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Lyoko-Luver- no offence taken. I love to babble did you know a few years ago there was a song called "babble on" it was on VH1's countdown. I can't remember who sung it though; well anyways people do say I talk too much. I have no idea why, I don't talk that much but for some reason I was known for talking a lot, most of my teachers said I talked too much also please keep in mind I'm not a storywriter. I'm just a 21 year old who wrote a 6 page chapter one day when I was bored (chapter 01) and I made a story out of it, I don't even consider myself a good storywriter I describe myself as "sub-par at best" my brother is the storywriter not me (mute)
Amy: as top20fan13's alter ego let me give a decent answer. What makes this fic seem to babble is most of the chapters are not linked together they don't follow a flow that's not an easy thing to do especially when your mind wanders as much as top20fan13's does. Let me explain
top20fan13: (un-muted) look at my pretty transfers from Kenosha" (mutes)
Amy: point taken. Well anyways top20fan13 is currently working on making the chapters flow better but we're not promising anything, please remember this is his first attempt at writing a fan fiction and his last writing project before this was a 5 page essay about his trip to Madison to get a bus transfer. Sorry if we bored you and thanks for your feedback. (un-mutes top20fan13)
top20fan13: wait what does "abrupt" mean?
Amy: I'll get Jeremie.
Jeremie: it means having sudden transitions from one subject to another; unconnected
top20fan13: that what this fic is little stories that will progress towards the overall goal of stopping XANA; we have no other overall plot line. Sorry if you don't like the story but I don't write to make people happy I just write for fun. If you like it great enjoy the story, if you don't that's OK there are plenty of other fan fictions to read as for me I'll keep writing my story. Have a nice day and thanks for taking the time to review and an even bigger thank you if you read this.
PS: thanks. I was waiting for a review like this for a long time and please note this reply is 87 percent joke 13 percent actual answer. I'm not mad I just thought it would be funny to actually babble in response to what you said.
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top20fan13: well anyways those were the replies to the reviews now on with the babble, I mean story
A Code Lyoko Novel
Chapter 30: beware of monsters
place: Jeremie's room
time: about
5 PM
"XANA has not launched an attack in 2 weeks now, has he given up?" Amy asked
"Not likely. XANA's probably planning something right now" Jeremie replied
Amy then said "well it doesn't matter what XANA plans because we got the power of teamwork. As a team we are unstoppable"
"You can say that" Jeremie commented
"I just did" Amy replied
then Jeremie's phone rings. Jeremie answers the phone and after a while says "are you serious"
"Could this be a XANA attack?" Amy thought
"Ok I'll be right there" Jeremie said. He then put his phone away
"What did he do this time?" Amy asked
"He got his foot stuck in a bucket" Jeremie replied
"XANA got his foot stuck in a bucket?" Amy asked
"No Odd got his foot stuck in a bucket. I'm going to help Ulrich get the bucket off Odd's foot" Jeremie told her
"I'll watch the room until you get back" Amy replied
"Fine just don't touch the computer" Jeremie told her as he left the room
Amy then said "this should be easy don't touch the... of forget it I want to talk to Aelita"
she then sat down by Jeremie's computer and thought "now how did Jeremie do this"
she pushed some keys and soon Aelita's window popped up on the screen
Aelita says "Hi Jer... Amy"
"Can I talk to you?" Amy asked
"Of course you can talk to me" Aelita replies
Amy then says "It's just that this spelling thin is really getting to me. I just failed my spelling test for a 5th consecutive time. I don't think I'll ever learn how to spell"
"just keep trying Amy. You'll get better at it" Aelita tells her
"but how?" Amy asked
"Did you try studying?" Aelita asked
"no" Amy replied
"well maybe you should. It works for Jeremie" Aelita told her
"Do you think I can pass a spelling test?" Amy asked
"I believe you can do achieve your goal if you just try your best and never give up" Aelita replied
"Thanks for letting me talk to you" Amy told Aelita
Aelita then said "Well I enjoyed talking to you. let me know if you pass your next test"
"OK I will" Amy replied
Aelita's window then goes away and Amy looks at her watch and then says "looks like it's time for work"
She then picks up her purse and walks towards the door as it opens and Jeremie and Ulrich walk in Odd follows behind them with his right foot still stuck in a bucket
"Jeremie you need to get that bucket off Odd's foot before he becomes captain bucket foot" Amy says as she leaves Jeremie's room
"That's not funny" Odd exclaims
"Yes it is now I must get going so I'm not late to work" Amy tells him
"Can you bring me some candy?" Odd asked
"I'll see what I can do" Amy replies as she walks down the hall
"Why do you always ask her to bring candy?" Ulrich asked
"I like candy" Odd replied
"You do realize she's not a candy machine" Jeremie explained
"I know that. If I thought she was a candy machine I would put change in her ear expecting candy" Odd replied
Ulrich and Jeremie then gave Odd a look that clearly said his joke was not funny
Odd then replied "Ok I get it the joke is not funny, now get this bucket off my foot"
about 15 minutes later they finally get the bucket off Odd's foot
"please don't do that again" Ulrich commented
"I did not do in on purpose" Odd replied
then the outlet started making strange noises as the light in the room flickered on and off. Jeremie quickly unplugged his laptop a few seconds before there was a small explosion by the outlet
"Not this lame attack again" Odd commented
"This is what he used to trap us in the cafeteria" Ulrich explained
"but why would XANA want to re-use an attack?" Jeremie asked
"Probably to trap you" Ulrich told him
"Can you still connect to Lyoko?" Odd asked
"It has a battery" Jeremie commented as he connected to Lyoko
Aelita's window popped up and she said " XANA has launched an attack"
"I'll call Amy and see if we can format a plan" Odd commented at the same time Jeremie was explaining to Aelita what XANA was doing
"This is Amy speaking" Amy said after answering her phone
"where are you?" Odd asked
"Why did you call to ask me that?' Amy asked Odd
"because XANA has launched an attack trapping Ulrich, Jeremie and me at the school" Odd explained
"If you must know I'm at my job" Amy replied as she walked towards the back room. She then asked "so how does this attack work?"
"Simple if we touch the walls we get zapped" Odd replied
"So who can go to Lyoko" Amy asked quietly
"just you and Yumi" Odd told her
"Let me think" Amy replied. After 30 seconds she said "I got a plan put Jeremie on the phone"
"what's your plan Amy?" Jeremie asked
"Since you're stuck at the school we need someone else to run the supercomputer so one of us does that while the other fights the monsters" Amy explains
"That might just work" Jeremie replies
then Amy says "I'm not done yet. I'm now by the store computer so just e-mail some information explaining the basis of running the computer. I print them out and then delete the e-mail so no one else can read it. I use your notes to send Yumi to Lyoko and she gets Aelita to the tower. So do you like my plan?
"you run the supercomputer, are you sure that's the better choice?" Jeremie asked her
Any then said "yes and here are my reasons. first Yumi has more experience in Lyoko then me, 2nd she's a better fighter in Lyoko then I am and finally I don't have what it takes to run a solo mission in Lyoko. I'm nervous just thinking about what I'm going to do without the others there to help me. As much as I want to be the one to go to Lyoko I know Yumi is the better choice trust me Jeremie I'm pretty sure about this"
"I'll ask the others" Jeremie replies
he then tells the others Amy's plan
"It looks like we have no choice" Ulrich commented
"Sounds like a good plan to me" Odd said
"I trust Amy. I think she can do this" Aelita told Jeremie
"get ready for that e-mail" Jeremie told her.
Jeremie quickly typed the information and sent it to Amy via e-mail. Amy then quickly printed the information. She then said "I just finished printing it and now I'm deleting the evidence" as she deleted the e-mail. She then said "tell Yumi to meat me at the factory in 900 seconds.
Jeremie then called Yumi and told her "XANA has launched an attack. Amy will meat you at the factory the rest of us are stuck at the school"
"If you're stuck at the school who will run the supercomputer?" Yumi asked
"Amy volunteered" Jeremie replied
"really?" Yumi asked
"She thinks a solo mission would be too much her to handle" Jeremie explained
"She also said you were a better fighter in Lyoko" Odd added
"tell her I'll be there in about 10 minutes" Yumi replied
Place: factory
time: 15 minutes later
"ready to be virtualized" Amy asked
"I'm ready" Yumi replies from inside the scanner
"Ok then" Amy says as she reads Jeremie's notes. She then pushes the correct keys one at a time to make sure there are no mistakes.
"transfer Yumi
scanner Yumi
virtualization" Amy says as she sends Yumi to Lyoko
In Lyoko- polar region (LPM activated)
Yumi is virtualized into the polar region about 10 feet off the icy ground. After she lands on the icy ground that is the polar region Amy starts talking
she says "Let's tell her what she's won. Yumi you won a free trip to the polar region, the best region in Lyoko. You also get a metal fan to use as a weapon and 100 life points to spend however you want. Just don't spend them all in one place. One more thing Aelita should be coming from your right"
"thanks for coming" Aelita told Yumi
"Sorry but due to technical problems I will be filling in for Jeremie today" Amy commented
"Have you found the tower yet?" Yumi asked (100)
"yes it's to the north and it's waiting for you" Amy replied
"That's all I can do" Jeremie told the others
"So all we can do is watch on your computer, that's lame" Odd commented
"I know I just hope Amy takes this seriously" Jeremie commented
"don't worry I'm sure she will do a good job" Odd replied
back in Lyoko
Life point update (Aelita 100 Yumi 100)
"up ahead you will see 2 blocks that singed up for the I want to get defeated by Yumi deal so don't let them down" Amy explained
"Very funny" Yumi replied
Amy then said "I do the best I can, anyways Aelita just relax and watch Yumi take care of the blocks. This should not take too long"
the blocks fire there lasers at Yumi but she blocks the shots with her fan. She then throws her fan at one of the blocks and hits the center of the XANA symbol destroying the block, the other block fires at Yumi in response to this and the blast hits her just as she catches her fan (Yumi 90 LP)
"one down one to go. XANA is making this very easy" Amy commented
"almost too easy" Yumi replies (90)
"Maybe XANA's monsters are on strike" Amy said
Yumi then turned her attention back towards the remaining block
Yumi vs. Block
Amy was tracking Yumi's progress and did not notice there was another monster coming. It was a poison wasp.
meanwhile Yumi was blocking the blocks lasers with her fan after a while she jumped to the right and threw her fan at the block and hit her target destroying the block.
"Any more monsters?" Yumi asked
"There was only the two" Amy said as he checked the map
That's when she saw the red circle on the map after finding out what it was she said "look out Aelita, there's a... "
before she could finish her warning the wasp shot its toxic gunk which landed on Aelita.
Amy the looks at Aelita's card and watches as her life points drop in increments of 10 until it stops at 60.
"wasp behind you" Amy finished
Yumi say this and as the wasp aimed another shot Yumi threw her fan at it. The wasp never saw the fan coming and it sliced through the wasp destroying it.
"great job Yumi" Amy told her
"thanks" Yumi replied (90)
"Are you OK?" Amy nervously asked
"I'm fine don't worry about it" Aelita replied
however Amy was nervous she was thinking "where did that monster come from, what was that attack. that did not look good. I sure hope her life points don't start dropping again, what should I do now?"
after a few seconds she thought "I got it. I'll just pretend I'm not nervous because I don't want to make Yumi nervous. I'll just tell them they have plenty of life points left. That should calm them down"
she then said "I have good news you both have plenty of life points left. Yumi you have 90 and Aelita has 60.
"60 is not plenty. Don't you care about Aelita and how did you not see that wasp" Jeremie yelled at his computer screen
"Jeremie you do realize she can't hear you?" Odd asked
"I know it's just that..." Jeremie started to say
"You don't like to see Aelita lose life points" Ulrich said
"exactly" Jeremie replied
back in Lyoko
Life point update (Yumi 90 Aelita 60)
Amy told them "and there's the tower up ahead. She that block blocking the path he's a blockhead. Block is blockhead I am funny"
Amy quickly checked the map and saw two monsters the block and a crab, but for some reason the crab was not moving so Amy thought "If it's not going to move we'll just get to it later"
Yumi vs. block
Yumi targeted the block and threw her fan hoverer at the same time the block fired a shot at Yumi. both of the shots his there target but only the block got destroyed (Yumi 80 LP)
Amy then said "you both did fantastic, now Aelita take care of the tower and Yumi you can take care of the crab"
Aelita ran towards the tower as Yumi asked "what crab?"
"It should be about 45 feet in front of you." Amy told her
"There's a rock there" Yumi commented (80)
"then the crab is probably behind the rock" Amy told her
Yumi quickly pieced the clues together and starting running towards Aelita's location. before she can say anything a red blast comes from behind the giant snow covered rock and hits Aelita knocking her down (Aelita 40 LP)
Yumi quickly runs in between Aelita and the crab to prevent it form doing any more damage
"Aelita only has 40 life points left" Amy comments
"You're just lucky Jeremie is not here" Yumi replies as she blocks the crab's laser with her fan
"let's not talk about it" Amy tells her.
Yumi prepares to throw her fan but gets hit by the crab's laser and gets falls down (Yumi 60 LP)
"You can do it. I know you will beat that crab" Amy tells her
Yumi then gets back up and waits for the crab to fire; she then jumps to avoid the blast and throws her fan at the crab. the fan slices through the XANA symbol destroying the crab.
After checking the map for monsters 3 times Amy says "the path to the tower is now clear you can deactivate the tower now"
"thanks for the help Yumi" Aelita tells her (40)
Amy paged through the notes to get everything set up as Aelita entered the tower and floated up to the top. She then placed her hand on the screen
Aelita
Code Lyoko
Amy said "return to the past now" as the return trip started
end life point totals (Yumi 60 Aelita 40)
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Milly: another chapter complete and top20fan13 was really ranting earlier. He really needs to drink less mountain dew. Well anyways for a quick fact this was actually one top20fan13's first ideas for a XANA attack chapter. It was also written at about the same time as chapter 03. Until next time this has been Milly reporting for "A Code Lyoko Novel".