Hey I'm back after a week of sickness which means it's probably been like two weeks since I updated but, oh well. I figured I'd take time right now to thank all the nice people who have reviewed thus far and we could do like a one clap thing after each person that'd be cool.
xoRetributionox yeah 7 games totally sucked $$ at least I didn't pitch hehehe any ways the movie was Sixteen Candles' my friends and I rented it and so yeah it was on my mind. (The whole Long Duck Dong thing)
krazypirategurl (times like four) dude u rock u keep reviewing b/c thats just sweet that u care that much about my random brainwaves
Jordan hehehe... am i that predictable, but shhhh don't tell anyone!
Jedi Padfoot merci for the comment (Btw I understand your name thing after like forever of trying to understand it, aka I've only seen one Star Wars movie (the newest one) and had to ask my friend who Obi Wan Ken Obi was, oh well maybe i'll watch the rest of them.)
Katir gracias for reading and liking my story enough to write a review
jennycraig10 thank yas for thinkin my randomness is interesting
dharma yeah i'm trying how do ya think im doing?
rustynail i'd say it was my skillz on writing, but that would be a lie i gotta give the props to all the wonderful' english teachers at my school for teachin me not to used bad language and mispell all sorts a them words (lol)
K-Daawg thankyaz for likin it
violaboader i'm keepin goin, just at a more slow pace b/c 4th quarter SUX!
MG thanks for liking it alot and i'm tryin 2 update asap
ERfanatic i'm tryin 2 carry on
Forgottenicedtea i hope u still think its interesting!
BtW I am ashamed that no one was wanting any Magic Brownies' and therefore didn't answer the question correctly: Long Duck Dong is a character in Sixteen Candles.
Now anyways, I'm thinkin of finishing this off in like say um... 10-12 chapters and then writing a happy happy joy joy sequel w/ a bit less drama bc happy endings RULE! tell me whatcha think and maybe I'll incoporate it.
I have also come to the decision that I am too nice and just update for my entertainment factor so thus I am going to add random quiz questions to the end as well as um... making a mandatory 7-10 reviews before I even consider what happens next in the story.
At 10 AM the following day, a four year old sat with her baby brother watching cartoons after she had finished cleaning up the kitchen from breakfast. She had just sat down with a bottle for her brother when a knock came through the door.
OPEN UP! This is the police! A shout rang through the shabby house.
The four year old stood up and moved to open the door. The police officer standing at the door lost his urgent tone and became more friendly when he saw the tiny girl at the door.
Hello, my name is Detective Carroll, what's your name? He asked squatting down to the girls height.
She replied sweetly.
Chelsea, what?My full name is Chelsea Nichole Ralston, oh and this is my brother Derrick. She said gesturing to her brother who was now crawling towards the open door.
Well, then hi Chelsea, is your daddy home? Carroll asked.
No, he's at work. Chelsea explained.
Well is anyone here with you? He glanced through the house.
She smiled as Carroll made a mental note of a four year old at home alone. But I cleaned up the dishes so Daddy won't yell at me, see? She pointed towards the spotless kitchen.
Oh. Well do you know where your daddy is? He asked.
Yeah. He's the athletic director at Chicago South.Right thanks. Hey Chelsea, do you have any special stuffed animals? Carroll asked knowing he would have to take the two down to the hospital.
Yeah, my koala, Teddie, he neighs. She said proudly.
Okay why don't you go get your shoes, and a jacket. Then grab Teddie and then how would you like to ride in a police car? Detective Carroll asked.
Yay! Can Derrick come too? I'm apossedta take care of him.Sure, grab his shoes and we can go.
Chelsea was ready to go almost instantaneously.
Okay ready? She nodded and picked up her brother.
Are we going to see my daddy?Nope, but how bout seeing your sister.Really, Caiden, oh I miss her a lot.
The ride to the hospital was nearly uneventful. However, to Chelsea it was exciting, she got to try turning on the sirens and then lights. She used the radio and then she rode for a while in the back seat while pretending to be a robber.
At county, Dr. Lockhart, had been on since 6:30 AM and had four hours left in her shift when Detective Carroll came in toting two small children.
Dr. Lockhart, I went to the residence of Mr. Kurt Ralston, and I found these two kids, but no man of the house. This young lady, he said gesturing with his arm that held the girl, told me that he was at work, so I'm going there next. Could you all check these two out to prove them healthy, maybe get social-Yeah we can do that. Dr. Lockhart said as he handed the young boy to her. The girl decided she could walk by herself and grabbed Dr. Lockhart's hand.
What's your name? Dr. Lockhart asked the girl.
I'm Chelsea, what's your name? She smiled hugging her koala causing it to neigh.
Dr. Lockhart smiled, Abby. I'm a doctor.Oh, cool! Can I call you Dr. Abby? Chelsea asked.
Um.. sure, Chelsea, have you ever played doctor before? Dr. Abby asked crouching down to her level, she knew that this would have to be a game for the girl otherwise she wouldn't cooperate.
Yeah with Braedin, he's my other brother. I always get to be the doctor. Are we gonna play doctor? Chelsea explained.
Sure, we can play doctor, I am going to pretend to be your doctor and then you're going to go upstairs and play doctor some more with a different person. Im sorry, but you won't get to be the doctor today. Dr. Abby smiled.
It's okay, what are we going to pretend is wrong with me?Well does anything on your body hurt? She knew she wasn't following procedure, but this was the best way she could get a four year old to talk.
No, Braedin says I get faguied or something like that a lot, but I don't know.Oh, yeah? Abby wrote that down.
Do you know my sister, Caiden? The nice man who brought us in said we could see her? Chelsea asked suddenly.
Yeah, I know her. I've been helping her get better. What's your full name?Chelsea Nichole Ralston.How old are you?When's your birthday?November 11. Are we playing REAL doctor, cuz you're asking me a lot of questions?Yeah, what year were you born?Um... I don't know.Okay, do you know your brother's full name?Yeah, Derrick Lucas Ralston.How old is he?When's his birthday?August 17.Okay, can he walk yet?Nope, he's just learned to crawl. Chelsea explained.
Okay, that's a little late. Can he stand on his own?Um.. Yeah he can.Well, that's great. We're going to go upstairs and get checked in, then we can visit with Caiden while we're upstairs. Abby said finishing up her questions.
Okay let's GO! Chelsea cheered.
Sure, kid, let's go. Abby said scooping up Derrick.
Derrick gurgled.
Is he talking, yet? Abby asked.
A little, just things like Maaa, I guess he thinks your his mom. Hey, you could be our Mommy, we don't gots one at all. Chelsea said.
I know, that's what Caiden told me. Abby said silently wondering to herself if that was the only way she could keep her promise to Caiden. Well anyways, here we are. Abby said showing Chelsea, the brightly decorated Pediatrics ward.
Hey, Dr. Lockhart, what can we do for you? Caiden's still asleep. One of the nurses said.
Oh, well, long story, but these are Caiden's siblings, they need to be checked out. This here is Chelsea, and this little guy is Derrick. Abby said tickling Derrick.
Derrick giggled.
Looks like the little guy's taking a liking to you.Yeah, hey listen, I've gotta get back, talk to Carter, wait for this guy to come in, and most importantly, I'm still on, so I technically should be working right now. Abby said.
Okay well can you wait till we admit them?Uh... sure. Any chance, they could be with their sister?Lemme check. The nurse took the records Abby had brought up and filed them. Then she took the two kids to Caiden's room.
Thanks for bringing them up here. We'll let you know what's happening with them.Okay, thanks so much. I've gotta go now. Bye. Abby said leaving the ward.
Chicago South Middle School
Braedin was sitting in his step father's gym class waiting for him to arrive, when a man came into the gym.
Hello, I'm looking for Mr. Kurt Ralston. Is he here? The man asked. The other boys looked at Braedin, how should they know, they don't see him EVERY living second.
You boy, what's your name? The man asked pointing at Braedin.
Um.. I'm Braedin, Braedin Adams. Braedin said timidly.
Well, Braedin, can you help me find your teacher, Mr. Ralston? He asked more nicely this time.
Braedin said relieved.
Okay, can you show me to his office?Yeah, follow me. Who are you? Braedin said directing the man out of the gym.
Detective Carroll, got a warrant for Ralston's arrest. You by any chance wouldn't be related to a Caiden Adams? Would you? Detective Carroll asked.
Yeah, she's my sister. Wait, but Kurt is going to get arrested?Yes, now listen, I can understand if you like-EXCELLENT! Caiden is going to be able to come home now, oh, Chelsea and Derrick will be so pleased. Braedin was grinning. Braedin had led Carroll to a closed door. Carroll nodded for him to knock.
Who is it? A rough voice boomed through the closed door.
It's um... well... it's Braedin, the um... guys, well you we're late to class and um... they wanted to know if you um... were planning on coming? Braedin was literally shaking.
Braedin, calm down. Yes, I'm planning on coming to class, I just had to finish watching some film on this guy for football. Kurt said trying to be friendly. He opened the door and there was Braedin with Detective Carroll.
Braedin, who is this?Detective Carroll, Kurt Ralston, you're under arrest for rape, attempted rape and abuse of five minors. Please remain silent, anything you say or do can be used against you in the court of Law. You are entitled to a lawyer, and if you cannot afford one, you will be assigned someone from the state. I have stated your rights, now we need to take you down to the station. Carroll said handcuffing him. Oh Braedin, tell your class that you have a study hall or something now. Carroll led Kurt to the door and towards his squad car.
Braedin had never felt happier in his life.
Carroll called County on his intercom.
County General?Yeah, can I talk to Dr. Lockhart or Dr. Carter?This is Carter.Okay, well then, I am heading down to the station, I have Kurt in custody, if you could tell her that would be excellent. Carroll explained.
Thank you, and I will. Thank you for handling this case so efficiently.No problem, you take care of those kids now. Bye.
Carter was grinning. He didn't really know why, he wasn't supposed to be this attached to any one patient, but something about the innocence of Caiden made him realize that it was important and she was a great kid.
Hey, Susan, I'm taking a break right now, I gotta talk to an old patient up in Peds. Carter said.
Hey, Carter wait! You can't leave on break too, Abby's up in Peds. with her patients, you've gotta wait. Susan was indignant.
Yeah, but it's about them I really have to go. Carter said. Susan was about to say something, but stopped herself.
ABBY, CAIDEN GUESS WHAT! Carter shouted reaching Caiden's hospital room.
Caiden asked.
Um.. firstly who are they? And secondly, Kurt has just been arrested. Carter said.
Really that's great!Are you sure? Caiden asked.
Yeah, Detective Carroll just called down in the ER and said that he had him in custody.SHHHH! I'm trying to watch The Little Mermaid.' Chelsea shouted over the excitement.
Okay, sorry. Abby apologized to the little girl.
Abs, who are these kids? Carter whispered to her sitting in the empty chair next to her.
These are Caiden's siblings. That's Chelsea, and that's Derrick. Abby explained pointing at each child.
Shhhh! This is a good song! The two adults said back and just began to watch The Little Mermaid' silently.
Do what the music say
You wanna kiss the girl
You've got to kiss the girl
Why don't you kiss the girl
You gotta kiss the girl
Go on and kiss the girl
All right fine. Carter mumbled. It was too tempting, the song was telling him to.
Abby asked him. He didn't vocalize his response, he just turned to her and kissed full on the lips.
OKAY SORRY PEOPLE TO END IT AT THAT, FIGURES SOME KISSING IS A GOOD WAY TO END, BUT OH WELL I GOTTA STUDY FOR MY BIOLOGY FINAL. THIS HAS BEEN A FUN PROCRASTINATION THOUGH.
OH QUIZ QUESTION: WHO SANG THE SONG KISS THE GIRL' IN THE LITTLE MERMAID? (BONUS POINTS IF YOU KNOW THE ACTOR AND THE CHARACTER) BTW PLS. REVIEW, AKA I WON'T UPDATE TILL OH I DON'T KNOW SAY I GET 10 MORE REVIEWS.
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