Chibi Amo: Ookiekai, here's the update for all of my reviewers! OO;; Wow… 15 reviews in one chapter, that's a RECORD.
Anywhoo, hope you enjoy the new chapter, a major plot twist is about to come in! XD
BIT BEAST NAMES:
Seirriyu: Dragoon
Byakko: Drigger
Suzaku: Dranzer
NOTE: To whom it may concern, Rin, Gou, and Makoto are not OC's. They are the original children of Takao, Kai, and Rei and Mao. Read the manga for more details.
Just Where The Hell ARE We?
Gou fought the urge not to voice his frustration aloud, or start yelling at Makoto, one or the other. But he found it highly agitating not to do so.
In plain English, GOU HIWATARI WAS PISSED OFF. And that wasn't necessarily a good thing…
It had already been about two days since Rin had come to stay at the Hiwatari mansion, along with her mother and father. Not that it had changed things much, Rin was rebellious, and headstrong, but she knew how to behave.
Which was more than what he could say for Makoto… Currently, the bluenette was aggressively handling his beyblade, Seirriyu above the dark blue beydish in Gou's backyard, if you could call it that. Training ground was more like it…
Half an hour later, Gou's left eyebrow was twitching and a vein had popped in his forehead. He was about to strangle the youngest Kinomiya when Rin showed up again.
She had her pink hair done up in a pony-tail once again, and her gold eyes seemed to be sparkling with something no less then sheer enjoyment.
"Makoto-san! Do you wanna battle?" Rin asked smiling.
"Huh?" Makoto turned around to face Rin "Uh… Sure Rin. Don't blame me of Seirriyu completely wipes you out though!"
"We'll just see about that" Rin stated defiantly, getting out her grey beyblade, rip-cord and launcher from her pocket.
"Byakko isn't going to go down so easily!"
Rin and Makoto were both stationed by the beydish now, and Gou allowed his keen eyes to inspect the beyblades, checking for any strengths or weaknesses they might have.
"Hey Gou!" Rin called from the stadium, challenging the phoenix-wielder "You've GOTTA join this battle! Unless you're SCARED of little old me!"
Gou growled, debating weather to join the battle or not. If he did … Byakko and Seirriyu were putting up a good fight, it may be interesting.
But if he didn't… well… Rin would never let him live this down.
So he'd have to battle.
"SUZAKU! ATTACK!" Gou commanded as the fiery phoenix arose.
"BYAKKO!"
"SEIRRIYU!"
Needless to say, it was rather chaotic when all three bit beasts attacked each other at the same time.
Crashes, collisions, claws, fangs, talons… And the unmistakable cries of their bit beasts as they thirsted for victory.
Black light.
That was all any of them could see, simple a blinding black light engulfing the bit beasts whole.
"SEIRRIYU!" Makoto called out, reaching for his dragon bit.
"Makoto! BE CAREFUL!" Rin yelled, hoping that Makoto could hear her.
Gou didn't pay any heed to what was going on, other than the fact that Suzaku was being drawn into whatever the hell that black light was. Gou had only extended a gloved hand to reach for his faltering phoenix, when everything went black.
Voices…
Rin could hear so many different voices, but she could barely make out what they were saying.
"Are they okay?"
Who are you…?
"I don't know."
Where am I?
"Those two boys… they look like Takao and Kai… That's just weird."
Takao? Kai? Are they talking about Mr. Kinomiya and Mr. Hiwatari?
"They're not too badly injured are they?"
Injured? Were we hurt?
"No, I don't think so. They should be fine, but that must have been quite the nasty fall if that really DID happen-"
Wait! INJURED! MAKOTO AND GOU!
Rin jolted up in a cold sweat, breathing heavily as if she'd just been running.
All eyes in the room turned to look at the young pink haired girl, looking quite pale, as if she'd seen a ghost.
"G-Gou, Makoto! Where are they!" Rin asked in a frantic voice.
"Please, just calm down" Rin felt a hand on her shoulder from behind her, and a comforting voice met her ears. She turned to look at who it was, her gold eyes widening in immeasurable shock, and she shrieked aloud.
"OTO-SAN!"
The raven haired, gold eyed teenager behind her blinked. Indeed, Rin was in COMPLEATE AND TOTAL SHOCK! This guy looked almost exactly like a picture of her father she had seen before, he looked younger than the Oto-san she knew, but there was no doubt about it…
This guy really WAS her father.
Her "oto-san" blinked again.
"Why… did you just call me that?"
Rin shook her head in mute shock. She couldn't say a word.
"D'you think the kid's on crack Rei?" Came a new voice, another teen standing behind her supposed father, one with dark blue hair and roan red eyes, wearing a baseball cap…
It was Mr. Kinomiya.
"… She doesn't look to be any older than 13 Takao." Stated another, a man with two toned blue hair… MR. HIWATARI!
This was all too much for Rin, her eyes promptly rolled to the back of her head, and she fainted.
END
Chibi Amo: YAY! Yet another chappie bites the dust! XD
Short, I know. Barely 4 pages, but I got it done ne? Thank's out to all of my wonderful readers/reviewers! All 15 of ya!
R&R
JA NE!
Closing Quote: I'm an idiot, not stupid. Kuwabara's stupid – A YuYu Hakusho fanfic
-Chibi Amo