Well I'm not going to do everybody so i'm thanking everyone for reviewing before hand. I've officially run out of things to say to 'great, luving it'. Don't get me wrong though, that's better than nothing. At the very least I'd like to know who's reading my fics (that way I can read yours hehe). So again thank all of you guys very much for putting up w/ little ol' me. I'm not worthy ::bows down and mumbles "not worthy"::

SweetestReject i cont believe you said that. (you read that right. i luv the brits. me and my friend amanda imitate them all the time lol) hehe innocent ol' paul? ::says in an innocent yet sarcastic voice:: never. well...maybe. I dunno yet. cliffys are good fer ya. tanx fer reading

Ahhhh im sry bout the short chapters. Longer chaps would take longer though...and i can tell you guys dont want THAT hehe

Clavel do what in class? be modern? lol. umm ok whatever. only one thing to comment bout: 'you ain't seen nothin yet' hehe Jesse hasn't even said anything ::beams:: she likes my authorial skills. I guess I did make Jesse's pressence there...hehe i dunno

ndblue123 phft I cant tell you lol. I think its kinda funny how people ask q's in reviews. I mean, how am i gonna answer you? on this page? but the next chap is on this page. Not makin funa ya, i think its cute. I get to know whats goin through you're head :P well lol what you wrote didnt rly make sense sry. I think you meant I dont descripe in detail everything that happens all at once, but I do it inbetween the dialogue? if thats what you mean i totally agree! meg does that haha! i hate it when authors put a big block of description b/c its not very interesting or relevant (except maybe for the tone of the setting). Its a lot better to put little descriptions inbetween what people are saying. its like taking sugar w/ ure vitamins :P its np btw to say update or whatever. its just annoying when thats all people say. which u of course did not do thanx :P

Pens in potatoes hehe dont worry i make up words all the time ::wink wink:: I was kinda confused by what you said..going into jesse being a ghost would be long and uneeded? i think thats what you meant lol thanx i luv ending the chaps in fun interesting ways. I figured one of the first things you want to see when jesse comes alive is how paul reacts so I ended it right b4 that hehe. i know im evil. btw TCPEEPS yahoo? er what?

Chap 4 (might give it an actual title later dunno...)

"Heya Suze," he said grinning at me.

I didn't know what to think. Well...actually I did. After I got over the shock of noticing that Paul was going to realize Jesse was alive and kicking. Yeah, I knew what to think all right. This, I realized quickly, was so not good. What to do about it? Well that was a whole other story.

Before I could barely think about what I should do or say Paul looked at me in a puzzling way and said, "Suze? You in there?"

I hadn't been quiet for long. Actually a matter of less than a couple of seconds, but I guess I had a weird look on my face. I mean, could you blame me? This was it. If I thought they faught a lot when Jesse was alive I had a whole other thing comming.

Paul didn't wait for an answer. He turned slightly from me and to his other side. He had barely moved a couple of inches before I saw his facial expression suddenly change and the color drain from his face.

I could also feel his hand's--which he had placed on my shoulder when asking if I was functioning properly or not--warmth suddenly disappear like it had evaporated or something. Which doesn't really make sense because warmth doesn't evaporate, water does. But whatever. Hey, things where happening pretty suddenly okay? My brain's activities weren't at best.

I guess Cee Cee noticed that Paul was looking at Jesse in a funny way so she tried to explain saying "Paul, this is Jesse. He's new."

Jesse walked over to me and put his arm around me. Normally I would have been extatic but I was far too worried about what Paul was going to do. I mean, I was at school, infront of everyone. "We know each other," Jesse said glaring at Paul.

"Oh," Adam said awkwardly. He couldn't help noticing the way Jesse was looking at Paul.

"W-What are you doing here?" Paul stammerd out.

"The question is, what are you doing here, bothering Susannah?" Jesse explained while leading me away and towards class leaving Paul behind with his jaw dropped wide open.

Cee Cee and Adam followed and we all slipped into homeroom just in time.


I guess seeing Paul must have gotten to Jesse because after that he was majorly clingy. Not that I minded. It was just...well..kind of ironic that when he finally decided to be clingy it was at school, where it's very common to get in trouble for that sort of thing. It's not like we were macking or anything, but at a catholic school like this one, sisters get all hot and bothered when a guy even looks at a girl the wrong way.

I was extremely worried about how Paul was going to react though. I mean, I so did not want another fight on my hands.

A/N: Ok i know this is short but I couldnt not end it here. i rly tried not to but nothing is coming to me. im much more of a paulie writer, dunno what to tell you. i like complications and with jesse alive suze's mind is much more at peace and i cant stand that! lol. rly i cant. so im skipping the obvious jesse/suze fluff that should go here and moving straight onto paulieness. dont hate me plz. i just have the hardest time getting inspired to write about jesse. maybe ill get inspired and add some jesse stuff later on. till then i thought id make u dedicated readers of mine happy and post another chap. hope u like. i promise ill have the next soon. if not itll come a little later, but it will be long and worth the wait. promise. otherwise ill be kicking myself in the ass for days. THAT i can provide insurance on. newayz, gtg and work on the next installment hehe

Anybody know how to get stars to work on this thing? ::bangs mouse:: they wont work!! erg. this thing is so broken ugh. silly fanfiction site. ::huff:: stupid dots...ahhh! lol im killin myself w/ all these dots nooooo!

PS. if there are ne spelling errors im sry. our comp just puked all over and everything is gone, including word, my source of spell check. plz dont say nething about spelling in ure reviews unless it is horribly bad b/c when people do that they tend to only mention errors and not talk about what they liked/disliked about the story. (which is what im dying to hear! :P)