Mahalo for all the great reviews dudes
mo
Evilly Smart: Wow! Awsome! Keep Going!
THEJAYMAN: Update soon, sounds interesting
Rikagirls: BEAST BOY ROCKS! UPDATE SOON!
SilverDemonSoul: Seems interesting so far. Update soon.
Titanfan: Interesting
AstaOmega11: Why would (emphasis on would) BB put that book in Raven's room. I see
no purpose in that.
Rae: (looks to Gar) Yea why WOULD you put YOUR book in MY room?
Gar: (sticks tongue out at you and Rae) you'll just have to wait and see!
Bob the Viking: Greetings and hello. Just read the first and so far the only page of
your story, 'Tale of a Titan', and I find it to be both good and full of
potential.
Your proofreading on the story so far has been good, so congratulations
are in order.
Your story does have much potential to be a classic Teen Titan story on
this site. I do not know where you plan on taking this story, but I do
hope that you chose to keep what the story has so far, such as the main
plot (RavenBeast Boy romance).
Please consider continuing your story, I would like very much to read
and review it again.
Good Luck, Keep Writing, and have Fun!
x0Michellex0: Seems interesting. More please!
lab1152: Interesting so far, keep going, looks like the beginnings of a good
story. Good werk.
Mahalo Much again dudes (yes I am a surfer so I talk just like Gar.. He is my clone)
Mo