All right… I know I have said before that I like bad reviews too… but not when people say I don't like it. When I get told 'I don't like it' it makes me feel like as though I am not doing a good job writing. If people are going to tell me what is wrong with it, and give me a few pointers, hey, I like that. For the people saying I don't like it, well, don't read it! Plain and simple! I have other people that like the story, and find it to be a good one. This is my story with the most reviews, and if you want descriptive writing, read my story Three Remaining, because it is a lot slower, and a lot more descriptive. I can just totally stop writing the story all together if people are telling me they don't like it all the time, if that is what you want. There are a lot of other people out there enjoying this story, so just don't read it if you don't like it, nothing is telling you that you have to read it! All I am trying to get at here is that I don't want to hear things like "your story sux" or "I hate this story" or "This is a stupid story!" If you don't like it, either don't give me a review, or either just tell me nicely what is wrong with it, and I will try to fix it for you. Ok now… if you didn't like it before.. I am continuing, so you might not want to go on any farther…

"Mom? Dad?" Danny asked, seeing his parents tied up in the closet. There was a musty smell in here, and the walls were all wet from something.

"Mom, Dad? How… but if you… then they…" Jazz mumbled, looking at the two of them tied up in the small closet. Danny reached over, and ripped the tape from off of their mouths and a red spot was left from it.

"Danny, Jazz, we need to get out of here," Maddie said, as she laid a hand on Danny, but then pulled back. Danny just looked at her confused, because she seemed to act as though there was something wrong with him.

"Danny, why is your hair white?" She asked him, and Danny realized he still had the handcuffs on, and he was still a ghost.

"Ummm… I was… trying out some hairdye to make my hair blonde… and it turned out white!" He thought up quickly.

"Sounds normal enough to me, but what have I told you about dyeing your hair?"

"Mom, Danny, come on, stop arguing, and let's get out of here!" Jazz cut in.

Jazz opened the door, to reveal the normal lab. Nothing had changed over it, except people hadn't been in there in a few days, and there was a light covering of dust over some of the objects in the lab. Danny crept out, and now everyone could see what he looked like more better. A slim body, which was normal, green eyes, and white hair, which wasn't normal.

"Danny, your eyes are green!" Maddie exclaimed, looking at her son.

"Uhh… they have always been green! Or either that dye must have done something to them…" he lied, as he turned around, and heard footsteps coming down the stairs. Then, the replica of his parents had showed up in the doorway. Who were these other two people? They looked exactly like his parents, but for some reason, there seemed to be something different about them. He then remembered when he looked over the side of the stair rails… they weren't his parents. When they looked up at him, there was that evil look in their eyes, which had given them away. Danny recognized this look once again, when he saw the two of them step into the lab. It wasn't the same look that his parents would have given him. He was so stupid for not figuring it out in the first place! Why didn't he notice it before? His parents would never do anything like that to him, not matter what he was.

Danny ran up to the other two, not knowing who they were, let alone what they were, and shot out an ecto-beam, right in front of his parents. He didn't care if they saw, he was mad at these two things, and he wanted them gone. They actually had made him believe that his own parents would do this to him, and now they were going to get payback.

"Nice job using our weapons Danny!" Maddie shouted out to him, thinking that he was merely only using her weapons.

Danny wasn't paying attention though, and he ended up flying to avoid a beam that the two things shot out at him. That had to have given him away… did it?

This was a short part… so I am only asking for 3 reviews!