Revelation

Same as before.

What happened to my reviews?

This story is the ponderings of my twisted mind. I will not change it just because of personal emails asking me too. I do however appreciate suggestions. If you want to see something in my stories then let me know. Just don't get indignant if I don't agree with your perception.

After two hours Jack was fuming. Riddick was who knows where and she was getting very

hungry. She knew Riddick would kill her if she left without him, but apparently he wasn't too

worried about her nutritional value. After thirty more minutes of stomach growlings Jack decided

to fuck with Riddick and got up. She tucked the extra shiv she kept in the back of her pants and

nervously made her way down to the little "city" to get some food. She timidly walked around

the well worn paths until she came to the place Riddick had showed her on one of there few

occasions out together. An older man was sitting in front of what looked to be the mess hall. She

had never actually eaten in there since Riddick had a hard on about her being around the other

convicts. He always barked at her to keep her eyes to herself and not to run off. The man stood

up when she came nearer the entrance and for a brief second she had the fleeting urge to run. He

must have seen the deer in the headlights look because he quickly shot out his hand as a

welcome gesture.

"Hey miss, didn't mean to scare ya. My names Chaz, I'm one of your husband's friends."

He left his hand out in the open space until Jack realized he intended for her to shake it.

She took his hand and then realized he was talking about Riddick. Everyone in this place

had to know she belonged to him. She never thought he would say they were husband

and wife though. She was picturing more of the "that's my bitch" repertoire.

"Uh nice to meet you, I'm Jack."

Chaz smiled and showed unusually nice teeth for a Slam inmate.

"Yep knew that. Everyone does. So you getting something to eat? I'll go with ya." Chaz

made his little speech and gently guided Jack into the mess hall.

She looked at the slop they were serving and almost changed her mind. She hated eating

the nasty shit but Riddick ranted it was full of vitamins and that she needed to keep her

strength up.

"It wasn't wise to come down here by yourself ya know." Chaz winked at her. "Good

thing I was down her to keep an eye on ya." He filled up a bowl for her and guided her to

a seat. "Riddick would be really mad."

Jack scrunched her nose up at the nasty food but dipped her make shift spoon into it

Anyway.

"Yeah well Riddick hasn't been around for hours and I was really hungry." She didn't

know why she answered so honestly but the man before her felt almost fatherly. She

hoped she could trust him.

Rudd came walking in a couple minutes later and missed Jack completely due to Chaz's

size.

"Is Riddick back from his fuck session with Lily yet? I got some things I need to ask

him." Rudd was taken back when a spoon and bowl went flying to the floor.

Jack couldn't believe what she had just heard. Why was Riddick down her fucking

someone when he hadn't even made a pass at her for three whole fucking months?

Was she not desirable now that merc had raped her? Apparently it wasn't due to his lack

of sex drive.

So he is just a lying piece of shit and I thought he was just being a gentleman.

She scoffed at that thought and turned to the older man.

Chaz stood up trying to comfort her. Jack held out her hand for him to shake again.

"Thank you for the food Chaz." She said dazed before heading back to her cell. She

didn't see the dark figure of the old man follow her concerned for her safety, all the way

back to her "home".