Hehehe, Hiyo readers,MaikaiTantei here.Id like to start with THANKYOU! its not much but i got the most reviews ever on last chappy and im happy with it!
also, Im sorry i took so long but my mom just got married on friday which was also my grandmas birthday and alot of stuff has come up...sadly the same friday my grandma was moved to a nursing home cause shes been ill...happy 83rd birthday? Im not sure how old she is...80 something...
anyhows, i stalled long enough with that lame mini skit chapter lol so i could make up for the time it took me to make up this chappy...chapter number 6! in this chapter everything is revealed...Will it be Yuu? or shalt it be Botan? or neither? who knows:shrugs: your in for a suprise! or are you?
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anyhows...Happy reading...dont forget to Review! also in your reviews you can make suggestions for the next chappy...i already know what i want the next chapter to be about, but i wouldnt mind adding somthing a reader suggestedo so plz review, it will power me up enough to write next chapter! ok...ill shut up now and let your read Ja Ne!
CHAPTER 6
"Test of the Heart-Botans truth Revealed"
i misnamed it...should be "Test of the Heart-Hiei's Truth Revealed" but either way it still works...after all, its not the title of the chappy that counts right? lol
LAST CHAPTER:
Yuu smirked, wrrping her arms around him, pressing him against her, touching her lips to his...oh how soft her lips were against his. and how firey she kissed him, making hiei burn up inside as if she was the fire demon. Now, just because he was a demon, doesnt mean a thing. He was still a young man, and they could only be pushed so far before they get aroused. THis firery kiss, on top of the fact he was laying on her, struck him, and he was aroused indeed...
This struck Botan...He had been kissed pasionately by the stubborn Yuu Katsume...What a dishonerable thing to do. "grrrr" botan clenched her fists at the site
. Hieis face flushed a smooth tone of red, only to turn redder when she had started licking around his lips to requesnt access. He of course wasnt THAT weak so he resisted all temptations.
She shrugged his refusel to let her, and did it anyways, forcing her tongue into the wet cavern of his mouth. With that action, Botan shrieked, What a dirty thing to do to hiei! but why wasnt hiei trying to get away? He was Letting her do this? No, he is jaganshi hiei, a feared fire demon! He wouldnt possibly allow her to touch her grimy tounge to the delicate roof of his mouth? would he? Oh! this was so aggitating to the ferry onna.
With the thoughts of the slimey evil Yuu doing this to hiei, Botan took ahold of the moment, making her oar appear and smacking the demongirl once again as hard as she could this time perhaps permanatly disarming the greenhaired grassmanipulator from kissing or touching hiei like that ever again!
Botan poofed her oar away, grumbling. She glared at hiei whos face was that of a shocked koorimes. "B-Botan..." he winced, actually thankful that the baka ferry onna knocked Yuuout. but of course he wouldnt admit it.
Meanwhile, in a warehouse someplace in the town, Yusuke was awaking.
He was still weakheaded...from bloodloss...and groggy. "mnph...where the heck am i" he managed to sit up and rub the back of his head. He had a slight concusion.
when hiei had took him there, he quickly without hesitation, threw Yusuke down and went back to bussinuss where Yuu and her partner Airen had been waiting. His head was throbbing and he couldnt remember much of anything...since hiei had easily jogged his memory, only leaving minor parts dwelling in his head. he layed back down, unable to catch any balence...he shouted"Damnit Hiei! where the hell am it"
Hiei sensed Yusuke had awoken. "The moron spirit detectives up from his slumber" he hissed.
Botan peeked at Hiei and stared. "What are you looking at Damn Baka onna" Botan jumped back"Oh nothing" she said as she formed a cats face and began to lick her 'paws'.
Hiei knew she was up to something. "Tell me or else i wont hesitate to murder you in cold blood"
Botan snickered"You killed EVERYONE in cold blood so it wouldnt be much of a suprise :P" she laughed.
Hiei groaned, and hissed back"At least ill be free'd from your idiocy" he said.
Botan would flash a victory sign, to declare her early win. "How would you think Koenma would react if you killed the best ferry onna on the block" She snickered again.
"Whatya thinking about"
"huh?"
"will you shut up baka onna"
"Did you like it"
"hn"
"Did you like it when she kissed you"
"why should i tell you"
Botan would fidget her fingers. "I just wanted-"
"Keep out of my bussiness"
Botan could see his face flush bright red...she knew what that meant...he did like it...she knew it!
But no matter how nice it sounded to have somthing to pick on him about, and use for revenge, she didnt feel alright about it...In fact, Hiei could notice her soft toned skin turn pale...Paler than the moon in january.
"whats YOUR problem" he hissed over to her in a deep breath.
Then, as if it didnt seem wierd enough, her face rushed from the pale moon tone, to a bright red. "N-no R-r-reason..." she said quietly.
"I highly dought someone as 'cheerful' as you would get so down over nothing" he said. Botan grinned, But then covered it up with her hand.
"what is going on in her puny head" he said...then again...her crisp blue powered hair flowed over her lovely face...equallizing her puny mind...no...she WAS intelligent...smarter than she leads on. She acted a little dopey, but hiei could tell her iq was high up there on the charts...his jagan burned with anxiety as it wanted to read her thoughts...explore the mazes it holds...
gyah! hiei get ahold of yourself...you dont think this realy about the ferry onna do you? yes...No! impossible! maybe its just the arousel yuu had given him wanting more,from anyone, even the one that annoyed him so! no...then why had he felt this feeling even before then...
before Yuu had even came into the picture...his thoughts, his dreams, long before from the time the two had met during Yusukes case for the 3 otherworld treasures to even now... he had longed for her, deep inside...perhaps that was why he hated her...why he abused her with his insults and threats.
He was angry at her, for stealing his heart...
"Hiei are you still in there" the ferry girl knocked his cranium with her tightened knuckles, knocking him sideways...
he quickly regained his balence, angrily grabbing a hold of her wrists and pinning her to the wall. "Listen Baka Onna! Your making me furious with your idiotic attempts at Humor" he growled, hissing...ag, this position...he could easily see here pink hued eyes...glistening...He was locked on her eyes, as she stared at him.
"Hi-ei, im sorry" she appologized. "You better be" he hissed...god...he was on the verge of removing his sword from its shieth and embracing it to her throat, and slicing...ah, but that wasnt going to happen in THIS case.
His breath shortened, his chest moving quick..he leaned against her and nuzzled the base of her neck.
Botan quivered at the touch of his warm breath against her flesh..."hiei" she begged"what are you doing" she cried out. now, she wished she hadnt knocked Yuu so unconcious...her own foolishness caused this and she mentally slapped herself in the forehead.
"Hiei get off of me" she pleaded, but the firey demon didnt take any requests...at least those kind. A bulge pressed against her hip...no way...hiei...he was being pleased by all this...Of course he was, Yuu was the one that brought it on. She had urged him to go this far..."eep" she gave a yelp, but too lowtoned for anyone to possibly help her...
And so, he would viciously undress her, and force her to the ground...soon, she didnt mind it at all, and she let him make love to her, she was inticed in his scent, he was inticed in hers.
He smelled of sweet spices and she smelt of peonys.
Soon, Yuu would awaken from the bump to her head, and spot the two...her eyes burned. She growled to herself..."damn that ferry onna" then she smirked. "looks like my plan worked" she chuckled, then snuck away.
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When everything was over-both of them were confused about how they ended up entangles with each other...
"..." Botan paused, thinking in her mind:yuu had teased him to the point where he couldnt hold it back...:
She feared that Hiei would kill her because she hadnt stoped him from making love to her.
But hiei, as much as he hated the baka onna, he wasnt upset with her...It was his stupid fault. He lost himself. Jaganshi Hiei NEVER loses himself! he shouted in his mind. Even when it was demon mating season he could always hold himself back..but why didnt he hold himself back this time?
He was furious at this.:damn it, i never meant to ntake it this far,he continuosly said to himself.
He quickly got up gathering his clothes and vanished with hyper speed.
Thus...Botan was laying on the floor of the phycics apartment, covered only with a blanket that Hiei had obviously thrown down for her so she wouldnt be cold. She layed confused and most of all...dazzled.
Suprised? Yes? No? I couldnt make the love scene more detailed since children are present and may be reading this o-o; but maybe i will make a re-write of this chapter WITH the mature content ne?
I could post it on yes? Im not sure?
Review and tell me whether i should or not...if the majority says i should...then i will...if the majority says i shouldnt...then i wont...i cant promise anything though at this point...sorry... but ill try ;) it will be called "Grassfire chapter 6 Remake" ne? hai! I will do my best,
until then review and comment on the story so far did i mention this is my first attempt at a BotanXHiei fanfic? it is!
Ive made a BotanXKurama fanfic...i have yet to finish it...last update was...erm...a year ago?
eek...i havent posted it here cause the fact that its my first fanfic and it quite sucks reallyits in cheap playwrite-like form...if you must the url to it is at: Http: its the story called"The Other Bandit" this story also contains a OC character ;; sorry but when i make rp characters i make a fanfic using the character ;;;
and "grassfire" along with "the other bandit" are such fanfics...lol...
ill once again shut up now...im just in a chatty mood XX hehe
