The Rain
It's
freezing cold out here in the rain
and I think I'm going
insane.
The rain shields my tears
but my fears
still linger
nearby
Raindrops
are washing my words away
and you can't hear me...
You're
so crazy
and I love you
I
watch you walk away
I stand here drenching in the rain
and all
of my hope of you is slain
And
I'm waiting
right above you
I'm waiting to love you
I
can stand here
in the rain
and wait for you
and wait for
you
I can wait for hell
to freeze over
You're
everywhere
You're everything
Please warm me with your love
I'm
as cold as ice
But you can't,
you won't
Because you're in
love too...
I'm
trembling softly under fogged breaths
There's nothing else to do
left
Your memory is keeping me warm
But I can't escape this
storm
right now
And
I'm drowning
in puddles of my melted heart
You're
so insane...
And I love you
I'm
counting the days as I wait outside your door
pacing up and down
more and more
I'm almost broken-hearted
I won't return to where
I started
again
I
can stand here
in the rain
and wait for you
and wait for
you
I can wait for hell
to freeze over
You're
everywhere
You're everything
Please warm me with your love
I'm
as cold as ice
But you can't,
you won't
Because you're in
love too...
I
just want you to come outside
it doesn't matter if you're still
obsessed with her
I'd rather have you here right now
so I can
feel you and not drown
You're
soo crazy...
And I love you
I
can stand here
in the rain
and wait for you
and wait for
you
I can wait for hell
to freeze over
You're
everywhere
You're everything
Please warm me with your love
I'm
as cold as ice
But you can't,
you won't
Because you're in
love too...
hello my fellow reviewers! what you have just witnessed is a song written by a good friend of mine! she read my poem rain and sent me this to ask what i thought of it... i luvd it as you can plainly see.
i will leave her name anonymous because she told me to. all i will tell you is that she is a new age hippie!
tell me what you think so i can tell her. be kind cuz she 'knows' Harry Potter and she'll have him put a spell on you. insert evil laugh here
now...REVIEW!