Revelation
Is anyone not ready for this? Smut ahead, if you're easily offended then don't read this chapter.Thanks to all the ppl who reviewed chapter 17 and 18. Am I loosing readers or are ppl just not reviewing anymore? Can someone let me know? I STILL need a beta come on ppl I need someone to read my next few chapters and give me feedback. I'm getting desperate here.
Jack waited a few more minutes to see if Riddick would come in or slink away back into the
darkness. To her surprise he came in the cell and sat with his back away from her, giving her the
privacy he thought she wanted. His actions just fueled the fire raging inside her. She was going
to risk everything. If he pushed her away she would be his friend and nothing more. She prayed
with all her heart that he would still want her. She tried to swallow but her mouth had gone
incredibly dry. Grabbing the not very clean towel she had gotten from Chaz, she wrapped herself
up and stepped out of the basin. She slowly walked up to Riddick's back, almost losing her
nerve to push things forward. She stepped back away from him and then shook her head.
This has got to be done.
She again walked forward and laid a hand on Riddick's shoulder.
"Riddick?" She sounded meek to her own ears and winced. She knew he would hear the fear in
her voice. She just hoped he didn't think it was him causing it. She wasn't scared of him just
scared of the rejection he might throw her way.
I'd deserve it after what I did to him.
She tried to shut her own thoughts out, but her brain was spinning.
Riddick felt her hand on his shoulder and closed his eyes. He heard her call his name, questioning
him, asking for permission. He moved his head reveling more of his neck and shoulder to her
touch, inviting her to explore. Jack's heart began to race at the clear invitation Riddick had bid
her. He gave her permission to touch him, explore him. She felt his body relax and once again
hesitated.
"Jack you do or you don't. There is no maybe anymore. Not after what we've been through"
Riddick's voice rippled deep through her and she moved her body a little closer to his back.
Jack moved her hand lower running her fingertips over the bulging muscles in his arm. She was
again reminded how his skin was always warm to the touch and his body was as solid as oak.
She put her other hand on his shoulder and ran her nails lightly over his pectoral muscles. His
power was unquestionable. His body a fine tuned machine and running her hands over his chest
made her feel weak inside, made her legs a little wobbly.
Riddick took her hand as he stood up turning around to face her. He looked her right in the eye,
gauging her true intentions. He saw fear, want, longing. Her face was open and trustful and he
almost lost his self control. Instead he pulled her close to him and bent his head running his lips
across hers in a slow kiss. He did this to her over and over again using his tongue to gain
entrance to her mouth. Jack's brain was wheeling. She couldn't believe that Riddick was kissing
her like this. She had seen over the years a soft side of him but she always thought sex with him
would be like the porn vids she'd seen, rough and wild. After all Riddick was an animal. She put
her hand on the back of his head pulling his mouth even closer to hers. Her lips began to take the
lead and she felt a fever come over her. She wanted him now. She felt like she couldn't get
enough. Time was non existent. She couldn't tell if it had been five minutes or five hours. All she
knew was that if he didn't touch her soon she would explode. Riddick seemed to sense this
because he walked her to the bed laying her down and climbing on top of her body. He rested
himself between her legs and kissed her again, his hands moving under her shirt finding her
delicate nipples. He wet his fingers and rolled them lazily in his hand, her moans egging him on.
After a couple of minutes of running his fingers lightly in circles on her buds she was pushing up
into him. Riddick took it as a sign she wanted more and pulled her shirt completely off, stopping
to do the same to his. He ran his body up hers letting her feel how his chest felt against her. Then
he lowered his mouth to her breast and began an onslaught on her already perking nipples.
Riddick kissed every part of her upper body and a little while later unbuckled her pants helping
the very eager Jack push them down her thighs and off. He moved his hands to make light circles
on her thighs, chuckling when she groaned and pushed her hips up.
"Now Jack" Riddick whispered letting his finger move closer to the sensitive spot between her
legs. "Is this what you want?" He looked like a cat toying with a mouse right then. He finally after
much hip bucking on Jack's part let his finger hit the spot Jack never really knew could feel like
that. Moments later he had his hand over a screaming Jack as wave after wave of ecstasy hit her.
"Damn your loud" Riddick whispered hoarsely in her ear. He was having a hard time not flinging
his pants off and ravishing her. He was going to go slow because that's what Jack seemed to
want. He just hoped his turn would be sooner than later. Jack laid her head back down on the
bed and for a brief second Riddick thought she had forgotten about him.
Great cus my blue balls aren't bad enough.
Then she sat up pushing him on his back,he felt her hands go to his pants unbuckling him and
pushing his pants down over his legs.
"Take them off Riddick" Jack's voice was thick with lust and Riddick hurriedly followed her
orders. He almost laughed at the victory song going through his head.
I'm finally going to get some, finally going to get some.
She looked uncertain for a second until he guided her hand to his length. She moved her hand up
and down slowly and Riddick relished in the feel of her soft hand around him. To his surprise she
kissed the top of him sliding her mouth around him. He groaned commanding his hips not to buck
on her.
"Jack" He croaked out running his fingers through her hair.
She moved positions and kissed him one last time before getting on her back again. She let her
legs open a little and whispered in the sexiest voice Riddick had ever heard,
"Richard B. Riddick I want you now."
Riddick didn't need anymore encouraging as he got between her legs slowly pushing in her. He
settled himself all the way in and stilled. Jack closed her eyes waiting to adjust to his size. After a
minute Riddick pulled out pushing himself back in again, causing Jack to scream. Riddick put his
mouth close to her ear.
"I'm sorry Jack, I'm sorry for everything."
Jack closed her eyes trying to believe that she wasn't dreaming. She had no idea anything could
feel so good. She could feel herself about to go over the cliff again and held on closer to Riddick
as he continued his assault on her body. Jack clenched around Riddick as her orgasm over took
her. She raked her nails on his back.
"Oh Riddick oh god I love you." Riddick was at that last second before he to fell over the cliff
and pulled Jack closer to himself grinding into her. He almost stopped when he heard what she
said. Instead he let the tide take him letting himself loose inside her. When he lay still on top of
her, weight on his elbows he leaned so his lips were close to her ear.
"And Jack I love you too."
