hello everyone sorry for taking so long for updating
I'M SORRY!
so umm anyways...
note/.../is thinkning and "quotes" are talking
i appreciat all the reviewers who reviewed the story
and i'm ummm using Hutchy's idea ( THANK U HUTCHY UR A LIFE SAVER! )
Disclaimer:I do not own Beyblade or anything with beyblade
SORRY FOR GRAMMER!
on with the story.
-Lost in the Rain-
Hilary's POV
sigh- /this sucks yesterday I ALMOST kissed Kai and stupid Tyson interrupted/ -sigh-/when did this crush get so big/
Flashback
"Hey Hilary!" Tyson yelled
"huh?" Hilary said as she turned to look at the annoying brunnet.
Hilary turned around and looked at Tyson and saw that he wasn't alone, there was a VERY cute guy next to him looking down so she couldn't see his eyes. Hilary eyes widen when he looked up and their eyes locked. Hilary saw beautiful silver eyes that held no emotion unless you looked closely you would be able to see a hint of saddness.
"Hilary this is my friend Kai" Tyson said
"Hi I'm Hilary, It's very nice to meet you Kai" Hilary said while she extended her arm to shake his hand.
Kai looked at Hilary and walked right pass her. At first Hilary was outraged at how rude he was to her but then calmed down later after she saw that he was cold to everyone. That was when he raided he mind and e ''small'' crush started.
end of flashback
/ how did it get so big/
Kai's POV
/...I can't believe i almost kissed Hilary yesterday.../-sigh-/ I mean she's my friend and I almost kissed her, does that mean I like her more than a friend/ I think i'm gonna apologize to her later I don't want to ruin this small, fragil friendship with the only girl friend (not dating) I ever had/-sigh-/ I should go before i change my mind/
Kai got up and started walking towards Hilary/I can't believe I'm gonna apologize to someone and a girl none the less/ya but this is no ordinary girl this is Hilary/ / Who the hell are you and how did you get in my head/It's pretty sad you don't know who I am, I'm you Kai, I'm your conscience/ /I thought you died along time ago/ /sorry i can never die unless you die..duh/ /oh I see/ /Anyways as I was saying about Hilary she's no ordinary girl she's smart, she's can beat the hell out of people, and she's cute./ / ya she is smart, and she can pack a punch, and ya she cute wait ... what NO! she's not cute/ / ya she's sexy/ /ya...NO/ oh come on it's no use we already know you were checking her out the first time you met her, right guilt/ / ya/ /I guess you right/
/I guess I'm starting to really like Hilary then../ / I told you/
Normal POV
Hilary decided to go to the park to figure out her messed up feelings. So she sat there and sat there and sat there thinking about the recent events. Pretty soon the sun had already set and it was dark outside. When Hilary realized this she got up, dusted her self off and slowly started walking. And because of of thoughts she started wandering and taking turns when they were not needed. And now Hilary is in an alley that leads to who knows where.
"Hey there little lady, what's a FINE thing doing out here in the downtown part of town?" a man said
Hilary POV
/whoa I'm in the tashy section/how did i get here/
"uhhhhh I got lost do you know where Maple St. is?" asked Hilary hoping that the men would give her directions.
"Nope but I know the way to my bed"said the man and laughs followed after his comment.
"Well then I will be going then" Hilary said as she started walking away.
Hilary wanted to get away as fast as possible because she now realized that they smelled strongly of alcohol. /dammit, darn me and my problems/
"Wait if you live in the rich part of town" Hilary heard the man say to the other guys"then doesn't that mean you have money?" the drunken hobo said.
" I dunno" another one said " maybe we should check"
and with that they slowly advanded towards her as Hilary started to run.
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Well I thought you guys deserved a cliffhanger...somehow.
I will try to update by next week because I'm going to Las Vegas on Friday so until then!
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