Title: Popular Now
Chapter 3: Accidents Happen
Disclaimer: only own my made up characters: Kara Paisa, Melinda Quoi, and Tim Irks. Also other characters I create.
Author's Notes: Alright, I'm making progress! I might change this story to 'R'...maybe. Okay, I changed it from Timothy being in his freshmen year to his senior year...okay? Everyone okay with that? *crickets chirp* Okay then...he moved to an apartment and has a roommate named Tim Irks...they kind of have the same name.
Reviewers:
POtASSiUM xx: Yeah, I guess I should have put AU. But the problem is that, I already posted the first chapter and I don't feel like changing the chapter. Sorry.
LilTyphoon: Thanks for liking my spunk. Yeah, I made Timmy popular and good looking...heheh.
BroadwayStar77: Sorry if the cutting the wrists was disturbing. Should I raise the rating to R? Because I might mention some more things when Timmy tries to kill himself. Actually, when he cut his wrists was just a flashback. Sorry if I'm going to fast. Glad that it's okay for a first FOP fic.
soulful-sin: sorry about the 'plot hole'. I actually didn't mean for that to happen. I just wanted a little flashback but I guess I wasn't very good at making the story. Its okay if you sound cruel, I guess it's just constructive criticism right? Well, I guess I made this a not so well story. I'm not really a 'good' or 'bad' writer. I'm kind of in the middle, but I guess this is one of my bad ones. Really, really sorry about that.
S.S.T.A.G- Thanks, I'll keep on going and...sorry that I got rid of Cosmo and Wanda.
Zelda-lover- glad you don't think it's crappy.
akmw4eva- Lol, yes, he's a jock, Tootie? I'd rather not add her, because I didn't get to see ONE episode with her in it...sorry.
Timothy brought Trixie to the nurse's office and stayed. Veronica, Kara, and Melinda had to explain everything that happened. The nurse nodded and bandaged her ankle and told her that she could take it out in two weeks. Trixie got a crutch and Timothy helped her out of the office and brought her with Veronica, Kara, and Melinda trailing behind to their next class.
Timothy bade them farewell and headed off to his last class. When school was over, Timothy went to his apartment ignoring his roommate Tim and dropped off his bag. He walked off towards the mechanical shop where he worked at. He walked in sulking as usual and put on his uniform.
"Hey Timmy boy! How's life treating ya?" Tad and Chad asked.
Timothy looked at them, "It's Timothy."
"Okay TIMOTHY, how's it going?" Tad asked.
Timothy stared blankly at them, "Are you here to buy something or have something fixed?"
"Lighten up TIMOTHY, we're here to look around," Chad answered.
Timothy looked at the two of them, "Then LOOK around."
"Yo Double-T! Chill man!" Tim Irks, his roommate said from the door.
"Hello T-" but Timothy was cut short.
"It's Irk-man, IRK-man," Irks replied.
Tim looked at him, "Hello Tim."
Tad, Chad, and Tim just sighed.
"We'll see you later TIMOTHY," Tad and Chad said while walking out.
Irks looked at Timothy, "Why don't you just go out and enjoy life?"
Timothy stared at Tim with a dull look, "I've tried...so why are you here?"
Tim rolled his eyes at Timothy's monotone voice, "Double-T, Double-T, keep it together man, I only came here to say hello and stay dry. It's a down pour outside. Besides, Veronica is waiting for me to pick her up, we're gonna go on a... 'date'."
"Then go on your 'date'," Timothy said in his monotone voice again.
"Whatever, hey, the rain stopped, see you later Double-T!" Irks ran out.
It was nearing 4:30PM and Timothy had to go for football practice. He left the shop and headed towards the field. Though Tim was annoying as he could be, he made Timothy promise he would at least try sports. Even though Tim was a pain in the ass, he cared about Timothy.
Timothy headed off towards the school and went into the lockers to change. He changed and walked out into the field and as usual, the cheerleaders had practice. Trixie and the other cheerleaders waved at him and he just nodded at them with a blank face.
The team started practice. Half an hour had passed and the team was doing a last play. The play was called and Timothy said, "Hike!" [A/N: Is it Hike or Hut? Oh well, I hear two different things whenever I play football] Timothy ran back with the mud underneath him. He was looking for an open man, specifically AJ, who had decided on taking sports with Timothy and Chester. Timothy ran to the side and threw the ball.
What Timothy didn't notice Mitch, his arch enemy, was to his left and charged at him when he threw the ball. At the last minute, Timothy saw Mitch, turned around and started to run. Unfortunately for Timothy, Mitch tripped him. Timothy lost his balance but gained it again, but he slipped on some slippery mud and it looked like he did a front flip. The last thing Timothy remembered was the pain in his back and neck and the blinding flash, then complete darkness.
Yes, another chapter that doesn't go with the other chapters...I'm not very good at that am I? Okay, R&R or R&Flame or R&ConstructiveCriticism. LOL, okay, sorry for the long update!
Chapter 3: Accidents Happen
Disclaimer: only own my made up characters: Kara Paisa, Melinda Quoi, and Tim Irks. Also other characters I create.
Author's Notes: Alright, I'm making progress! I might change this story to 'R'...maybe. Okay, I changed it from Timothy being in his freshmen year to his senior year...okay? Everyone okay with that? *crickets chirp* Okay then...he moved to an apartment and has a roommate named Tim Irks...they kind of have the same name.
Reviewers:
POtASSiUM xx: Yeah, I guess I should have put AU. But the problem is that, I already posted the first chapter and I don't feel like changing the chapter. Sorry.
LilTyphoon: Thanks for liking my spunk. Yeah, I made Timmy popular and good looking...heheh.
BroadwayStar77: Sorry if the cutting the wrists was disturbing. Should I raise the rating to R? Because I might mention some more things when Timmy tries to kill himself. Actually, when he cut his wrists was just a flashback. Sorry if I'm going to fast. Glad that it's okay for a first FOP fic.
soulful-sin: sorry about the 'plot hole'. I actually didn't mean for that to happen. I just wanted a little flashback but I guess I wasn't very good at making the story. Its okay if you sound cruel, I guess it's just constructive criticism right? Well, I guess I made this a not so well story. I'm not really a 'good' or 'bad' writer. I'm kind of in the middle, but I guess this is one of my bad ones. Really, really sorry about that.
S.S.T.A.G- Thanks, I'll keep on going and...sorry that I got rid of Cosmo and Wanda.
Zelda-lover- glad you don't think it's crappy.
akmw4eva- Lol, yes, he's a jock, Tootie? I'd rather not add her, because I didn't get to see ONE episode with her in it...sorry.
Timothy brought Trixie to the nurse's office and stayed. Veronica, Kara, and Melinda had to explain everything that happened. The nurse nodded and bandaged her ankle and told her that she could take it out in two weeks. Trixie got a crutch and Timothy helped her out of the office and brought her with Veronica, Kara, and Melinda trailing behind to their next class.
Timothy bade them farewell and headed off to his last class. When school was over, Timothy went to his apartment ignoring his roommate Tim and dropped off his bag. He walked off towards the mechanical shop where he worked at. He walked in sulking as usual and put on his uniform.
"Hey Timmy boy! How's life treating ya?" Tad and Chad asked.
Timothy looked at them, "It's Timothy."
"Okay TIMOTHY, how's it going?" Tad asked.
Timothy stared blankly at them, "Are you here to buy something or have something fixed?"
"Lighten up TIMOTHY, we're here to look around," Chad answered.
Timothy looked at the two of them, "Then LOOK around."
"Yo Double-T! Chill man!" Tim Irks, his roommate said from the door.
"Hello T-" but Timothy was cut short.
"It's Irk-man, IRK-man," Irks replied.
Tim looked at him, "Hello Tim."
Tad, Chad, and Tim just sighed.
"We'll see you later TIMOTHY," Tad and Chad said while walking out.
Irks looked at Timothy, "Why don't you just go out and enjoy life?"
Timothy stared at Tim with a dull look, "I've tried...so why are you here?"
Tim rolled his eyes at Timothy's monotone voice, "Double-T, Double-T, keep it together man, I only came here to say hello and stay dry. It's a down pour outside. Besides, Veronica is waiting for me to pick her up, we're gonna go on a... 'date'."
"Then go on your 'date'," Timothy said in his monotone voice again.
"Whatever, hey, the rain stopped, see you later Double-T!" Irks ran out.
It was nearing 4:30PM and Timothy had to go for football practice. He left the shop and headed towards the field. Though Tim was annoying as he could be, he made Timothy promise he would at least try sports. Even though Tim was a pain in the ass, he cared about Timothy.
Timothy headed off towards the school and went into the lockers to change. He changed and walked out into the field and as usual, the cheerleaders had practice. Trixie and the other cheerleaders waved at him and he just nodded at them with a blank face.
The team started practice. Half an hour had passed and the team was doing a last play. The play was called and Timothy said, "Hike!" [A/N: Is it Hike or Hut? Oh well, I hear two different things whenever I play football] Timothy ran back with the mud underneath him. He was looking for an open man, specifically AJ, who had decided on taking sports with Timothy and Chester. Timothy ran to the side and threw the ball.
What Timothy didn't notice Mitch, his arch enemy, was to his left and charged at him when he threw the ball. At the last minute, Timothy saw Mitch, turned around and started to run. Unfortunately for Timothy, Mitch tripped him. Timothy lost his balance but gained it again, but he slipped on some slippery mud and it looked like he did a front flip. The last thing Timothy remembered was the pain in his back and neck and the blinding flash, then complete darkness.
Yes, another chapter that doesn't go with the other chapters...I'm not very good at that am I? Okay, R&R or R&Flame or R&ConstructiveCriticism. LOL, okay, sorry for the long update!