash said.
"I do see this everyday." Hiei said plainly but it did make Ash jump back a bit. "How did you read my mind?" She asked slightly leaning forward.
"It's nothing, back to explaining things. I am a demon." He said once again plainly. "So is Suiichi, that, that who you see is not his true form. No he was once a infamous fox named Youko (sp?) Kurama. So from now on when you're with us call him Kurama." Hiei explained cringing as he spoke Su-Kurama's name. (Yeah I'm going to switch over and start calling him Kurama.)
"I don't get it, why are you telling me these things?" Ash asked looking down. "You're the one who wanted to know." Hiei stated rolling his eyes slightly. Ash was silent for a moment thinking all of this new information over when another question came to mind.
"Is that why every time I'm around you I always feel very odd about what's under your headband?" He starred at her for a moment considering what she said. "Yes." He simply said and looked away.
"What is under it?" Ash asked leaning forward, he gave her a menacing glare before looking away.
"Nothing just let it be." With that he was gone just like before. 'What'd I do?' Ash asked herself as she got up in hopes of finding her way back to her friends.
Hiei's P.O.V
I disappeared from her view and reappeared back with the fox and every one else. "There you are what happened?" Kurama asked walking over to me.
"I told her the truth, about most things." I stated and leaned against a tree. He stood next to me and copied my actions.
"How did she take it?" "Hn." Translation: find out for yourself. "If she took it well why did you come back so suddenly?" The fox asked I could sense his eyes looking at me. How come he can read me like an open book?
"Fox how is it you can read me so well?" I asked not really knowing it until it was said.
"Hiei after a few hundred years of being by your side, you become really easy to read. Even if others can't." Why can't his answers just be short and simple?
"She was starting to ask about my Jagan." I said knowing I was defeated. "Let me guess you didn't know how to tell her about it so you retreated?"
"Hn," translation: yes. "So you just left her somewhere." The fox said starting to walk away. "Where are you going fox?" I asked still looking away, but I had picked up the sound of his footsteps.
"Someone has to go find Ash." I didn't reply to him, but just jumped up on my familiar branch.
Normal P.O.V
Ash walked silently until she saw Kurama walking in her direction. "Hey Kurama." She said running up to him.
"Hello, I see Hiei really did explain a lot." He said giving her a smile. "Let's just say it was vivid but very effective." She said as they continued to walk.
"Yes Hiei has a way of making his description short, but it is always enough to get the message through." Kurama stated as they entered the clearing to where Yusuke and Kuwabara where.
"Can you walk me home, I have to ask you some things?" Ash asked slightly embarrassed for her randomness.
"Of coarse, but don't be so embarrassed." 'Is he reading my mind?' Ash asked herself her eyes growing wide. "Sort of, let's just say I'm good at hearing people's thoughts, blame Hiei." He said chuckling a bit as they exited the park.
"So what did you want to ask me?" He asked as they turned down the street. "I want to know what is under Hiei's headband." Ash stated seriously.
A/N: SEE! Now you know why I need this definition! PLEASE SEND MY YOUR DEFINITIONS OF HIEI'S JAGAN EYE! IF YOU DON'T I CAN'T UPDATE! Until next time and until I get you definitions this is me signing off.
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