Amy: hi and welcome back to my story, before we begin let's reply to the reviews
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renayumi- yes you are the poster of the 100th review, if that makes you happy then I'm happy for you anyways thanks for reviewing and have a nice day
Former ff member RaptorK- thanks, I agree way too many ACC's that just seem to perfect, I made sure that Amy was not one of them and to be honest I still can't think of a special ability for her, and about the grammar I'm sorry about that I'm not very good with spelling or grammar and even though I try not to make any mistakes I always do. and finally I am now using Microsoft word (started chapter 41 before that I was using a cheap imitation of word) and I recently ran all the chapters through the spelling/ grammar check on word so hopefully I fixed all the mistakes, well anyways thanks for reviewing and have a nice day
RaptorK Beta – first thank you it really means a lot to me that people actually like my story and the reason why Cyndi does not know about Lyoko is the others (besides Amy) don't know her well enough to tell her such a big secret that and I don't think I can think up another Lyoko costume, I kind of got Amy's from Corrector Yui.
D Wolf Falls- thanks I'm glad you liked it and about Amy yes she is getting better in Lyoko but still has the bad habit of not thinking things though when she is nervous
disclaimer
top20fan13 does not own code Lyoko of course you probably all know that by now
Amy: well anyways last time on my story…
top20fan13: don't you mean my story
Amy: just having a little fun anyways the last chapter was a XANA attack that was pretty nasty this one is a little more peaceful
top20fan13: I just hope this turned out right
Odd: can we start already?
A Code Lyoko novel
Chapter 46: the picnic
Place: Odd/Ulrich's room
Time: 11am Saturday
"I'm bored" Odd complained
"You could study for Tuesday's test" Ulrich suggested
"I said I was bored not desperate" Odd replied
Amy then entered the room she was wearing a dark red shirt and a purple skirt. As soon as she entered she said "I have great news"
"what is it?" Odd asked
"well Sara said that she is going to the park for a picnic and the best part is she said I can come and suggested I bring my friends, so do you want to come?" Amy said
"We can go" Odd replied
"what about Yumi and Aelita?" Amy asked
"how about this I'll ask Yumi and you ask Jeremie if Aelita can come" Ulrich said
"the only bad news is Cyndi said she already had plans and is unable to join us" Amy commented before walking to Jeremie's room when she entered Jeremie was talking to Aelita via the computer. Amy then said "Sara is taking us on a picnic do you want to come?"
"what's a picnic?" Aelita asked
Jeremie then explained the concept of a picnic to Aelita
"that sounds great. Can we please go Jeremie, you could use a little break" Aelita commented
"OK I'll get to the factory as fast as I can" Jeremie said
"I'll be waiting" Aelita replied
later that day
"so what did you bring?" Amy asked
"well I got plenty of food, a few Frisbees a football, and a book for me to read" Sara replied
"so this is the park" Aelita stated
"yes this is where I come to relax" Sara said
"I can see why it's so peaceful here" Aelita commented
Amy grabbed the football and asked Odd "would you like to play a little game of catch?"
"OK" Odd replied
"how about a game of Frisbee?" Yumi asked Ulrich
"you're on" he replied
"how would you like to go for a walk?" Jeremie asked Aelita
"that would be wonderful" she replied
"the food will be ready in 30 minutes have fun until then" Sara told them
Amy and Odd went to an open area where they would have plenty of room to play with the football
"OK I'm going to kick the ball you can throw or kick it whatever works better for you" Amy commented
"just kick it already" Odd replied
Amy then kicked the football as hard as she could, it went high into the air, Odd tried to catch it but the ball bounced out of his hands
Meanwhile at another location Yumi and Ulrich found a place to play Frisbee
"are you ready?" Yumi asked
"yes" Ulrich replied
Yumi then threw the Frisbee but a little to hard and it went flying over Ulrich's head
"sorry about that" Yumi commented
"it's Ok" Ulrich replied as he ran after the Frisbee. He then picked it up and threw it, the Frisbee flew through the air until Yumi caught it
"not so hard this time" Ulrich commented
"I'm sorry I got a little carried away" Yumi said before throwing the Frisbee again, this time Ulrich was able to catch it.
Meanwhile Aelita and Jeremie were walking through the park
"thank you for everything. You've done so much for me" Aelita said
"your welcome" Jeremie replied
"I look forward to the day we shut XANA down and I'll be able to live in your world" Aelita said
"so do I" Jeremie replied
"well I'm sure you will figure it out" Aelita told him
the time passed by quickly and soon the food was ready, and everyone was back at the picnic table
"so how are you all doing?" Sara asked
"fantastic" Amy replied
"I figured you could use a break for some fun, everyone needs a break every now and then" Sara said
"thanks I was getting bored at school" Odd commented
"you're welcome, now we have hamburgers and hot dogs which do you want?" Sara said
"which one is better?" Aelita asked
"well it depends on which foods you like" Sara replied
"I think I'll try the hamburger" Aelita said
"Amy can you please introduce me to your new friend" Sara commented
"this is my friend Aelita, and Aelita she's my cousin Sara" Amy said
"so where are you staying" Sara asked Aelita as she handed out the food
"I'm only visiting for a few hours after that I'm going back home" Aelita said
"well if you ever need a place to stay let me know. I have an extra room at my house" Sara commented
"thanks that is so kind of you" Aelita told her
"you're welcome" Sara replied
time: 30 minutes later
Jeremie was on his way back to the picnic table we he saw someone with pink hair on the path, he wondered how Aelita got there and called her name but the person did not react, Jeremie then stated walking towards her but she started walking down the path away form him.
Jeremie called her name again but she did not stop so Jeremie started running. The pink haired person stopped at a bench and sat down before she started taking to a guy then the two of them started talking. About a minute later Jeremie made it to the bench
She noticed Jeremie and turned towards him and asked "what brings you here?"
Jeremie then looked at her and noticed it was Cyndi and not Aelita
"sorry I thought you were Aelita" Jeremie said
"it was my hair. I'm so sorry about that it's just that pink is my favorite color, you probably hate me now" Cyndi said
"no I don't hate you it was just a little misunderstanding" Jeremie said
"don't be mad at yourself it's not your fault" James told Cyndi
"I probably should have told you I dyed my hair pink" Cyndi told Jeremie
"so what brings you here?" Jeremie asked changing the subject
"we're on a picnic, and later today we're going to see a movie" Cyndi replied
"we're on a picnic as well" Jeremie said
"It's kind of strange we both went to the same park on the same day without realizing it" James commented
"you have a point there" Cyndi replied
"well I need to get back before the others start looking for me" Jeremie said
"can you tell Amy I said hi" Cyndi asked
"no problem" Jeremie said before walking back towards were the others were
when he got back to the place where the others were Aelita asked "where did you go?"
"I thought I saw you but it was Cyndi" Jeremie explained
"let me guess she dyed her hair pink" Amy said
"yes" Jeremie replied
"I'm a little disappointed" Aelita said
"sorry" Jeremie told her
"how is Cyndi doing?" Amy asked
"she's doing great and she told me to say that she said hi" Jeremie replied
"well it looks like it's time to go" Sara said
"thanks for taking us on a picnic" Yumi commented
"no problem just consider it a thank you for being Amy's friend" Sara replied
Sara then drove them all back to the school after that Jeremie took Aelita back to the factory so she could be sent back to Lyoko while Ulrich Yumi to her house, as for Odd and Amy they spent the rest of the day watching Case Closed DVDs together
((((((((((((end chapter))))))))))))
Milly: well that was…
Milly is interrupted by a huge explosion
Amy: what was that?
Top20fan13: my newest bonus chapter has broken out of its cage and demands to be posted now
Milly: what is it about
Top20fan13: well it's a squeal to "the makeover"(the first of the two short stories). Velita has launched an attack sending lots of robotic mice to the school. Ulrich and Yumi stayed behind to protect the students, while Odd and Amy are off Lyoko even though Velita said she has a new plan that will defeat them easily. Our story starts as Odd and Amy are virtualized into Lyoko
Notice: the following chapter is a bonus chapter and not part of the story but if you were curious as to what Velita can do I suggest reading it.
Bonus story number 3: The Velita attack
"transfer Odd transfer Amy
scanner Odd scanner Amy
Vitalization" Jeremie said as he sent the two of them to Lyoko
Lyoko's desert region (LPM activated)
"I'm ready" Amy exclaimed
"be careful Velita sounded pretty confident about her new plan" Jeremie warned them
"I don't call little robotic mice something to fear" Amy commented
"they fired lasers" Jeremie exclaimed
"week lasers I got hit like 6 times and it hardly hurt" Amy replied
"let's just worry about getting to the tower" Aelita commented
school grounds
"take that" Ulrich exclaimed as he stomped the last robotic mouse flat
"that was pretty easy" Yumi replied
they then started towards the factory but soon saw another 50 robotic mice coming towards them
"you just had to say it was easy" Ulrich commented as they ran from the mice
back in Lyoko
they were approaching the tower but there were still no monsters in sights
"this is her plan?" Amy asked
"it might be a trap" Jeremie warned them
"does your map show anything?" Amy asked
"no but be careful" Jeremie told them
our heroes then slowly walked towards the tower but nothing happened
"some plan" Amy said sarcastically
Velita then walked out of the tower and said "I don't need traps"
"so what's your plan?" Amy asked
"since the monsters are clearly not getting the job done I'll fight you myself" Velita replied
"we can see your life points and that looks like a 50 to me" Amy said pointing to the indicator above Velita
"look again that says 150 you dim-witted fool" Velita snapped
"she's right that says 150" Odd commented
"too bad your friends did not come, this is going to be way to easy one of you does not have enough firepower to beat me and the other one has no battle skills at all" Velita said mockingly
"that's not true and you know it, we will defeat you" Amy replied
"you have a point there maybe I should give up my evil ways and be nice instead. Is that what you want" Velita said
"yes" Amy replied
"it's just that no one trust me" Velita replied sadly
"I trust you" Amy replied (100)
"really?" Velita asked (150)
"yes really" Amy said
"then how about we become friends" Velita suggested
"OK" Amy replied
"then how about you give your new friend a hug" Velita said
"OK" Amy replied before walking up to Velita and giving her a hug
"what is going on?" Aelita asked
"I don't know" Odd replied before noticing that Velita's eyes were not brightly glowing however before Odd could say anything Velita pushed Amy back and fired a laser beam out of eyes that easily hit Amy, the force of the blast pushed her back about 10 feet and made her fall to the ground (Amy 70 LP)
"you just lost 30 life points you gullible fool" Velita commented
"I trusted you" Amy exclaimed (70)
"you should know I can't be trusted. How stupid could you be" Velita told her
"take this" Odd said firing 3 arrows at Velita but since she was too busy mocking Amy she did not see them coming and all 3 hit (Velita 120 LP)
"you little jerk" Velita snapped before using telekinesis to pick up a rock and throw it at Odd who jumped out of the way and the rock just missed him
"is that all you got?" Odd asked sarcastically
"you want more, fine" Velita said before picking up another rock, she then blasted the rock into tiny pieces with a her eye laser
"let's see you avoid this" Velita said before using her power to throw all the tiny pieces of the rock at him. Odd preformed many flips and jumps to avoid the rocks but soon made a wrong move and ended up getting hit three times (Odd 70 LP)
"as I said too easy I'm barely trying" Velita teased
Amy then clobbered Velita over the head with her wand (Velita 100 LP)
Velita quickly grabbed Amy and threw her to the ground
"take this you un-talented fool" Velita said before firing another beam at Amy, but this time she was ready, she used her wand's shield power and the laser deflected of the shield and hit Velita (Velita 70 LP)
"you all have 70 life points left" Jeremie said
"who's talent less now" Amy commented after getting up off the ground
"you still are. Those tricks won't be enough to beat me how many times must I tell you losers you can't win" Velita replied (70)
"do you have a plan?" Odd asked (70)
"just win" Amy replied
"that's not very helpful" Odd replied
"sorry, I got nothing" Amy stated
"it's a pity Ulrich is not here or this might actually be a challenge. To make things interesting I let you make the next move" Velita said
"very well then" Amy said before pointing her wand at Velita and firing a star shaped beam at her. Velita put her hands together and then moved them apart making a small energy shield in the process. It absorbed the attack and fired it back at Amy twice as fast, and since she did not expect that to happen the blast easily hit her (Amy 50 LP)
"I can deflect attacks as well but mine returns attacks at double damage" Velita explained
"that's it take this" Odd said before firing a pair of laser arrows at Velita who jumped to avoid the arrows
"you only have 5 arrows left. I'd use them wisely if I were you, but you never use your arrows wisely so why would you start now" Velita said harshly
"I really don't like you" Amy exclaimed
"really, that makes me so sad" Velita said sarcastically
"you will be" Amy said before firing another shot at Velita but she used her mirror force power again and deflected the shot back towards Amy and she got hit by her own attack again (Amy 30 LP)
"you're smart I'll admit that but when it comes to fighting you know nothing" Velita commented (70)
"your plan is not going to work because I won't let your comments bug me" Amy replied
"I have great news" Jeremie said
"what is it?" Amy asked
"I just found some information on Velita, it seams most of her attacks are powered by some sort of special energy she has which slowly recharges itself" Jeremie explained
"so her teasing is just a sneaky way of re-charging her power without being attacked" Amy commented
"I'll get you for that Jeremie" Velita said
Odd and Amy then started running towards Velita who prepared to use her strongest attack, she put her hands above her head and started making a red energy ball as Odd and Amy ran closer the ball got bigger Amy then stopped and fired at Velita at the same time she fired at Amy, Odd then saw the energy ball plow though Amy's blast like it was nothing and quickly pushed Amy out of the way of the attack and the blast hit him instead knocking him down to the ground (Odd 20 LP)
After landing on the ground Odd looked at Velita's indicator it said
Velita
LP: 70
SPP: 0
Odd then quickly fired a pair of arrows at Velita before she could react and they both hit (Velita 50 LP)
Velita then turned towards Odd and said "you will pay for that you worthless…" Velita started to say
"don't talk that way about my friend" Amy exclaimed as she fired at Velita, who tried to use the mirror force power but was but was not fast enough and the beam hit her (Velita 40 LP)
then Velita turned towards Amy. Odd used this time to fire his last 3 arrows at Velita and they all hit there target (Velita 10 LP)
after getting hit Velita backed up and said "OK so you have some talent but you have not won yet. I will get my revenge" before making a portal appear, she then went trough the portal. Amy tried to run after her but the portal quickly closed
"we were so close" Amy commented (30)
"you will get her next time" Aelita said before walking in the tower
"thanks for the help Jeremie" Amy said (30)
"I helped you too" Odd commented (20)
"I know thanks Odd" Amy told him
Aelita
Code Lyoko
"return to the past now" Jeremie said
((((end bonus chapter))))
Amy: well that was interesting, well anyways 20 points to anyone who read the bonus story
Top20fan13: it was pretty clever of me to hide it at the end of this chapter
Milly: not really
Amy: well anyways thanks for reading the story and have a nice day.