Hello! Thanks for all of the great reviews! Also so you don't get confused
here is the list of names and the type of creatures we are.
Me (Katie)---Tigerlily---Otter David--------Aggron----Hare Jessica Jenks--Crystallynn--Mouse Jessica Clark--Jane----------Squirrel Heather-----Yeather-----Mouse Chris---------Dixon------Hare Logan--------Tallow-----Hare
Also I have another Redwall fanfic that needs some reviews or it is going bye-bye. Also the first chapter of this was redone. So there is a new way that explains how we get to Redwall. I think it is better then the original beginning!
Chapter 4
"Tigerlily, do you know which way is east?" Asked Jane.
"Yes, see that tree. Well I know for a fact that moss grows on the north side of trees, and that east is on your left if you are looking right at the moss. Do you think that we should have a plan for just in case we run into trouble?"
"Why?"
"Well there can be vermin around and well you guys don't really now how to fight and if we get into trouble you all might get hurt and I don't want that to happen."
"Wow, Tigerlily I didn't know that you cared." Said Dixon.
"SHUT UP, DIXON THE VIXEN!" I yell at him.
"WHY YOU..beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep." He says back with rage. So he comes at me and I start to run, and I forgot that hares are pretty fast runners. So I had to really run for my life.
"Hey wait up." Yells Crystallynn, and the rest of them run to catch up. Around noon we reach the road. By then Dixon and me call truce and we all eat our lunch.
"So do you want to make a plan just in case?" I ask again.
"Yeah, why not."
"Okay, um, when we get into trouble I'll throw my stuff to someone and defend us, and Jane I want you to climb a tree and head straight to Redwall and get some help. The rest of you will run down the path towards Redwall. Is that okay with you?" I ask them.
"Yep, loud and clear don't yew know, wot." Says Aggron. At this I start laughing. "What's wrong me old gel."
"You're talking like a hare, matey." I replied.
"NO! I AM TURNING REDWALLISH!"
"You'll be fine. It's not like your dieing or anything else." I say back. "Well are we ready to go yet." The path had been very well used and there were no potholes in the road. The trees that were on the side of the road were big. I was still getting used to them, because they were kind of frightening. I was guessing we might be a day or two from Redwall, but I didn't share it with the others for I didn't know how they would take it. Another thing that was going through my mind was what book are we in? If not in a book then, will there be characters that I will know? 'Well' I thought 'it can't be in any books with Martin in it, because one: He would be able to defend the abbey himself and two: In most of his books Redwall wasn't a place yet.' Suddenly a voice breaks though my thoughts.
"What's that?" Says Tollaw.
"What's what?" I ask back.
"It sounds like a bell or something."
"Bells?" Then I stop and listen. I hear in the distance a soft booming coming from the south. "It must be Redwall! Though it sounds like there is more then one bell though." 'So it must be sometime after Matthias' time. Well who's ever time is it I hope that the season day feast will be soon.'
When afternoon rolled around, we started to see the very top of the abbey sticking up above the trees. Now I knew what it felt like for travelers coming to Redwall for the first time. It was a fantastic sight for one who has imagined it since I started reading the series. Then I started to hear someone or more then one creature behind us.
"Give us all of youse stuff."
Well I am going to leave you hangin' cuz I feel like it. But if I get reviews I will up date sooner. See there is an up side to reviewing isn't there? Well R&R and I'll be happy!
Me (Katie)---Tigerlily---Otter David--------Aggron----Hare Jessica Jenks--Crystallynn--Mouse Jessica Clark--Jane----------Squirrel Heather-----Yeather-----Mouse Chris---------Dixon------Hare Logan--------Tallow-----Hare
Also I have another Redwall fanfic that needs some reviews or it is going bye-bye. Also the first chapter of this was redone. So there is a new way that explains how we get to Redwall. I think it is better then the original beginning!
Chapter 4
"Tigerlily, do you know which way is east?" Asked Jane.
"Yes, see that tree. Well I know for a fact that moss grows on the north side of trees, and that east is on your left if you are looking right at the moss. Do you think that we should have a plan for just in case we run into trouble?"
"Why?"
"Well there can be vermin around and well you guys don't really now how to fight and if we get into trouble you all might get hurt and I don't want that to happen."
"Wow, Tigerlily I didn't know that you cared." Said Dixon.
"SHUT UP, DIXON THE VIXEN!" I yell at him.
"WHY YOU..beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep." He says back with rage. So he comes at me and I start to run, and I forgot that hares are pretty fast runners. So I had to really run for my life.
"Hey wait up." Yells Crystallynn, and the rest of them run to catch up. Around noon we reach the road. By then Dixon and me call truce and we all eat our lunch.
"So do you want to make a plan just in case?" I ask again.
"Yeah, why not."
"Okay, um, when we get into trouble I'll throw my stuff to someone and defend us, and Jane I want you to climb a tree and head straight to Redwall and get some help. The rest of you will run down the path towards Redwall. Is that okay with you?" I ask them.
"Yep, loud and clear don't yew know, wot." Says Aggron. At this I start laughing. "What's wrong me old gel."
"You're talking like a hare, matey." I replied.
"NO! I AM TURNING REDWALLISH!"
"You'll be fine. It's not like your dieing or anything else." I say back. "Well are we ready to go yet." The path had been very well used and there were no potholes in the road. The trees that were on the side of the road were big. I was still getting used to them, because they were kind of frightening. I was guessing we might be a day or two from Redwall, but I didn't share it with the others for I didn't know how they would take it. Another thing that was going through my mind was what book are we in? If not in a book then, will there be characters that I will know? 'Well' I thought 'it can't be in any books with Martin in it, because one: He would be able to defend the abbey himself and two: In most of his books Redwall wasn't a place yet.' Suddenly a voice breaks though my thoughts.
"What's that?" Says Tollaw.
"What's what?" I ask back.
"It sounds like a bell or something."
"Bells?" Then I stop and listen. I hear in the distance a soft booming coming from the south. "It must be Redwall! Though it sounds like there is more then one bell though." 'So it must be sometime after Matthias' time. Well who's ever time is it I hope that the season day feast will be soon.'
When afternoon rolled around, we started to see the very top of the abbey sticking up above the trees. Now I knew what it felt like for travelers coming to Redwall for the first time. It was a fantastic sight for one who has imagined it since I started reading the series. Then I started to hear someone or more then one creature behind us.
"Give us all of youse stuff."
Well I am going to leave you hangin' cuz I feel like it. But if I get reviews I will up date sooner. See there is an up side to reviewing isn't there? Well R&R and I'll be happy!