Please be kind. Don't forget to R&R. Thank you for reading ahead of time.
Also sorry if I miss spell. Also I don't own Redwall or anything related to
it, because Brian Jacques owns it. Also if I owned Redwall I won't be doing
this. All I own are some stickers and all of the Redwall books. The story
and plot are mine.
Chapter One
1 hour to go.........30 minutes to go........20 minutes to go...........10 minutes to go.........9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1.. RRRRIIIINNNGGG. Finally schools out for the summer. "Jessica J! Do you want to walk home?"
" Yeah Katie, but let's wait for the others."
Jessica J is one of my best friends, there is also Heather and Jessica C. Jessica J is tall for her age. She has sandy brown hair. Heather is a blonde, is they're more to say. She is also tall and skinny. Jessica C has blackish-brown hair. She also wears glasses and is tall and skinny. Me, my name is Katherine Edwards, but Katie for short. I wear glasses too. I have brownish-blonde hair. I am rather short and a little muscular built and I have blue-green eyes. My friends and I are in 9th grade.
"Okay and also we need to go to the middle school to pick up my brother and his friends" I say with a sigh on the last part.
A little later all of us are at the middle school waiting for my brother and his friends. "Hello David, Chris, and Logan. How was your last day of school?" I said with a nonexistent happiness.
David is my little brother by 15 months, though I think we look like twins. He is taller then me (which is not fair!!!). He has brown hair and muscular with which he doesn't know his own strength for crying out loud! His friend Chris, he is very short for his age. He wears glasses and can be irritating. His other friend Logan's height is between David and Chris. He is very quiet. He also has black hair.
"It was great!" Said David. As we were walking, the sky started to get cloudy.
"Why don't we take a short cut though the woods?" I said.
"Okay, that sounds good." Everybody said. We found the path that went though the woods and started to follow it, for some weird reason the path was just not right. I don't know how to explain it, I just felt bad about going on the path, but I have used this path before so why did I have this weird feeling. The feeling was like when you are watching a horror movie and you feel like something is about to jump out and kill someone. After about ten minutes of walking down the path the trees started to get closer together and their branches were intertwining and when I saw this it just added to the anxiety I already had. Suddenly the wind started to pick up into a gust, a very strong one in fact.
"Let's go back." someone said behind me.
"How?" Jessica Clark said. I look behind me at the path. When I did this the path was gone. It was replaced by trees and such.
"Well I guess we keep going down the path."
So we continue down the path and all of us are not to happy about it. The forest starts to get darker, if that was even possible because it was already dark to begin with. After coming around the bend in the path, we came upon a vortex. It was level with us, it was also about six feet high and four feet wide.
"Well what do we do now?" asked Heather.
"I don't know." I say. When I said this the wind got stronger then it was before and it seemed that the vortex was sucking us into its depths. We all tried to grab onto something but we couldn't find anything, which seemed odd because a moment ago we were standing right in some bushes. Well any way we were sucked in to its dark depths. After that I lost all train of time and thought.
What will happen? Where will we end up? I guess you will have to wait for the next chapter. So how was it? Good? Bad? Please review. Thank you for reading and don't forget to review. "I THINK! THEREFORE I AM!" Also "Why rum gone?" I just love that line! Yes if you were thinking 'Pirates of the Caribbean' you are correct. The think thingy it just popped into my brain one day. Well sugar for all and happy reviews.
Chapter One
1 hour to go.........30 minutes to go........20 minutes to go...........10 minutes to go.........9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1.. RRRRIIIINNNGGG. Finally schools out for the summer. "Jessica J! Do you want to walk home?"
" Yeah Katie, but let's wait for the others."
Jessica J is one of my best friends, there is also Heather and Jessica C. Jessica J is tall for her age. She has sandy brown hair. Heather is a blonde, is they're more to say. She is also tall and skinny. Jessica C has blackish-brown hair. She also wears glasses and is tall and skinny. Me, my name is Katherine Edwards, but Katie for short. I wear glasses too. I have brownish-blonde hair. I am rather short and a little muscular built and I have blue-green eyes. My friends and I are in 9th grade.
"Okay and also we need to go to the middle school to pick up my brother and his friends" I say with a sigh on the last part.
A little later all of us are at the middle school waiting for my brother and his friends. "Hello David, Chris, and Logan. How was your last day of school?" I said with a nonexistent happiness.
David is my little brother by 15 months, though I think we look like twins. He is taller then me (which is not fair!!!). He has brown hair and muscular with which he doesn't know his own strength for crying out loud! His friend Chris, he is very short for his age. He wears glasses and can be irritating. His other friend Logan's height is between David and Chris. He is very quiet. He also has black hair.
"It was great!" Said David. As we were walking, the sky started to get cloudy.
"Why don't we take a short cut though the woods?" I said.
"Okay, that sounds good." Everybody said. We found the path that went though the woods and started to follow it, for some weird reason the path was just not right. I don't know how to explain it, I just felt bad about going on the path, but I have used this path before so why did I have this weird feeling. The feeling was like when you are watching a horror movie and you feel like something is about to jump out and kill someone. After about ten minutes of walking down the path the trees started to get closer together and their branches were intertwining and when I saw this it just added to the anxiety I already had. Suddenly the wind started to pick up into a gust, a very strong one in fact.
"Let's go back." someone said behind me.
"How?" Jessica Clark said. I look behind me at the path. When I did this the path was gone. It was replaced by trees and such.
"Well I guess we keep going down the path."
So we continue down the path and all of us are not to happy about it. The forest starts to get darker, if that was even possible because it was already dark to begin with. After coming around the bend in the path, we came upon a vortex. It was level with us, it was also about six feet high and four feet wide.
"Well what do we do now?" asked Heather.
"I don't know." I say. When I said this the wind got stronger then it was before and it seemed that the vortex was sucking us into its depths. We all tried to grab onto something but we couldn't find anything, which seemed odd because a moment ago we were standing right in some bushes. Well any way we were sucked in to its dark depths. After that I lost all train of time and thought.
What will happen? Where will we end up? I guess you will have to wait for the next chapter. So how was it? Good? Bad? Please review. Thank you for reading and don't forget to review. "I THINK! THEREFORE I AM!" Also "Why rum gone?" I just love that line! Yes if you were thinking 'Pirates of the Caribbean' you are correct. The think thingy it just popped into my brain one day. Well sugar for all and happy reviews.