Overview of Behind Snow-White Eyes
The idea for this story came from… I have no idea where. I just know that Kiba and Hinata are the cutest couple that can ever be formed from Naruto. I wanted to somehow find a way to make it logical that they grew up together and got married because of it.
I didn't really plan for Kiba to say that little quote of years ago in the final chapter. When he asked Hinata about being cold I remembered what he said when they were little kiddies and just decided to add it to make it as kawaii as possible.
I loved giving Kiba all these wacked out personality traits. When he was little, he would talk a lot and get in trouble with his mom all the time. In the Academy, he liked to fight with all the other kids. I kind of accidentally made him interchangeable with Naruto. He would always be thinking of Hinata in the back of his mind and would be the first to help her when she got in trouble.
Hinata would like Kiba a lot as a friend but mainly just have a crush on Naruto. Then in the last chapter, she switched over to Kiba. They kind of made a promise that they would marry each other when they grew up. It was a very Kiba-like proposal.
I loved writing this story. Unfortunately, I didn't believe it was quite that romantic. I don't think I'm that great at writing romance fics so I'll probably stop.
At the end of each chapter was a little thing where Kiba and Hinata would be sleeping, dreaming, and thinking about each other. That came out to be way too redundant.
My favorite chapter of all was Enter the Classmates. All the Naruto characters were so awesome when they were little. Ino and Sakura had major Sasuke lovin' issues.
That's really all I can think of right now. Like always, I'll end up thinking of something else and be too lazy to resubmit this chapter.
Sorry the overview was so late; I wanted to get another story going, so I could submit a preview. So, here it is.
Preview of Naruto Farm
"Animal Farm. The farm for all your animal needs," read Sasuke in a monotone voice.
"Who came up with this dumbass idea?"
"Ummm. N-naruto-kun, T-the t-teachers,"
"Teachers? What right do THEY have of sending us here? They don't have any, right Hinata?"
"Shut up loser, you're bothering Sasuke-kun,"
"You're bothering Sasuke-kun, Ino-pig. Stop yelling,"
"I'm stuck on a bus with idiots,"
"EVEN ME, MY NUMBER ONE RIVAL, THE BEAUTIFUL GREEN BEAST OF KONOHA?"
"I think especially you, Lee,"
"I second that. This is so troublesome."
"Food…"
"… … … … …"
It is indeed what you thought it was folks. The Naruto characters are on their way to Animal Farm, sent there by the beloved teachers. Let's revisit that event, shall we?
A/N- REVIEW! Please tell me what I can do better in the future and which chapter you liked the best. THANKS!