The Mystery of Karen Walker continues....
Well I know I have slightly changed the characters but that is only cos I need it to be more dramatic. My fanfic is dramatic cos I can't write comedy and my aim is to make people cry cos I love writing. Well here's the chapter:-
Previously on T.M.O.K.W.C
JACK: "Hey Lois, I was wondering if I could ask you a few questions about Karen...."
SUE: "Well Karen became pregnant which caused the biggest argument and Bernie had enough so he left...."
KAREN: "I don't know a Bernie."
JACK: "Yea you do. Bernie, Bernie Stone!"
......her face was drained of any colour she had.....
GRACE: "Jack's gone to England to fine this Bernie guy cos you wouldn't say what had happened..."
What if he brings Bernie back with him? a shiver ran down Karen's spine I can't see Bernie again, not after....after....
Her thoughts couldn't go on as the memory was too painful. Tears were welling up in her eyes so she rushed out the office snatching her coat and purse and headed straight for the airport. She needed to find Jack.
Chapter Three
Dear Diary,
England is great! I arrived yesterday with Karen's credit card and the shop here – oo la la! No wait, that's French-duh! Anyway, I love their accents, they remind me of Lorraine. Maybe I should look for her, no can't, I'm looking for Bernie. Yeah! Something was definitely wrong, I have never seen Karen properly freak out, I can't imagine what frightens her so much, and she's never scared of anyone. Well I'm gonna get to the bottom of this. I want to know about Karen, I don't know much about her past and she needs me, plus I hear English guys are good – if you know what I mean ;)
Jack
-x-
The black taxi pulls up to the house number that matched the piece of paper Jack held in his hand. He opened the door, climbed out and paid the diver "he he English money is weird!" Jack thought.
With a shaky hand he knocked on the door. His heart was in him mouth and beating faster and faster. "Could I be in danger? What if he is 7ft tall and has a gun? Or worse, a beard?"
Jack panicked and turned around preparing to walk away when the door opened.
"Can I help you?" said a reasonable man-ish voice.
Jack prepared himself for what came next, held his breath and turned around.
He saw a guy that must have been his height with grey hair wearing jeans and a baggy top, although not baggy on him. No beard or gun – phew!
"Yes, um, I was looking for Bernie Stone" replied Jack a bit taken back by this mans appearance.
"Yeah I'm Bernie Stone. Who are you? He grumbled
"I'm Jack McFarland; I came here to ask you a few questions. You see I went to find you on 125th Ave but you weren't there, however Sue told me where I could find you."
"Well what do you want?" Bernie growled defensively
"Oh don't look so worried" said Jack becoming more confident with Bernie "I just want to ask you about what happened between you and Karen Walker."
"Who?" he asked with a blank expression
"Karen Walker, oh sorry Karen Delaney"
Silence overtook the conversation.......
Well that's part one finished, please review I love you for it!!!!!!!!