UnangelicHalo no, you're cute. Missy, come on, tell me what part you like and dont about my story. I'm not looking into going into the writing business so I wont take offense. No story is perfect, so go on, tell me.
SweetestReject aww dont worry hun. Thanx fer reading
musicgirl141 i will definately think about making the whole comming back to life thing more believable (trust me i already am). But thing is, I didn't want to do something that was way out there and wasnt believable. So I figured the only way to avoid that was to give as little info as needed, so you guys could imagine for urselves.
Pens in potatoes lol ure pretty persistant aren't you? ill let you in on a secret. If you really want me to update faster, you gotta tell me what u like and dislike (ive said this like a million times, but well you know). It's hard to write when you're not really inspired. But if I have some kind of guide (what you like and dont) it makes it quite a bit easier ergo faster. So plz, say SOMETHING else other than update and that its good. Dont get me wrong, i appreciate you reading and reviewin, its just it would be that much more tremendously awesome if you gave a little more info. Thanks again.
kikki lol I don't know why, but your comment cracked me up SOO much. And I dont think im old enough to write about stuff like that. I wonder...how old are you? doesnt really matter, what u said was still SOO funny. lmao i dont know y...just was
Title: It's ALIVE!!
Summary: What if Jesse came back to life? What would happen? you know what to do
We went to talk to Father Dom. "Problem is he's going to need a diploma, you know, officially." I stated.
Father Dom rubbed his head. "I must say I have to agree with you. I guess I can take care of that."
"Really?" I asked. "Just like that? I thought it would be pretty difficult because of the lack of records."
"Well, I didn't say it would be easy. But I should be able to enroll him by Monday. Admissions understands that students need to be enrolled as soon as possible. We'll sort out the details later."
"Are you sure? There's nothing I can do to help?" I asked giving Jesse a meaningful look.
He got the message. "Me too. I can help if you need anything."
"No, that's perfectly all right. I can handle it and I don't think there's much you could do anyway."
"Ok then," I said clapping my hands. I couldn't hide it, I was simply beaming. I wanted to get out of there quickly so Father Dom wouldn't notice...well..as much.
"Good day," Father Dom said waving at us goodbye.
With that I grabbed Jesse's hand and went out.
"This is going to be so cool. You going to my school. I mean it will be weird...but cool."
Jesse smiled. I'm not sure if he knew what cool meant or not, but he seemed to figure it out. "Yeah," he said putting his arm around my back.
"Oh, we should get you some clothes." I said giggling. I could image Jesse going to the mall with all those lights and Victoria Secret...oh man. This was going to be great.
"What's so funny?" he asked.
"Oh, nothing."
He raised his eyebrow at me. "Oh really?"
"Yup," I said trying to keep a straight face. "Come on. We have shopping to do."
After we got a bunch of clothes for Jesse, he changed into a pair of jeans and a white t-shirt. Even in casual clothing he still looked amazing. We walked inside and were immediately greeted by my mother and Andy. My mom looked absolutely thrilled. I just knew she was itching to say-and probably would-"oh that's amazing Suze. You've made another friend."
But before she could gush over the thought of me "befriending" I said to her, "Mom, this is Jesse." Then I walked over to her and said not as loud, "his apartment had some problems, and now he has nowhere to stay. Do you think he could stay with us for a little bit?"
I expected her to be somewhat happy towards my question. Well...not so much. "I don't know Suze. I don't even know this young man," she said. Andy gave an agreeing look.
"Mom, trust me, please. He's a really good friend and just about the most respectable person that you'll probably ever know."
She gave me the same look again. Which, I might add, did not make me too happy. Or calm for that matter. I started to get pretty anxious. "Mom," I pleaded desperately. "He has nowhere to go. What is going to do? You're going to just throw him out on the streets?"
"Now there's no need for that," Andy said. Looks like he had a heart after all. "I guess e could stay in Brad's room?"
"Yeah," my mom said. "That's fine."
I turned around and said, "Jesse, you can stay here if you want." I hadn't told him I was going to ask so he looked kind of surprised.
Then he smiled and said so quietly I could barely hear him, "Thank you."
A/N: I changed the story a bit, making them doubtful about letting Jesse stay in the house. Sorry guys, I guess I was just in a hurry to finish lol. Well I would write more...but I'm kind of lacking inspiration right now...reviews should do the trick I think :P Just tell me what you like or don't like about the story, not just "UPDATE NOW" that gets old guys lol. laters
