Ok now believe it or not I'm updating even though I told everyone I needed idea's, why you ask? Because my wonderful second owner to this story Kevaiss gave me like Hiei's WHOLE life starting form his birth and by the way sorry I can only use parts of it. ANYWAY next time I need idea's please be sure to submit them.

Also if everyone looks at my profile it says at the bottom that if anyone has any quotes they like and want posted I am open and will be more then happy to put them in. Also so they don't look like mine I'll put your name because you submitted it to me! Please do this I feel like the only one without quotes!

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TheFlameAlchemist: (sorry if I spelled your name wrong!) Yeah we all have those moments I do like all the time lol!

Zero D. Allen: Thanks I'll try!

Kevaiss: Ok so are you really a girl cause that confused me a little? It's ok if you don't come up with anything, and I usually update by 6 or 7. Thanks for the update about the pop tart! Oh and of coarse your idea's don't suck, if no one uses them I'll be the one to use them, there awesome! Next! Of coarse I don't hate you so much for going out of your way to get that long summery I'll be using it! LUV YA!

Kurayamihikari: Any words would be fine! I really enjoy learning Japanese but i only learn it from fanfictions lol! By the way your not a suckup. If you have any ideas and you want toreview them to me be sure to do so i take ideas from people uther then Kevaiss to!

Ok I'm still accepting QUOTES AND IDEA'S!

Chapter 11

Previously: "Alright I'll tell you." And he began (I know that's short but it was the last thing that was said.)

NOW

(Please don't yell at me if this is wrong, from what I know and from what Kevaiss sent me it seems right but still please don't yell if it's wrong.)

"I'm sure you don't know what a koorime (sp?) Are do you?" Ash shook her head. "It's a type of demon race that is only females and have ice powers." "I'm a koorime, my mother broke the koorime law and mated with a fire demon, producing me and my sister."

"You have a sister, who?" Ash broke in. "Her name is Yukina, she was born a full ice koorime and was left be, but me, I was a male and instead of being ice I am fire. This could not be, so before they threw me off the koorime cliff down into the rest of the Makai (sp?) the elders proclaimed me a 'forbidden child.'

Then my mother's friend took the two tear gems my mother cried, gave one to Yukina and one to me, then they threw me off to my death."

"But fortunately you didn't die." Ash pointed out putting a small smile on.

"Unfortunately, I lived." Hiei said correcting her. She gave him a questioning look and before she could ask he continued the story.

"I was barley alive, not able to protect myself, and not wanted by anyone. A band of thieves found me and took me. They taught me survival skills, how to fight, and things like that. After awhile they deserted me, fearing I would become to strong, they hadn't even been able to sense that I was already an A class demon at this young age."

"And that's good?"

"Yes, demons can train there whole lives and still barley be an A class." (I don't know if this is right but for my story it is.)

"I had heard from someone that my sister had left the safety of the Koorime Island to search for me, her mysterious brother she had never known." "I went to a demon named Shigure to get a…" He paused and looked away.

'I'll hold off on that part she doesn't need to know.' Hiei told himself searching for a spot to come back to.

"Anyway after awhile I went in search of the famous Yoko Kurama. But when I had found him he had taken a form of a human as you see today. After fighting, I lost; he healed me for some reason. I left and came back to him a few years later to steal the three mystical items.

He had some other reason for wanting the 'mirror of forlorn hope' and went to use it. Yusuke being a spirit detective beat both of us as well as a fool named Goki (sp?) and instead of being sent to the spirit jail Kurama volunteered us to work with Yusuke, that's it."

Ash was speechless. "So from what you told me your not very good at fighting then are you?" Ash asked with a smirk on her face. Hiei starred back at her and in a flash was gone reappearing again behind her with his katana on her neck.

"I'm a lot stronger then anyone here. Kurama even has a picture of when we went to a Dark Tournament and I blew out half of the stadium with one attack." He said removing the blade and starting to walk away. (The time he used his Dragon Of The Darkness Flame for the second time. IT WAS AWSOME!)

"Where are you going?" Ash asked stopping him suddenly. He didn't answer but just disappeared from sight.

'Now that I think about it he did sound like he skipped a part in his story.' Ash thought starting to walk away. "I did but you don't need to know it." Came Hiei's voice from behind.

Ash jumped and turned around, "Can you read my thoughts to?"

"Yes." 'I can communicate to.' He said in her head.

"That's kind of creepy, how can you do that?"

"It's none of your business. I told you my story, now it's your turn tell me your history." He said leaning on the railing again. Ash was hesitant but decided she could.

"I never really was told where I was born. I remember living with my mom when I was young and we seemed happy. But one night she came into my room and told me that she had to go." Ash looked at the ground

"I don't remember much about her I was still small, but after words my Dad started to get abusive towards me, and as you can tell it only got worse. I learned over time that it was better to just stay alone and not make friends we moved about every two or three months until now. Well that's my history not very long." Ash said smiling.

'How is it she can live threw so much and yet she still finds a way to put on a smile?' Hiei asked himself still looking at her.

"How come you think it's so unfortunate that you lived?" She asked bringing Hiei out of his thoughts.

"I live this life constantly carrying the mark of 'forbidden child.' No one could love a forbidden, one thrown out by there own people. I would have committed suicide years ago if it weren't for Yuknia, having to protect her." He seemed hesitant to talk about it.

"There's always Kurama and me to!" Ash said with a happy smile. Hiei just starred at her with his unemotional face. 'Maybe so I just hope you'll live that long.' He said looking away.

(Ok what Hiei meant by this was his urges to kill her and how they can take over him and like go and kill her, you get the point)

End for now

Ok I'm done for now if anyone has ideas about what should come out I'm open for exceptions. Just review them to me and I'll get back to you on them! I'm going to keep this little message short now so until next time keep sending those quotes and idea's and I'll take them!