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Me: Thankies for all these reviews again! I feel so loved!!! I know dat I didn't update the NEXT day but the computer was busted and I had no idea what 2 type in. I wanted this chappy 2b special so, yeah. I NEED HELP!!!!!! I have 13 mosquito bites and their itching like hell!!! So be glad I'm able 2 type this. NOTHING I PUT ON THEM IS WORKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! One more thing, I HAVE A VVVVVVEEEEERRRRRRRYYYYY bad headache while I'm typing dis. I've been on the computer 2 long.
VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY, IMPORTANT PART OF MY AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Plz note that I am NOT trying 2 copy anyone. I am just typing what pops up in my head. If I did copy plz don't report me! I REALLY don't copy!!! Copying is well pretty pathetic I guess u could say. Remember: I'M COMING UP WITH THESE IDEAS IN MY LITTLE TINY BRAIN!!! Wait do I have a brain??? ?? Now on 2 story!!!
Disclaimer: Rumiko Takashi is the rightful owner of the Inuyasha series anime in which Jessica/UltaAnimeFangurl2004 does not own.
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Author's POV
Rose Petal Super Mall
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"Hm I wonder if this fits." Kagome thought holding a black Chinese outfit with a giant rose petal in the center of it.
"Kagome!" A familiar yet unwanted voice yelled out.
Kagome turned around only to have an angry/sad/surprised face, "Inuyasha, what hell are you doing following me?"
"Inuyasha I'm your girl not that Krackgome or whatever that bitch's name is." Kikyou commented holding on to Inuyasha's arm and glaring at Kagome.
"Well it's SO nice to see you two. So tell me, do you hear the sarcasm in my voice?" Kagome asked in an icy tone glaring at them right back.
"Ugh whatever! Inuyasha, sweetie, let's go shopping OK dear?" Kikyou said as if she and Inuyasha were husband and wife.
"Kikyou I don't love you! Leave me alone to be with Kagome!" Inuyasha yelled breaking free from Kikyou's clutches and walking towards Kagome.
Kikyou made a small "Hmph!" and walked away.
Inuyasha stared at Kagome with sad eyes and Kagome looked at him with flaming eyes.
"Kagome..." Inuyasha trailed off.
"Forget it Inuyasha! I'm not going back to you ad you CAN'T make me!" Kagome yelled turning around and crossing her arms.
Inuyasha growled pulled out Kagome's right wrist holding it in the air tightly.
"Inuyasha!" Kagome screamed.
"Listen to me, wench! Your going back with me and that's all!" Inuyasha yelled tightening his hold on Kagome's wrist.
"Let her go!" Someone yelled throwing a small spinning top hitting it on Inuyasha' left eye.
Inuyasha fell on the floor clutching his eye.
"Shippo?!" Kagome said immediately knowing where the top came from.
"Kagome I helped too! We just came here buying a dozen spinning tops." Another little boy informed.
"Souta?! Why are you here?" Kagome asked.
"They came here because your parents said we could take them around town." Anna answered suddenly appearing.
"Mhm and I couldn't be more happier." Jessica said also appearing eating chocolate ice cream with a small spoon in a cup.
"Oh my god! Mom and Dad are probably worried about me!" Kagome said with fear in her voice.
"Don't get so worried, Kagome! We told your parents you were here and they said it was fine." Souta said.
Souta had short messy black hair, brown eyes like Kagome, and he was as tall has Kagome's elbow.
He wore an orange sweater, black vest, blue jeans, and white tennis shoes.
Shippo had messy orange hair tied in a ponytail, green child-like eyes and could reach up to Souta's shoulders.
He wore a thick green sweater that matched his eyes, blue jeans, and black tennis shoes.
Anna wore a white sweater, blue jeans, and gray tennis shoes.
Jessica wore a black sweater, blue jeans, and black tennis shoes.
"Who's the freak on the ground?" Jessica asked pointing at Inuyasha who was slowly getting up.
"Well, Inuyasha, here's something that I've wanted to do since you've cheated on me." Kagome said walking in front of Inuyasha and slapping him hard to the wall knocking him out.
"Asshole." Kagome muttered and walked away with the others following her.
"Hey, Kagome if you don't mind me asking who was that guy?" Anna asked.
"Oh that was just Inuyasha, Kagome's-" Souta was about to say but was cut off by Kagome.
"Ex-boyfriend." Kagome finished glaring at Kagome for a few seconds and then turned away.
"What?" Souta asked but no one responded.
"Momma can we get some ice cream?" Shippo asked tugging on Kagome's pant leg.
"Sure Shippo. I'm kinda hungry anyway." Kagome replied now smiling.
"Ice cream!" Jessica yelled running towards the nearby ice cream shop.
Anna sweat dropped, "Hehe Jessica loves her ice cream?"
They all just nodded buying their ice cream.
Kagome got vanilla ice cream that had a red colored rose petal decorated on it in a small cup.
Shippo and Souta got chocolate ice cream on a cone.
Anna had strawberry ice cream on a cone.
Jessica had chocolate, vanilla and strawberry on a cone stacked together on top.
"Excuse me, young lady, could you do me a favor?" A guy asked not too far from Kagome's age.
He had black hair tied in a little ponytail in the back and violet eyes.
He had on white jeans, black shirt, and white tennis shoes.
"A favor?" Kagome said confused.
He held on Kagome's hand looking at her straight in the eye, "Will you bear my child?"
Kagome fumed and was about to slap him but was beat by Sango yelling "HENTAI!" and punching him on the head.
Sango wore a long black skirt, gray shirt, and dark yellow shoes.
"Miroku how many times do I have to tell you? You can't ask that to every pretty girl you see." Sango said sighing.
Miroku groggily got up and stared at Sango innocently, "Why, Sango, I'm very flattered. You actually care for me."
Jessica stared at them oddly, "Are you boyfriend and girlfriend?"
Sango and Miroku looked at Jessica then each other.
"Well if you are so curious, will you bear my child?" Miroku asked holding Jessica's hand.
"No! I already have a boyfriend thank-you." Jessica replied.
"Wow your acting normal now?" Kagome said surprised.
"I only act weird when I have anything sweet." Jessica explained.
"Hey Kagome isn't it that Sesshoumaru guy you were talking about earlier?" Anna asked looking towards Sesshoumaru who was walking towards them.
"Sesshoumaru?" Kagome said and turned to where Anna was looking.
Sure enough it was Sesshoumaru who was walking towards them.
Kagome smiled and made a quick bow, "Hello, Sesshoumaru."
"Hello, Kagome. I've come to tell you there's been a change of plans. I will have to take you home tomorrow night since I am far too busy." Sesshoumaru explained.
Kagome nodded understanding, "It's alright Sesshoumaru. I like this city anyways. I wouldn't mind staying here for just one more day."
Sesshoumaru just nodded walking away.
"Yes my plan for her to mine should work." He thought while walking away.
"Well...that was kind of odd." Jessica commented.
"Kagome!" The same familiar yet unwanted voice called out.
There, again, was Inuyasha running towards Kagome.
"Inuyasha I already said I'm not going to be your girlfriend don't you get you numbskull!" Kagome yelled.
"You mean you won't go out with me in the Rose Petal city anniversary party?" Inuyasha asked.
"No Inuyasha I'm not even going to go out with you!" Kagome yelled now fuming.
"Feh fine. But remember, Kagome, you'll be mine eventually." Inuyasha said confidently and walked off.
"That idiot will never give up, right, Kagome?" Shippo said and Kagome nodded.
"I forgot tomorrow was the Rose Petal city anniversary! They throw a huge party through the whole city celebrating." Sango explained.
"Yep and I've already got my date with me." Miroku said proudly wrapping his arm around Sango's waist and slowly lowering his hand...
"HENTAI!" Sango yelled smacking Miroku again "Do that a few more times and you won't have anything."
"Well while we're at the mall I suggest we go buy some clothes for this special occasion?" Anna suggest and they all agreed.
"Wow this is going to be fun!" Souta thought "Also the perfect time for me to get payback on Inuyasha for hurting my sister."
After a few hours of shopping they all started to go home.
Sango had her own room in the hotel which she lived in.
Jessica, Anna, Souta and Shippo stayed in an extra large room in the hotel.
Miroku lived in an apartment nearby.
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Author's POV
Peach Flower Hotel Kagome's Room
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Kagome just walked back to her hotel room plopping herself down on the silk bed again.
Beside her on the bed laid a long sleeved shirt and pants blue pajamas.
She got up her feet aching but resisted that picking up her pajamas dressing quickly.
Like the night before she walked out to the patio leaning against the front side crossed arms.
It was still snowing fairly hard but not like a blizzard.
The city lights plus the snow made such a beautiful combination.
From afar at the right side of the city was a huge lake and land that was empty.
"Tomorrow night I should go there." Kagome thought happily "Well I'll have a surprise for Sesshoumaru for all the things he's done for me. It's the least I could do for him. Wait do I like Sesshoumaru? Hm I think he's kind, sweet, and some weird odd way gentle. OK that proves it. I love Sesshoumaru."
"Who would have thought it." Kagome muttered and saw a piece of paper on the coffee table in the patio.
Curious she opened the letter surprised at what it said.
Dear Kagome,
I hope that you will accept this offer of being my date for the Rose Petal City Anniversary. You've been in my mind ever since I've met you. I can not help but feel attracted to you. If you do not accept I will understand. But if come meet me at the park you see across the city at the left.
Sincerely,
Secret Admirer
I read the letter over again and smiled.
"That can't possibly be Inuyasha's handwriting. What the heck. I'll go meet this Secret Admirer." Kagome thought.
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Author's POV
Peach Flower Hotel Sesshoumaru's Room
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I smiled slightly staring at the city looking at the park on the left.
All what I was thinking was will she accept?
If she does not come then...what will I do?
END
Me: Hey look secret fluff!!! Anywayz I hope u review. I worked hard on this chappy!!! =) If I get over 10 reviews I can't update the next day. I'll probably update in about 2 or 3 days. Anywayz a special note for Akikazu:
SEE I UPDATED BEFORE MONDAY!!!! SO NOW U HAVE 2 MAKE A SEQUEL 2 UR STORY AS SOON AS U CAN!!!!!!! Just a quick reminder. =) lol
Also 2 all my reviewers:
THANXKIES SO MUCH!!!!! I REALLY LIKE THE REVEIWS AND I HAVEN'T GOTTENA FLAME YET!!! I HOPE BY THE END OF THE STORY I'LL GET 100 REVEIWS!!!! AGAIN THANKIES SO MUCH!!!!!