Chapter two: Zack's fear

When morning dawned on the house Zack woke up and went down stairs. He discovered there was food already out and a note. Zack picked it up and read. Zack me, Alice and Yugo went shopping. Make yourself at home and we'll be back in an hour.

Zack got a pen and wrote a note. Zack put on a coat and went outside to see the town. Zack was amazed with the tall buildings and shops. He walked until he saw a man with a big attitude. The man seemed familiar to him. The man spoke up.

"Well what do we have here? You look capable in a fight. But I feel I know you. Have we met?"

"No but I feel I know you too. What's your name?"

"My name is Shenlong, you?"

"Zack."

"Well Zack nice meeting you. Watch yourself I hear there is a Zeonthrope killer out." replied Shenlong. Zack was walking now thinking of what Shenlong said. He saw there was a fighting tournament with the prize money at a ten thousand zenny.

"Hey you there" said a man at the registration table. "You look capable will you join in?"

"I guess I can. It might be fun." said Zack and signed up. Zack was surprised when he was crushing everyone. Then a man with a red coat with a skull on the back was next.

"So you must be the new Zeonthrope that my friends told me about. I can't let you win." He said. He saw him transform into the mechanical being he becomes in his dream.

"Who and what are you?"

"I am an unborn and my name is Xion. You have the unborn in you as well and I believe its spirit will soon take over you. So you must be defeated."

"I'm sorry but. I need the prize money." said Zack who he felt a being stir inside him. Zack then found himself transform into the metallic beast. He was familiarized himself with the blades. He then saw Xion lunge for him but Zack jumped to avoid the blade. He then extended his arms and his blades flew up. Zack then flipped so he fell upside down and then drought his hands up to his head and then spun down.

Down below noticed and jumped backward but got nipped from the blades. Xion ran forward and swings and Zack blocks and counters with a swipe to the side. Xion rushed a little backward holding his wound tight.

Zack was beginning to feel another beast in him. It was screaming to come out. He could hear it in his head.

"Let me out! You can't stop we. I will get out. Awaken your Chimera blood. Fuse our body with the Chimera."

"There is no us. I control my body."

"We'll see about that!"

"No stop, I wont let you. Go away!"

"Damn you, I will get you eventually. And when that happens. You will be no more." said the being. He felt it go away but is still there. He then refocused to the fight.

Xion is out cold and Zack won the tournament. He then heard whispers. He went to a shop. He felt like getting new clothing. He found a black robe. He then found a black coat similar to Xion's.

He put on his robe and put up his hood. People didn't bother him and didn't whisper as he walked past them. He returned to Alice and Yugo's house. When he got in Alice, Yugo, Uriko and Shenlong starring at him. He took off his robe and starred back. He could tell it wasn't anything good.

Ok so tell me what you think.