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Ok now I will go onto my uh my… chapter probably my 24 chapter! Also I will try and make it long just for this day!

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Chapter 24 deathly black eyes

Ash sat there and looked at Hiei, she finally had someone who loved her, and she was happy for it.

(By the way I forgot to mention that I have something WAY important to say at the end of this chapter regarding a story!)

She stood up and faced Hiei, "Come on we better get back." When she started to walk off Hiei who grabbed her hand stopped her.

"No, stay here." He said pulling her back. "We better have a training session also." He had an evil glint in his eye.

Ash smiled and let him pull her back onto the wall. "Ok." Hiei didn't let go of her hand and in an instant they were sitting at the bottom of a tree.

"Your so lucky you can move like that." Ash said getting up as Hiei did also. "You just have to practice for a while."

"Can you teach me to move like that?"

"Sure when I'm done with you, you will be able to move quicker then the eye can see." He explained taking off his katana and laying it to the side. (I know that would NEVER EVER happen but just for this please disregard it.)

Ash smiled at the possibilities that lay a head of her as she walked out to the middle of the clear spot.

"Can you summon fire?" Hiei asked walking out with is hands behind his back.

"Yes." Ash concentrated a little and a fire was emitted above her hand.

Hiei sighed; she had a long way to go. "Alright now attack me with everything you have."

Ash gapped, "You sure?"

"Yes." 'She can't do any damage but lets just try.' Hiei thought but he was soon to find out that he had taught her more then he had ever imagined.

She lowered her head and concentrated hard. Her normally black hair, started to get crimson highlights in it as power built up in her just waiting to be let go.

She opened her eyes finally reveling her normally blue eyes. (I forgot to say that in earlier chapters.) Were now a lifeless, deathly, hated black that looked as if they had never held any life in them.

Hiei stopped dead in his tracks at what he had released from her and knowing there was no turning back now. She pointed both her hands at him and in a instant a gigantic funnel of fire flew at Hiei.

He tried to dodge but something kept him right in his spot and he was hit dead on with know defenses. (I know I am so mean for doing that, but what can I say… at least it was detailed.)

He still stayed in his spot but an endless amount of flame burned even him. (Remember he's also a fire demon, or as far as I know he is correct me if I'm wrong.)

Ash felt terribly weak and fell to her knees and closed her eyes again waiting for her to get more energy to move. She opened her eyes again in a minute and looked over to where Hiei had originally been.

Now he was leaning on one knee with his head down. Ash for some reason could tell he was alive but seriously burned even though he was a fire demon himself.

"Hiei!" She just about shouted running over but not touching him for fear of hurting him.

"I have to admit." She let out a sigh. "You're a lot stronger then I would've imagined." He lifted his head and looked into her eyes and gave a small breath of relief when he saw she looked back to normal.

"Thanks um, are you alright now?" Ash asked noticing that some of the burns had started to go away.

"Yes, but that's enough, next time I'm training you to channel your energy or else you'll be like that in a fight." He said standing up and retrieving his katana.

"Ok. Are you that strong?" (That was a dumb question.)

Hiei smirked before answering. "Yes."

"Yeah right I'm better then the almighty Hiei." Ash said playfully as they walked back towards the temple.

"Let's just say when I get upset I have been known to blow out half a stadium." (It was the second time he used the Dragon of the Darkness Flam and it was AWSOME!)

Ash's eyes widened at that and could clearly imagine Hiei blowing up a stadium. "Could you show me?"

"No."

"Why?"

"Because it takes a lot of energy and it would be point less to blow up a forest for no reason."

Ash shook her head and grabbed Hiei's hand this took him by surprise as she took of running up the temple stairs.

"What is the meaning of this onna?" Hiei asked as he kept running, against his will of coarse. (What a way to talk to his knew love!)

"Come on koi I want Kurama to see what I did." Hiei didn't and couldn't say anything. She had called him 'love'.

They dashed up and into the house where Kurama now sat at the table reading his book. He looked over at them for a moment and then started laughing.

"Shut up fox." Hiei said looking away but he was beaten, but at least it was Ash that did it.

"Look at what I did Kurama, and in one blow to!"

"Wow, I never thought I would see Hiei beaten so easily. Is that why I sensed such enormous power?" He asked walking over and inspecting the small fire demon.

"Yeah it was awesome. I'll be back ok guys?" She said walking down the hall. Kurama nodded and turned back to Hiei.

"She truly does posses enormous power." Hiei said quietly.

"Why do you say that? Not because she beat you I hope."

"Not exactly fox. It was the way she did it." He said looking up and for once in both of Kurama's lives he thought he saw fear in Hiei's eyes.

"Explain please." Kurama said as they sat at the table, worry was written all over Kurama's face.

"Before she sent all that fire out at me everything about her changed, her hair, even the way she fights." He let out a breath. "But it was her eyes that did it."

"What do you mean Hiei?" He could tell this was a serious matter.

Before she fired that attack her eyes turned this deathly, hatred black." "It looked as if she had no soul and had never felt happiness."

"That truly is a scary thought to think about, but I guess you should know since you also haven't felt much happiness in your long life." Kurama explained leaning on his fist.

Hiei couldn't deny this, it was true, he just sat there and thought, why would something like that happen to such a good spirited demon?

He couldn't put his finger on it but they both knew that she would have to be monitored carefully until they figured it out. Also maybe it would be best if they took her to Koenma, maybe he would know.

A/N: Ok please review, I'm going to keep this short so I can talk to you about another story I'm writing.

Ok I haven't posted it yet so don't go looking for it but it's called 'Memory loss.' And it is just as the title says. Obviously it will be centered on Hiei because he would do best for this type of story. Anyway Hiei losses his memory and doesn't remember anyone! Now he must deal with memory flashes and feelings from his, 'other side.' But now he is a happy person and the gang starts to really wonder if he WANTS to become the old Hiei again!

It will be better then it sounds, I just had the idea last night and I HAD to start writing it, I already wrote how it happened and everything so please just review to me what you think and if it DOES come up I'll let you know!

Also if you think it SHOULD be uploaded please tell me what type of story it should be. (drama, anguish, humor, that sort of thing.) Also I have another idea for it and that would be SOOOO funny to do and it includes Yukina so just review and I'll see what I can do.

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