Me: Yes I am re-writing it. I red over the past chapters and I thought "God
this sux!" So I am re-writing everything into longer and better chapters.
Everyone will act like themselves and the only new people that are going to
help Souta is Anna, me and my bf Nick 'cause it was hard to write a chapter
with all these characters in here. So the characters (that r main) in dis
story will be: Sesshoumaru, Kagome, Inuyasha, Kikyou, Sango, Miroku, Me,
Nick, Anna and some business workers from Sesshoumaru. Well I better get
started ne?
Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha. Rumiko Takashi is and I'm not her. Thank her for Inuyasha.
Author's POV
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Kagome rang on the doorbell excited for what she was going to show her boyfriend, Inuyasha a surprise.
Soon a woman that had long black hair, violet eyes and a white kimono answered the door.
"Hello Mrs. Katana is Inuyasha here? I want to give him a surprise I have." Kagome informed in an excited voice.
"Well, um Inuyasha...he's upstairs in his room Kagome." Mrs. Katana replied in a sad tone.
Kagome wondered why her voice was like that but soon shrugged it off an ran upstairs to Inuyasha's room.
"Well she should know that Inuyasha is just an idiot who doesn't deserve her. She'll finally find someone better then Inuyasha." Mrs. Katana thought and walked into the kitchen.
"Inuyasha I have a surprise!" Kagome called knocking on his door lightly.
"Oh god! Get up and hide!" Inuyasha whispered.
"Why Inuyasha? I bet it's the bitchy cousin of mine Kagome right? Well just beat the heck out of her and maybe kill her." A woman's voice said.
Kagome started to get suspicious and opened the door but regretted what she did.
There laid Inuyasha naked on top of her most hated cousin Kikyou who was also naked.
"Inuyasha...why do you do this to me? Always cheat on me...why couldn't you just tell me you were seeing HER! Kagome yelled glaring at both of them with big rolls of tears coming down her cheeks.
"Feh you were really nothing to me. You just a pathetic bitch and that's all you'll ever be." Inuyasha said and with each word breaking Kagome's heart in pieces.
"Inuyasha then have fun with my fuckin' bitch cousin! Oh and just to let you know she had sex with Naraku and the rest of the guys she thought was hot! Kikyou doesn't love you! She loves your body!" Kagome yelled still crying and quickly ran downstairs out of the house with Mrs. Katana watching her with sadden eyes.
"Kagome find someone else..." Mrs. Katana thought.
Back in Inuyasha's room Inuyasha looked at Kikyou with a glare.
"Did you really have sex with other guys?!" Inuyasha yelled.
"Of course I did. Some were even better then you." Kikyou replied earning a punch on the cheek from Inuyasha.
"Danm I should have stayed with Kagome! She wasn't a slut like you!" Inuyasha yelled putting his clothes back on with Kikyou staring at him with surprised eyes.
To Kagome's POV
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As I rode on my bike, still crying I fell on my side from exhaustion.
"Inuyasha...I HATE you." I thought glaring at the ground watching my tears fall on the ground.
Their were barely anyone here since it was night time.
This park was far away from where I lived.
"I see the wench of Inuyasha's has finally seen his true colors." A cold voice said through the night.
Kagome's head shot up immediately seeing a person she thought that had moved away.
Flashback
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"Come, Sesshoumaru we have to teach you how to manage a business." Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's father said making a twelve year old Sesshoumaru go into a limo.
"Hehe bye-be jerk!" A ten-year old Inuyasha said sticking his tongue out at Sesshoumaru earning an icy glare.
"Inuyasha that's not nice! You can't act like that around people!" A ten- year old Kagome said.
Sesshoumaru looked at the girl Inuyasha had met a week ago and gave her a five second smile before being led to a new city.
End of Flashback
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"Sesshoumaru is that you? I thought you left." Kagome whispered but enough for hearing range.
"I did and I see you also did." Sesshoumaru replied in the same tone of voice.
"I rode on my bike that much?! Man now I'm tired. How am I suppose to get home?" Kagome said talking to herself.
"Quit talking to yourself. It's not healthy. Just come with me and I'll arrange a drive back home in the morning." Sesshoumaru informed having no idea why he said that.
Kagome gave him a warm hearted smile.
"Thank you, Sesshoumaru!" Kagome said in a now cheery voice.
They went inside a limo nearby driving to a hotel.
END
Me: This is going 2b better then the first I swear! Well plz review! I've worked hard on this! I know it's kinda short but it's only the first chapter. Also plz review my other stories!
UltaAnimeFangurl2004
Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha. Rumiko Takashi is and I'm not her. Thank her for Inuyasha.
Author's POV
---[=]---[=]---[=]---[=]
Kagome rang on the doorbell excited for what she was going to show her boyfriend, Inuyasha a surprise.
Soon a woman that had long black hair, violet eyes and a white kimono answered the door.
"Hello Mrs. Katana is Inuyasha here? I want to give him a surprise I have." Kagome informed in an excited voice.
"Well, um Inuyasha...he's upstairs in his room Kagome." Mrs. Katana replied in a sad tone.
Kagome wondered why her voice was like that but soon shrugged it off an ran upstairs to Inuyasha's room.
"Well she should know that Inuyasha is just an idiot who doesn't deserve her. She'll finally find someone better then Inuyasha." Mrs. Katana thought and walked into the kitchen.
"Inuyasha I have a surprise!" Kagome called knocking on his door lightly.
"Oh god! Get up and hide!" Inuyasha whispered.
"Why Inuyasha? I bet it's the bitchy cousin of mine Kagome right? Well just beat the heck out of her and maybe kill her." A woman's voice said.
Kagome started to get suspicious and opened the door but regretted what she did.
There laid Inuyasha naked on top of her most hated cousin Kikyou who was also naked.
"Inuyasha...why do you do this to me? Always cheat on me...why couldn't you just tell me you were seeing HER! Kagome yelled glaring at both of them with big rolls of tears coming down her cheeks.
"Feh you were really nothing to me. You just a pathetic bitch and that's all you'll ever be." Inuyasha said and with each word breaking Kagome's heart in pieces.
"Inuyasha then have fun with my fuckin' bitch cousin! Oh and just to let you know she had sex with Naraku and the rest of the guys she thought was hot! Kikyou doesn't love you! She loves your body!" Kagome yelled still crying and quickly ran downstairs out of the house with Mrs. Katana watching her with sadden eyes.
"Kagome find someone else..." Mrs. Katana thought.
Back in Inuyasha's room Inuyasha looked at Kikyou with a glare.
"Did you really have sex with other guys?!" Inuyasha yelled.
"Of course I did. Some were even better then you." Kikyou replied earning a punch on the cheek from Inuyasha.
"Danm I should have stayed with Kagome! She wasn't a slut like you!" Inuyasha yelled putting his clothes back on with Kikyou staring at him with surprised eyes.
To Kagome's POV
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As I rode on my bike, still crying I fell on my side from exhaustion.
"Inuyasha...I HATE you." I thought glaring at the ground watching my tears fall on the ground.
Their were barely anyone here since it was night time.
This park was far away from where I lived.
"I see the wench of Inuyasha's has finally seen his true colors." A cold voice said through the night.
Kagome's head shot up immediately seeing a person she thought that had moved away.
Flashback
---[=]---[=]---[=]---[=]
"Come, Sesshoumaru we have to teach you how to manage a business." Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's father said making a twelve year old Sesshoumaru go into a limo.
"Hehe bye-be jerk!" A ten-year old Inuyasha said sticking his tongue out at Sesshoumaru earning an icy glare.
"Inuyasha that's not nice! You can't act like that around people!" A ten- year old Kagome said.
Sesshoumaru looked at the girl Inuyasha had met a week ago and gave her a five second smile before being led to a new city.
End of Flashback
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"Sesshoumaru is that you? I thought you left." Kagome whispered but enough for hearing range.
"I did and I see you also did." Sesshoumaru replied in the same tone of voice.
"I rode on my bike that much?! Man now I'm tired. How am I suppose to get home?" Kagome said talking to herself.
"Quit talking to yourself. It's not healthy. Just come with me and I'll arrange a drive back home in the morning." Sesshoumaru informed having no idea why he said that.
Kagome gave him a warm hearted smile.
"Thank you, Sesshoumaru!" Kagome said in a now cheery voice.
They went inside a limo nearby driving to a hotel.
END
Me: This is going 2b better then the first I swear! Well plz review! I've worked hard on this! I know it's kinda short but it's only the first chapter. Also plz review my other stories!
UltaAnimeFangurl2004