Grub Kelp: Well I hope you like this chapter, it's practically dedicated to
you!
Tie Kerl: Who said this was a romance?!?!?!0_o If I do decide to change it to romance (which chances are quite slim) I'll make it a good one;)
Idenity99: I like you, you give tips. Yes I'm going to mention how that happened in this chapter andddd more description, yes I can do that...I'm quite sure.
Mage Kitty: you find me everywhere don't you? ( Yes I like torturing readers, veryyyyy funnnn. *pets her smiley face* myyyy prreeeccciioousss.
Starry Eyes 12: Well, er, that wasn't a very helpful review...I could be worse, come on think positive I like positive comments! I know I'll receive the odd rude one but I like positive, positive=better writing.
I promise: this chapter is LONG! Well, longer... I hope you enjoy it!
Disclamier: I don't own anything but my prreeecccciiiooouuussss Island.
Trapped On a Desert Island Part Two
Artemis sat on the sand trying to figure out what had happened. About 10 minutes ago they had washed up upon the shores of a beach no one had a clue about, the sun was fading gently above the waters. He wished he were back at home, anywhere but here, this sunny beach place. He hated the sun and hated water, so you can guess how he felt.
"Foaly,"he said getting up. Did you figure out a conclusion yet, I'm stumped.
Foaly awoke from his daydreams and made eye contact with Artemis. "No, but I have found another mystery."
Artemis groaned, "What?"
"How do you remember us?"
Artemis shook his head. "You're right of coarse. The mindwipe was clean and clear and under control right? (A/N: I felt I had to put that, I've seen that commercial too many times)
Foaly nodded, "I'm positive."
Artemis watched a hawk hover above the horizon, "I don't know Foaly, I don't know-hey, what's this?"
Artemis' foot hit something is the sand, he kicked it out. It flung into the ocean. He was about to go get it until he realized something.
"Noooo, I can't swim!"
Foaly splashed into the waters, instantly giving away to his knees. He grabbed the object.
"It's a...book..."
Artemis called out to him, "Foaly, hurry."
Foaly hurried all right. He tried to go underwater and ended up getting a mouthful of water, he started choking, having no air in him.
~*~
Holly slipped again, overcome by the forces of gravity. She was never good at rock climbing, but she swore this cliff was jinxed.
"All I want to see is the D'Arviting sunset and I can't even do that!"
She heard a sound and quickly fell from her quite high climbing distance of 8 metres.
"Ow!"
"Help! Help! Foaly's drowning!"
She instantly got up, forgetting her pain. They came here as four, and if they ever left, the numbers were not going to be changed.
She turned around a coconut tree and saw bubbles exploding from the water. She quickly ran over.
"Foaly STOP! Calm, breathe, breathe!"
More bubbles came.
"No, don't breathe in water! Oh- Pah!"
She dived into the water and grabbed Foaly's hoof. She dragged him onto shore. Foaly lay there, gasping in air.
Holly shook her head in anger.
"You guys are sad. The water's two feet deep you idiots."
Artemis and Foaly exchanged embarrassed glances.
"Oh."
Holly stared at them. Morons, she thought.
"Where's Root, I need to speak with him."
Artemis shrugged. Foaly answered through wheezes.
"He's...-gasp- in the forest...-gulp- looking for...food..."
Holly winked and stepped on his hoof.
Foaly fell unconscious.
~In the Forest, Towards the East~
"Where's the D'Arviting fruit around this place!"
Root spread a bush open, searching for berries. Instead, he got to yellow glaring eyes staring straight back at him. He fells backwards, startled.
The creature rushed through the bushes and approached him cautiously, snarling its fangs.
"What..are you, you look really familiar..."
The creature came closer, and Root immediately realized who it was.
"Corporal Grub Kelp?..."
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Heh, I hope this satisfies you all (Grub Kelp especially) Next chapter up soon!
Yours until I get Foghorns autograph,
.::~The OddBird~::.
Tie Kerl: Who said this was a romance?!?!?!0_o If I do decide to change it to romance (which chances are quite slim) I'll make it a good one;)
Idenity99: I like you, you give tips. Yes I'm going to mention how that happened in this chapter andddd more description, yes I can do that...I'm quite sure.
Mage Kitty: you find me everywhere don't you? ( Yes I like torturing readers, veryyyyy funnnn. *pets her smiley face* myyyy prreeeccciioousss.
Starry Eyes 12: Well, er, that wasn't a very helpful review...I could be worse, come on think positive I like positive comments! I know I'll receive the odd rude one but I like positive, positive=better writing.
I promise: this chapter is LONG! Well, longer... I hope you enjoy it!
Disclamier: I don't own anything but my prreeecccciiiooouuussss Island.
Trapped On a Desert Island Part Two
Artemis sat on the sand trying to figure out what had happened. About 10 minutes ago they had washed up upon the shores of a beach no one had a clue about, the sun was fading gently above the waters. He wished he were back at home, anywhere but here, this sunny beach place. He hated the sun and hated water, so you can guess how he felt.
"Foaly,"he said getting up. Did you figure out a conclusion yet, I'm stumped.
Foaly awoke from his daydreams and made eye contact with Artemis. "No, but I have found another mystery."
Artemis groaned, "What?"
"How do you remember us?"
Artemis shook his head. "You're right of coarse. The mindwipe was clean and clear and under control right? (A/N: I felt I had to put that, I've seen that commercial too many times)
Foaly nodded, "I'm positive."
Artemis watched a hawk hover above the horizon, "I don't know Foaly, I don't know-hey, what's this?"
Artemis' foot hit something is the sand, he kicked it out. It flung into the ocean. He was about to go get it until he realized something.
"Noooo, I can't swim!"
Foaly splashed into the waters, instantly giving away to his knees. He grabbed the object.
"It's a...book..."
Artemis called out to him, "Foaly, hurry."
Foaly hurried all right. He tried to go underwater and ended up getting a mouthful of water, he started choking, having no air in him.
~*~
Holly slipped again, overcome by the forces of gravity. She was never good at rock climbing, but she swore this cliff was jinxed.
"All I want to see is the D'Arviting sunset and I can't even do that!"
She heard a sound and quickly fell from her quite high climbing distance of 8 metres.
"Ow!"
"Help! Help! Foaly's drowning!"
She instantly got up, forgetting her pain. They came here as four, and if they ever left, the numbers were not going to be changed.
She turned around a coconut tree and saw bubbles exploding from the water. She quickly ran over.
"Foaly STOP! Calm, breathe, breathe!"
More bubbles came.
"No, don't breathe in water! Oh- Pah!"
She dived into the water and grabbed Foaly's hoof. She dragged him onto shore. Foaly lay there, gasping in air.
Holly shook her head in anger.
"You guys are sad. The water's two feet deep you idiots."
Artemis and Foaly exchanged embarrassed glances.
"Oh."
Holly stared at them. Morons, she thought.
"Where's Root, I need to speak with him."
Artemis shrugged. Foaly answered through wheezes.
"He's...-gasp- in the forest...-gulp- looking for...food..."
Holly winked and stepped on his hoof.
Foaly fell unconscious.
~In the Forest, Towards the East~
"Where's the D'Arviting fruit around this place!"
Root spread a bush open, searching for berries. Instead, he got to yellow glaring eyes staring straight back at him. He fells backwards, startled.
The creature rushed through the bushes and approached him cautiously, snarling its fangs.
"What..are you, you look really familiar..."
The creature came closer, and Root immediately realized who it was.
"Corporal Grub Kelp?..."
~~~~~******^^^^^^^%%%%%%^^^^^^^*******~~~~~~~~~~~
Heh, I hope this satisfies you all (Grub Kelp especially) Next chapter up soon!
Yours until I get Foghorns autograph,
.::~The OddBird~::.