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Well here is the 2nd chapter

Jasmine walked down the two corridors that lead to the main docking space, she always stayed there when she went looking for her father, then she just stayed there when she felt like it. When she walked in the docking space she yelled, "Hey is any one here, any one?" she got a little scared. 'Where is every one, this docking place should be loaded with workers?' she looked around for awhile and seat down by a crate. She looked down at her swollen ankles. 'God my ankles hurt, I need to lay down, but it hurts too much to move on these ankles, grrr.' She thought when she heard a screech behind her and she spun around, yelping at the daggers of pain that shot up and down her legs. She fall down and looked up, seeing the black thing in front of her purring and slowly circled her, stacking it's "pray" or such. She whimpered and tried to crawl away as fast as she could.

Hearing this (note: can aliens see?)the black thing jumped on top of her and slashed it talons at her legs so she could not escape. She screamed and called for help as she waved her hands, smacking the talons away from her legs. In a flash the alien was all over the floor, every where but where she and a mix of light were. She looked up and almost cried.

PRED POV

'This Oooman is being attacked by a hard meat, I must stop this before she is killed'

BACK TO THE MAIN SETTING

Jasmine looked like she had seen a ghost. "What do you want with me?" she whispered as the invisible person became visible and walked up to her. It knelt down to her and she looked at what it, no, he was wearing. He was in a full body suit that was red, black, and white with tan clothing at his waist and calf. He stock out his hand and shook it a bit, gesturing for her to take hold of it. She grabbed it with no second thought. He grabbed her waist and wrist and lifted her up. He was going to let her go but she fainted in his arms. So he lifted her over his shoulder and ran to a resting station and laid her down and went to a chair and sat down, waiting for her to wake up.

JASMINES DREAM

Jasmine was walking down a hallway when suddenly she was pushed in a dark room.

She looked at who it was who pushed her in the room and had its hands on her for arms. It was her hero who saved her twice, she smiled and looked it straight in the face or mask.

But then she felt a sharp pain in her stomach, she looked down and saw bleed on her hero's wrist blades. Her mouth was open as she squeaked out sounds. One that was her last was, "why." Then she fell to the floor and looked at her hero, but this time his mask was off but she couldn't see his face, but right nest to her two tear drops. He was crying or she was. She then dropped her head and lead there and watched her hero walk away, leaving her very vulnerable. She then repeated her last word again, "why" then blacked out.

BACK TO NORMALE VEIW

Th'rick watched as the girl tossed and turned and cried, but didn't know what to do. 'What is this Oooman doing, is she sick?' he got up and walked to her. He sat down next to her and placed his hand in her head. She stopped thrashing. He rubbed her head and she started to wake up…

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Cliffhanger wall hope you enjoyed this one and this chapter is donated to Theyoutjapet

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