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Ryu-Dragon
Is it just me or are my authors notes getting longer by the chapter?
Chapter 29 Captured.
Hiei came in a little after Ash went to bed. "It's about time you came in, did you find anything?" Kurama asked looking over at Hiei who had his head hung.
He picked it up slowly his eyes very glassy like he hadn't slept in weeks, "I found out Ryu is a telepath." Kurama got the hint.
"Oh no what did he do?" He was now paying full attention to the situation.
"I used my Jagan to find him but he caught me somehow, identified me, and locked me in my own mind."
"Wow that's really bad. What do we do about this situation?" (And I thought Kurama was the smart one.)
"I don't know fox, somehow we need to get to him before he gets to Ash." Hiei explained.
(I have a question I know it is SO random and in the middle of the story but has anyone TRULY thought about how tall 4'10 really is? I mean when I look at it and try to imagine Hiei being that tiny without his hair it just makes me laugh.)
(Now back to the story.)
"You're right."
"That means no more leaving her for your own needs." Hiei snapped giving him a glare but failed miserably.
Kurama just smiled, "Have you told Ash that you love her?" He asked a wicked grin on his face.
Hiei looked at him sternly. "Love is a big word fox, I cannot love I am the Forbidden that's just the way it is." Hiei admitted with a small sigh.
"And when have you Hiei ever followed anyone's rules? You love her and you know it and you don't do well at all of hiding it." Kurama said earning a growl from Hiei but he knew he was right.
"I do love her fox and I did admit to her." Hiei finally admitted considering no one was there. (What would happen if someone WAS there and heard him?)
"What did she do when you told her?"
"She said she loved me back." He admitted in a whisper, the words seemed so wrong to him, like he didn't deserve them at all.
"How did you feel?"
"What?"
"How did you feel when she told you that?" Kurama wondered.
"I don't know I liked the feeling of being loved back for once I guess." He said resting on the table.
"You no how much joy you probably brought to her by telling her that?"
"You're being foggy again." Hiei said closing his eyes. (He means like Kurama's not being vivid with his details and things.)
"Think about it, she has no family now, and when she did they abused her physically AND mentally. Then someone comes along and tells her they love her and would give their life for her. How do you think she would react to that?"
Hiei eyed him with a disgusted look on his face.
"Don't push it fox boy. It probably felt good to her to hear that." Hiei said closing his crimson eyes again.
"You're such a mystery Hiei you think you figure one thing out and then there is always something else to uncover." Kurama said getting down to Hiei's height on the table.
Hiei scoffed and said, "Hn, tell me something I don't know."
"Alright then it's late I'm going to bed because Ash and I have school in the morning. I suggest you get some sleep also for once in your life." Hiei growled at Kurama as he walked down the hall chuckling to himself.
'I should get to sleep but I can't, I'm afraid… afraid of what will happen and where I will be when I wake up.' Hiei thought but could feel his eyelids getting heavy.
"That's right Hiei, you should be afraid. Because when you're asleep I have control." Said Ryu from a dark room some ways away.
There were so many options he could do to get Ash immediately, or he could just have a little fun with tormenting Kurama or Hiei.
Although Hiei had become aware of him and his power he would no doubt continue to keep looking for him. Little did Hiei know Ryu new exactly when someone was trying to look for him and he always had a forceful come-back.
He made up his mind, he would wait and take full action tomorrow afternoon. He leaned over and pressed a button. "Kanna." He said letting it go and waiting for a reply.
"Yes master Ryu?" Came a female voice. She did not sound in the least bit cheerful like she had been kept there against her will and forced to do many things without rest.
"Bring up my plans sheet." He ordered and automatically the screen changed to large portions of paper that held his different plans.
'Excellent.' He thought smiling evilly to himself. (Think Hiei when he smiles, yeah when he does you know something's going to happen lol.)
THE NEXT AFTERNOON
Ash and Kurama walked down the sidewalk together discussing how much homework they had and why teachers gave them homework in the first place.
"Hello Kurama, hello Ash." Both stopped mid-step and turned around slowly to meet Ryu.
"Ryu!" Kurama almost shouted going for his rose whip. Before he could Ryu snapped his fingers and everything but Ryu and Ash turned into a light blue freezing everything in place.
"What did you do?" Ash said angrily looking from Kurama's frozen form to Ryu who had a wicked grin on his face.
"I didn't do a thing, she did."
He said stepping aside to reveal a girl about Ash's age and height standing there her hands up but trembling and the whites of her eyes a light blue like the rest of the surroundings.
She had a little less then shoulder length dark blue hair and normal green eyes a little lighter then Kurama's would be and her lips were a natural sea blue color.
She wore all black matching Ryu and she held no emotion on her face but the way her hands and body trembled it looked like she was being forced to do these things
"Oh a proper introduction is in order Ash this is Kianna I use her like I will soon you. See like you she is very powerful but she isn't a fire demon." He explained as Ash looked at the helpless girl.
"No she is or was a water demon, but when I got her I transformed her into a psychic demon."
"That's sick." Ash said her head shaking from side to side.
"Oh don't worry I won't change you, no your much to powerful and valuable for that. But that will all be explained later. Now if you don't mind please come freely." Ryu said snapping his fingers again.
This time however Kianna dropped her arms and sent out a wave of energy in the form of cuffs.
"No!" Ash shouted using some of her energy to burn away the energy. "Oh this is fun I should have known you wouldn't come quietly. No matter though that will be changed I will get you and your power."
Kianna sent out another pair of cuffs but this time they went right threw her fire but they did take in the immense heat. They slapped onto her arms and her legs pinning her together.
She shrieked out as the heat from them hit her skin and she fell to the cement. "Now that wasn't very difficult, you know you could have made it easy on yourself and just come when I asked first." Ryu said motioning for Kianna to levitate her.
"Now I collected my prize for winning this round we should be going. Kianna release the time when we go threw the portal." Ryu instructed calling forth a black tunnel that he went over to.
Kianna did as told putting the now unconscious Ash threw the tunnel and making time normal once again before she went threw herself.
Kurama opened his eyes to find himself alone with his whip drawn, but no Ash. 'Oh no, Hiei is not going to like this.' Kurama told himself kicking himself the whole time as he ran as fast as he could towards the temple.
A/N: Well that turned out fine now did it not? I liked it and I think I did a good job at making it long for everyone to. Although you're all probably upset I left with such a cliffhanger. What can I say I like suspense?
Also Kianna is going to be another OC that I'm bringing in and after everything is done she will fall in love with someone and they will love her back. Can anyone guess who? I want to hear from you all!
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