Hello! See I am back again to type! Also to the person who gave me my first
bad review ever. I am not as talented as you are! OKAY! So get off my case!
Well to the people that gave me so nice reviews, I am grateful for all the
NICE reviews.*smiles in joy* Well here is the reason for you reading this.
So on with the show! Also in this chapter and in the chapters that follow
you will notice that my vermin speech sucks! So don't berate me in reviews
when it comes to the vermin speech.
Chapter 5
I turn around at the voice and I see possibly five foxes. When I see them I swear quietly to myself. "Why should we give your stuff to you? Ye mangy fox." I spit at what I thought was the leader.
"Cuz you're trespassin' in our territory." Replied the fox that looked like the leader. The reason that I thought he was the leader was that he was the biggest and perhaps the stupidest of the bunch.
"Well you are not getting our food." I say to them, then whispered to my friends. "Get goin' now and stick to the plan and no arguin' from any one. Now Go!" At this I take my sack off and throw it behind me and pull out my sword. In the background I hear Jane climb a tree and the others getting away.
"They're gettin' away!" One of the foxes yelled.
"You'll have to get throw me first! LOAMSDOOOWWWNNN!!!" I say as I rush in and start fighting like mad, so my friends can get to safely at Redwall. Rushing in was my first mistake, you see they rounded me on all sides. Which made fighting a whole lot harder and it made me an easy target to get at, so I was getting wounds left and right. Just when I was losing hope I faintly hear a yell and it started to give me hope. In a flash a male otter was by my side helping me to fight. I tried to keep fighting but slowly I was blacking out and what happened next was a mystery to me.
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I climbed the trees as fast as I could. All that was going though my mind was 'I must help Tigerlily. Must get to Redwall.' It'd a good thing that I was a squirrel or this would have been a hard task. I quickly reach the ramparts. 'Yes I'm here! Now I need to find help.' I see three otters near the orchard. I run down to them gasping for air.
"Friend....help....path....foxes." I say to them. The male otter seemed to understand what I was saying.
"Which way north or south?" He asks me. I point north. When he saw me point north he runs to the building in the middle of the grounds and rounds up other otters.
"He'll help your friend." She stops then says. "Sorry I didn't get your name. I am the Mother Abbess of Redwall abbey and this is my mother Filorn and the one that just ran to help your friend is my brother Deyna."
"My name is Jane. I have more then one friend, though one of them is guarding our back. While I get help and the others can get a way. I just hope she's okay."
"How many friends do you have?" The one called Filorn asked.
"Um......six. Three hares, two mice, and an otter, Tigerlily is the one covering our backs." I reply. As we were talking we were walking over to the gates. When we got there Crystallynn, Yeather, Aggron, Dixon, and Tollaw came in the front gates. When they were safely inside they sit down on the grass and gasp for air. I sit down with them and I wait for Tigerlily to come.
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When the squirrel came up to my sister, mother, and me. I was wondering how she got in I don't know, but when she said that her friend was in trouble. I sprang into action. I ran to the abbey to get my sword and gathered Skipper and some of his otters to help me. Quickly we opened up the main gates and head up the path. On the way some creatures are running to us. I slow down and ask them if they where okay and they said yes and said that their friend was still back there. So I start to run again and I see maybe three or four foxes still attacking a creature that was slowly losing.
"REDWAAALLLLLL!" I shout and charge into the fray, and I get to the creature's side and I notice that it was a female otter. She was seriously wounded and it looked like she wasn't going to stay awake long. By then Skipper and his otter's get the rest of the vermin.
"We better get a stretcher so we can get her back to Redwall." Said Skipper. All of his otter's give their slings and two give their javelins. We put her on it and quickly get her back to Redwall. When we get back to Redwall her friends see her like this, all bloody and unconscious. We take her up to the infirmary and hope Sister Floburt and Brother Egburt can help her.
So how was it? I know that the end was hurried but I guess I can only do it from my POV, but I'll try to work on it. I promise! Please R&R.
~Tigerlily-2250~
Chapter 5
I turn around at the voice and I see possibly five foxes. When I see them I swear quietly to myself. "Why should we give your stuff to you? Ye mangy fox." I spit at what I thought was the leader.
"Cuz you're trespassin' in our territory." Replied the fox that looked like the leader. The reason that I thought he was the leader was that he was the biggest and perhaps the stupidest of the bunch.
"Well you are not getting our food." I say to them, then whispered to my friends. "Get goin' now and stick to the plan and no arguin' from any one. Now Go!" At this I take my sack off and throw it behind me and pull out my sword. In the background I hear Jane climb a tree and the others getting away.
"They're gettin' away!" One of the foxes yelled.
"You'll have to get throw me first! LOAMSDOOOWWWNNN!!!" I say as I rush in and start fighting like mad, so my friends can get to safely at Redwall. Rushing in was my first mistake, you see they rounded me on all sides. Which made fighting a whole lot harder and it made me an easy target to get at, so I was getting wounds left and right. Just when I was losing hope I faintly hear a yell and it started to give me hope. In a flash a male otter was by my side helping me to fight. I tried to keep fighting but slowly I was blacking out and what happened next was a mystery to me.
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I climbed the trees as fast as I could. All that was going though my mind was 'I must help Tigerlily. Must get to Redwall.' It'd a good thing that I was a squirrel or this would have been a hard task. I quickly reach the ramparts. 'Yes I'm here! Now I need to find help.' I see three otters near the orchard. I run down to them gasping for air.
"Friend....help....path....foxes." I say to them. The male otter seemed to understand what I was saying.
"Which way north or south?" He asks me. I point north. When he saw me point north he runs to the building in the middle of the grounds and rounds up other otters.
"He'll help your friend." She stops then says. "Sorry I didn't get your name. I am the Mother Abbess of Redwall abbey and this is my mother Filorn and the one that just ran to help your friend is my brother Deyna."
"My name is Jane. I have more then one friend, though one of them is guarding our back. While I get help and the others can get a way. I just hope she's okay."
"How many friends do you have?" The one called Filorn asked.
"Um......six. Three hares, two mice, and an otter, Tigerlily is the one covering our backs." I reply. As we were talking we were walking over to the gates. When we got there Crystallynn, Yeather, Aggron, Dixon, and Tollaw came in the front gates. When they were safely inside they sit down on the grass and gasp for air. I sit down with them and I wait for Tigerlily to come.
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When the squirrel came up to my sister, mother, and me. I was wondering how she got in I don't know, but when she said that her friend was in trouble. I sprang into action. I ran to the abbey to get my sword and gathered Skipper and some of his otters to help me. Quickly we opened up the main gates and head up the path. On the way some creatures are running to us. I slow down and ask them if they where okay and they said yes and said that their friend was still back there. So I start to run again and I see maybe three or four foxes still attacking a creature that was slowly losing.
"REDWAAALLLLLL!" I shout and charge into the fray, and I get to the creature's side and I notice that it was a female otter. She was seriously wounded and it looked like she wasn't going to stay awake long. By then Skipper and his otter's get the rest of the vermin.
"We better get a stretcher so we can get her back to Redwall." Said Skipper. All of his otter's give their slings and two give their javelins. We put her on it and quickly get her back to Redwall. When we get back to Redwall her friends see her like this, all bloody and unconscious. We take her up to the infirmary and hope Sister Floburt and Brother Egburt can help her.
So how was it? I know that the end was hurried but I guess I can only do it from my POV, but I'll try to work on it. I promise! Please R&R.
~Tigerlily-2250~