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I have to give my agreements to my readers about my grammatical mistakes. But you must understand that it is hard to do a story in another language. I read and write in english for some time now, and I always did mistakes no matter in wish of my story's you look, but people, I'm 13 and I'm not from any country that speaks english, so it is really hard to correct every mistake. And even story's from people from such country's make mistakes in there story's. I'm not trying to excuse my self, I'm just trying to give my reasons for such stupid mistakes. For now on, I will be more careful in my chapters and try not to make any mistakes. I don't promise anything but I will try and do my best. Thank you for everyone that brought the grammatical and spelling errors to my attention. Thank you!( Please , don't think that I'm angry or anything I am happy that this mistakes were brought to my attention)
Thank you to my lovely reviewers:
Chiefhow: Yeah, Rennime is great!
Sunset Sparrow: Thank you! I will...
Lindalee4: You're review must be the longest review I ever had, because I don't remember any other. Anyway thank you for you're review, it will help a lot. I have to give you my thanks more then anyone else, because it was you're review that made me more careful with my fic's grammatical mistakes. I'm very happy and glad you reviewed, and don't worry, I took you're review as constructive criticism! I hope that you like this and the nest chapter as you like the others so far! And please keep reviewing and keeping me in touch with my mistakes in the story! Thanks!!!!
Now that that is all clear out, here it is you're new chapter...By the way, I don't know all the lines in the movie, and so I'm improvising!
Chapter four...
"That idiot, stuck up asshole, that irritating "Oh.I'm.To-Good-To-Be-True", annoying little...Arghhhh!" Candela was running out of insults to call Tristian.
She had passed the last hour calling Tristian everything she could remember.
She looked around to notice that it was nearly time for the sun-rise. She loved to see the sun rising behind the trees. It was a relaxing sight. She relaxed that very moment.
Tristian looked at Candela puzzled. This woman was truly a mystery. One moment she seemed ready to jump on someone's trough and kill them, the other she was daydreaming at the sun-rise.
"What as my brother been doing, this passed fifteen year's?" Asked Ira to Gawain. The blond knight seemed to be especially attached to her brother. No one better the him to tell her all about her brother's misbehaves.
"Oh, nothing much, killing, breaking, slaying and smashing people"
"How lovely" Said Ira rolling her eyes, he had clearly misunderstood the point.
"I meant how had he been doing in lady's ways?"
A grin appeared in Gawain's face.
"You're brother is to sweet to win the heart of any of the women we meet"
Ira turns back and sees Galahad speaking with Celin, and he looks rather interest in her gold hair friend. She smiles and turns to the front again.
"And you fair lady, is you're heart already taken?"
Ira looks at Gawain, rather surprised. She smiled seeing that he was interested in her. This would be probably interesting.
"Maybe, maybe not..."She say's with a flirts grin.
Celin and Galahad...
Galahad was happy. This beauthyfull woman was actually talking to him and not thinking about how hot this fellow knights were.
She was smart and interesting. And she seed to like him.
Celin liked this man. He was sweet and caring. And did not seem happy with the fact of having to kill people. He had a temper. He was perfect.
Normal...
Bors looked around. Celin and Galahad seemed to be very interested in each other. Irinia and Gawain were trading provocative comments with each other. Candela and Tristian were trying to hide and failing miserably the fact that they couldn't jus take there minds of each other. He was occupied having fun watching this and worrying about Venora and what to do with the little bastards. Arthur was thinking about the dangerous of the forest and worrying him self to death. Lancelot was wasting his charm on the Lady's leader. Dagonet was trying not to look bored. Joy, oh, joy! This would be a memorable journey!
End of chapter
Sorry people..............But next chapter there's more. Really I believe that to have a good chapter's some must be boring. And I had to start Gawain's and Ira's relationship some where. The same goes for Galahad and Celin. Next chapter will be better I promise!(And bigger)
