I'm not so sure about my title right now.....
M14: ok guys, one of my few attempts to make a fanfic.....please be kind.... I've always wanted to write a Frodo/Sam! so here it is.....
A simple Shire day. Simple, but beautiful. The Sun was shining, and there wasn't a cloud in the sky. It was on a day like this long ago that two hobbits, from different status rankings, realized their love for one another. One was pale like a porcelain doll, with dark curls that contrasted his beautiful face. Many say he had Elvish blood in him. To accent his beauty, two deep, piercing blue eyes. Baggins is his name. Frodo Baggins. The other was almost his opposite, with skin blessed by the Sun's golden rays. A mess of golden curls atop his head and a smile on his face, Samwise Gamgee went about his work in his master's garden. But not just anyone's garden. No, this garden belongs to Frodo Baggins. Master and servant. Best friends. Lovers. This is the story of Frodo and Sam. Their love is many tales within a tale. Here shall be written only one. 'Why only one?', you ask? The tales of two lovers shall always go on forever, written in the stars even after death. Thus, the only tale to be told shall be the one that occurred on this day many years ago.
M14: so.....how is it so far?...bad? good? You like? You hate?...please review and tell me what you think.......this is one of few fics I've written ever...please be kind........ AND!!! I need help deciding what title I should have! I was thinking either 'anniversary....forgotten?' or 'A tale within the legend: the romance of Frodo and Sam'.....I could use other suggestions!... it might take me a while to update...depending on what kind of reviews I get....thank you for reading this and spending your valuable time listening to me rant!
M14: ok guys, one of my few attempts to make a fanfic.....please be kind.... I've always wanted to write a Frodo/Sam! so here it is.....
A simple Shire day. Simple, but beautiful. The Sun was shining, and there wasn't a cloud in the sky. It was on a day like this long ago that two hobbits, from different status rankings, realized their love for one another. One was pale like a porcelain doll, with dark curls that contrasted his beautiful face. Many say he had Elvish blood in him. To accent his beauty, two deep, piercing blue eyes. Baggins is his name. Frodo Baggins. The other was almost his opposite, with skin blessed by the Sun's golden rays. A mess of golden curls atop his head and a smile on his face, Samwise Gamgee went about his work in his master's garden. But not just anyone's garden. No, this garden belongs to Frodo Baggins. Master and servant. Best friends. Lovers. This is the story of Frodo and Sam. Their love is many tales within a tale. Here shall be written only one. 'Why only one?', you ask? The tales of two lovers shall always go on forever, written in the stars even after death. Thus, the only tale to be told shall be the one that occurred on this day many years ago.
M14: so.....how is it so far?...bad? good? You like? You hate?...please review and tell me what you think.......this is one of few fics I've written ever...please be kind........ AND!!! I need help deciding what title I should have! I was thinking either 'anniversary....forgotten?' or 'A tale within the legend: the romance of Frodo and Sam'.....I could use other suggestions!... it might take me a while to update...depending on what kind of reviews I get....thank you for reading this and spending your valuable time listening to me rant!