Harry Potter and the Acceptance
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A.N.: I was pleasantly surprised with the number of reviews I got for the first chapter. I'm also glad the majority of you people caught my mistake of making Harry twelve. Sorry! It was a typing mistake. I've fixed it now so hopefully you are all satisfied. I'm going to answer all of your reviews now. This is dedicated to ocanus, my first reviewer.
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Lauren: Thanks, I fixed it.
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Chapter 2: Vaults
Harry looked up to the sight of a huge building made of white marble. Cautiously he walked up the steps to the door which had the following words engraved on it:
Enter, stranger, but take heed
Of what awaits the sin of greed,
For those who take, but do not earn,
Most pay dearly in their turn.
So if you seek beneath our floors
A treasure that was never yours,
Thief, you have been warned, beware
Of finding more than treasure there.
Harry had to admit, it was a pretty intimidating thing written on the wall. However, he didn't plan on stealing anything so he wasn't scared.
'This must be Gringotts,' Harry thought with awe. He pushed open the huge doors and found himself in a totally different looking world. There were men and women in what appeared to be bathrobes. They looked pretty comfortable to him. Then he looked over to the bank tellers. They were some of the strangest looking creatures he'd ever seen. He began to walk up to one of the lines that was empty.
"Excuse me. Can you tell me how to get my money out of the bank?" Harry asked kind of intimidated.
"And your name is?" the goblin droned monotonously.
"Harry James Potter," he replied with confidence.
"And does Mr. Potter have his key?" the goblin questioned.
"Um, no,"
"Then we are going have to perform a blood test before we can issue a key. Please follow me into the back room,"
Harry followed the goblin for a while until he came to a door that said Assistant Goblin Griphook on a plaque.
"So, your name is Griphook," Harry said.
The goblin just nodded in affirmation. He opened up the door and motioned for Harry to sit down in one of the fancy looking leather chairs. Harry did so.
"We are going to have to prick your finger in order for us to collect a sample of your blood in order to see if you are who you say you are. Are you alright with this?" explained Griphook.
Harry just nodded his head in acceptance. Then Griphook came over, mumbled something, and pointed his finger at Harry's. A small cut appeared.
Harry was amazed at some of the first magic he had seen.
"Now please place your finger on this paper and recite your name."
Harry did just that. A second later writing appeared on the paper. It read:
Harry James Potter
Heir to the line of
Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Evans, Potter, and Mortimer
Access to all vaults due to the death of parents.
Approximate Net Worth: 8.3 billion galleons
Parents: James Theodore Potter
And Lily Marie Evans Potter
Most powerful ancestors to date:
Godric Gryffindor and his wife Rowena Ravenclaw
Harry couldn't believe it he was filthy rich and apparently a very influential member of society.
"Well it seems that you have more than one vault to visit today," said Griphook his eyes deceiving his calm composure.
"Well please take me to the Mortimer vault first," Harry said slightly shaken.
"Follow me." Griphook led him to a small cart on a track. Griphook hopped in. Harry did the same thing.
Suddenly the cart started moving at an intense speed. Harry thought it was wonderful. After about ten minutes it pulled to a stop at vault 73. Harry hopped out after Griphook.
"How do I open it?" he asked.
"Go up to the door and say I Harry James Potter, heir of the Mortimer line demand entry."
Harry walked up to the door and repeated what he'd been told. The doors on the vaults opened with a screech.
What met Harry's eyes was amazing. There were mounds and mounds of gold silver and bronze. In a corner there were 5 huge bookcases with ancient books upon them that didn't even look aged. Harry started walking around browsing the vault. First he walked over to a section in the vault that had many magical items.
The first thing he saw was a nice looking trunk that had the name Charles Mortimer engraved on an obsidian plate that was attached to the mahogany frame of the trunk. He walked over to it and placed his hand on the top admiring the craftsmanship of the trunk. When he looked down again the name Harry James Potter was engraved on the plate. Harry was honestly surprised.
'I wish there were some instructions on all the functions of the trunk,' Harry thought. Suddenly a booklet was lying on the trunk. Harry picked it up. He began reading the instructions. They said that the trunk had 9 room sized compartments which he could decorate as he wished. It also had a special feature that you could walk from compartment to compartment from within the trunk. All you had to do was place your hand on the wall and a list of compartments to choose from would appear, much like the buttons on an elevator. It also had a feature where you could link the trunk with a school bag and it would send what you want into the bang and vice versa. The trunk recognizes you by reading your magical signature and taking a voice analysis. It also had a shrink and enlarge system for easy traveling. Another useful feature is the feather light enchantment upon it. All in all, it was a great find that he decided to take with him.
"Is there any way I can get money from the bank without having to visit it?" Harry questioned.
"You can buy a pouch for 15 galleons that is a direct link between itself and the bank. It has very high security which prevents theft," Griphook explained.
"I'll take one," Harry said before picking up 15 galleons and handing them to Griphook. Who in turn gave him a pouch with the Gringotts crest on it.
Harry dragged the drunk over to the library section where he asked Griphook to please levitate all of the books into the first compartment. He told Griphook to levitate all of the furniture into the second compartment. Then he told him to put all of the weapons, wands, and staves into the third compartment.
"Griphook can you take me to the Potter vault now?" Harry asked.
"Right away sir," Griphook replied.
Once they were both back in the cart they started on to the Potter Vault. Once they arrived at vault 36 Harry went up to the door and said "I Harry James Potter, heir to the Potter line demand entry." Just like before the vault doors opened with a hiss releasing all of the pressurized air.
Harry went around emptying the vault of all weapons, furniture, and books, putting them into their respective compartments.
The most significant item that Harry found in the vault was the invisibility cloak that had belonged to the Potter family for 5 generations. He also found a rather interesting book that was entitled Animagi, Release the Wild Within, by his father.
After that Harry asked Griphook to take him to the Evans vault. Griphook quickly took him to vault 33 where the Evans Vault was located. Harry said the same thing except he replaced Potter with Evans. It worked this way with every high security vault.
Once inside Harry gathered all of the usual items, but he was surprised to find a huge egg floating in a tank of water. Harry felt an urge to say something.
"Hello," he said, but it came out as a hiss. Suddenly there was a cracking sound. The egg had hatched! A huge snake crawled out of the egg.
"Hello massster. I mussst come with you now. Call me Ares," the snake hissed.
"OK, hop in my trunk," Harry said happily and the snake obeyed.
The next vault Harry visited was the Ravenclaw vault. It was vault number 3. Harry got all of the usual things out of the vault and put them in his trunk. Then he saw an earring on a pedestal. Underneath it had a note. It said that while this earring was worn the person who wore it could absorb all of the knowledge in a book by placing their hand on the book and saying absorb. They would retain all knowledge. Harry decided to get his ear pierced later.
Harry finally got to the Gryffindor vault. He collected all furniture, books, and weapons including one that said the Sword of Gryffindor on a plaque beneath it. He also took a collection of battle robes. He was finally ready to go shopping.
"Take me back to the surface, Griphook. I'm ready to go to the alley," Harry commanded as they set off with a start.
A.N.: Hope you guys weren't disappointed. Please review to give me some ideas for the rest of the story.