OK now everyone reviewed me and I was happy about that. I'm going to put this even if you DON'T look in my reviews thing but yeah, if you do you will notice one of the reviews addressed myself! I was at school, in the library on the Internet, got board and thought I'd review to my own story lol. Just so you no!

Reviewers

LonelyInDarkness: Ok I can't read my own handwriting so I'm just going to put what I CAN read. I'm just as obsessed, as you and I might need Kurama's later. You have struck an idea in my head, YAY!

Kevaiss: I like your idea and totally understand; I think sometime I'll use that idea.

Saiya-Flame-Urameshi: She's a demon, and it wasn't really meant to be fluffy.

READ FIRST! Ok I was rereading over my previous chapters and I wasn't sure if I had really said if Ash was a demon or not so I'll say it now, Ash is a Fire demon, kind of like Hiei but not Koorime. Anyway the reason she hasn't been doing anything about it is because she doesn't really believe it yet. Hope that cleared everything up!

Chapter 12 Don't blame me if this one is bad I didn't really have any inspiration so it's coming right out of my head!

It didn't take much longer for Kuwabara and Yusuke to come running up the steps of the temple. "Ha I beat you!" Kuwabara said joyfully down to Yusuke who came up later.

"Shut up would ya! Hey Ash, didn't really plan on seeing you out here." Yusuke said tipping his head slightly. (Lol) "Yeah I needed some fresh air." Ash said looking back to where Hiei had previously sat, but he was gone.

'I wonder where he always is?' Ash asked herself before walking into the house with Yusuke and Kuwabara. "Hey Kurama, where's shorty?" Kuwabara asked sitting on the couch.

"Probably in the trees around the temple as usual." Kurama said entering the living room. "I'm going for a walk." Ash announced getting up and walking out the door.

Ash looked down the long stairway and began her way down. It didn't take long for her klutz self to take effect; soon she tripped and was beginning to fly forward. She let out a scream as she went forward ready to flip her way down the stairs.

Suddenly a strong arm grabbed her in her stomach. "For a demon you really are a klutz." Came Hiei's voice as he sat her down. "Why do you say that? It can't be true." Ash asked sitting on the steps.

"Because it's true, any demon could tell just by looking at you." He turned away. "Then I must be a weak one, I can't do anything." Ash said smiling a bit.

"You are, but that doesn't mean you can't get better."

"Then will you teach me?"

"Hn."

"Please." Hiei just looked at her thinking about how to tell her no. 'Come on Hiei you're the only fire demon around.' Kurama said entering his mind.

Hiei growled at the fox making Ash wonder if she had pushed him to far. 'No.' 'Maybe your right, it might be hard for you to contain your urge to kill her if your trying to teach her attacks.'

'I can contain myself just fine, and if you were so worried about her you wouldn't have let her walk around the temple by herself.' (He has a point.)

'If you can contain yourself then what reason do you have not to teach her?' 'Fine.'

"The fox has persuaded me to train you to fight and so on. I have to tell you though it will not be easy." Ash was a little confused by how Kurama could persuade him if he wasn't around but perked up instantly.

"Great!" 'I still want to know how he can talk to people in there thoughts.' Ash thought as Hiei rolled his eyes at her happiness.

A/N yes I know it's short, but if you want more chapters you have to give me idea's and just from this chapter that wasn't good at all you can tell how I am if left on my own!

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