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sesshy's kitten: Yeah I did act like that and still do. Glad u like!!! =)
Akikazu: Well they would have to have spend more time with each other to fall IN luv. I agree, a chibi version of them is so cute!!! =)
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Me: I'M SO SORRY FOR THE WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!! I got kicked out of my house and now I live in an apartment across from my old home. My parents help pay 'cause I'm only 16. But I gotta pay too!!! So 2 earn more money from job...more days/hours for job. Sad isn't it? My whole family does that around my age. Well on 2 chappy!
Disclaimer: Rumiko Takashi is the rightful owner of Inuyasha in which, I DO NOT own.
Author's POV
Rose Petal City: Sesshoumaru and Kagome
"Feh." Sesshoumaru said walking outside.
"Now I know Inuyasha isn't the only one who does that." Kagome commented but ended up hurting herself a little on the inside.
"I have to go now." Sesshoumaru informed breaking his arm from Kagome's.
"Yeah I gotta go to. Maybe I'll meet you up later?" Kagome said then walked away.
"Yes...we will meet each other later." Sesshoumaru muttered loud enough for a person behind him to hear which he didn't notice.
"Now all I need to know is when and where they'll meet." Kagura thought slowly walking away.
Author's POV
Rose Petal City: Souta and Shippo
Souta had on a black hate covering his eyes, blue jeans, a gray sweater, and his black shoes.
He stood on a tall building looking down at Sesshoumaru.
Shippo had on black jeans, a white sweater, also a black hat covering his eyes, and gray shoes.
He was following Kagome through a large crowd.
"Operation Sesshoumaru and Kagome starts, now. Over." Souta announced through a walkie talkie.
"Right. So I gotta get Kagome to the park right, Souta? Over." Shippo asked through the walkie talkie.
"Yeah, I gotta start helping out, Sesshoumaru and you start helping, Kagome, over." Souta said shutting off the walkie talkie.
Author's POV
Rose Petal City: Kagome and Shippo
"I guess I look pretty good. Although I can't shake off the feeling I'm being watched." Kagome thought dressing in her room.
Her hair was tied in a low pony tail and was straightened.
Kagome wore a black silk prom-like gown with a rose in the front and a falling rose petal under it.
On the back it said: "Hope" in very light gray words.
"Hm maybe just a little inspection." Kagome muttered walking to the lump under her bed covers, "Shippo?! Souta?!"
"Oh it's only a pillow," Kagome said, "Well I guess I better get going to the park."
Once Kagome left Shippo crawled out of the bed turning on his walkie talkie again.
Now completing his part of the plan Shippo walked back into his hotel room to get some ice cream.
"Souta Kagome's going to the park, tell Sesshoumaru!"
Unknown to both of them a little girl was watching them both in a closet with her cell phone.
"Kagura their going to meet at Rose Petal city park. But keep an eye out for two little boys watching them named Souta and/or Shippo." The girl informed in the phone.
"Thank-you little sister- I mean, Kanna." Kagura replied in the phone hanging up.
Author's POV
Rose Petal City: Souta and Sesshoumaru
"Sesshoumaru! Shippo said that Kagome's going to the park right now!" Souta yelled tugging on Sesshoumaru's pant leg.
Sesshoumaru kneeled down patting his head, "Thank-you, Souta. Go meet Rin now. She's in my hotel room."
"Really?! Rin's HERE?! I gotta go- hey wait a minute, why did you suggest her?" Souta asked suspiciously.
"Do you not like her?" Sesshoumaru asked standing up.
"I-I, OK I'll go. Good luck, Sesshoumaru!" Souta said and with that started to walk away only to be dragged into a far away ally.
"Tell me, boy are you Kagome's sibling?" Kagura asked.
"Yeah what's it to you?" Souta replied in an annoyed voice.
"I am Kagome's friend, Kagura. Kagome took a taxi and is already at the park. You better tell that to, Sesshoumaru." Kagura lied trying to fool Souta and sadly, she did.
"Oh no! I have to tell him! Thank-you!" Souta yelled chasing after Sesshoumaru.
"It's all going to plan." Kagura thought laughing a bit.
"Sesshoumaru! Sesshoumaru! Kagome's already in the park! You need to hurry over there fast!" Souta called out.
Sesshoumaru looked surprised then quickened his pace to the park.
Souta smiled thinking nothing would go wrong then walking back to the hotel.
Author's POV
Rose Petal Park: Sesshoumaru, Kagome, and Kagura
"Where is Kagome? Could Souta have been lying to me?" Sesshoumaru thought looking around.
"Ah Sesshoumaru. It's such a pleasure to see your handsome face again." Kagura said appearing behind him.
"Kagura," Sesshoumaru said with disgust "what are you planning? Have you done anything to Kagome?"
"Why Sesshoumaru, that's so hurtful. You would wanna see Kagome more then me?" Kagura commented quickly putting her arms around Sesshoumaru's neck kissing him.
Right when they were kissing Kagome had appeared staring at them with hurtful eyes.
Sesshoumaru pushed Kagura to the ground looking at Kagome with hope that she would understand.
"I won't take this anymore..." Kagome thought to herself tears streaming down her cold pale cheeks.
"I'm used as a toy. Someone gets tired of that toy then finds a better one. Leaving the first one to be played by a new person only to be betrayed again."
Sesshoumaru watched in surprised as Kagome ran away back into the city...
"Finally that stupid girl is gone. Sesshoumaru why don't we start over on that kiss." Kagura said forgetting about being pushed down.
Sesshoumaru then looked at her with cold eyes, but they were also angry at the same time.
The annoying woman, she was the reason it didn't work out.
So he punched her hard on the cheek twice then threw her deep within the lake.
Kagura wasn't unconscious so she could swim but both of her cheeks were purple a.k.a bruised bad...really bad.
Author's POV
Rose Petal City: Kagome
"Danm it...danm it all. I hate Inuyasha for cheating on me. But now I hate his older half brother even more. He took advantage of me when I was heart broken. Danm that stupid bastard. I'm never falling in love again!" Kagome thought angrily somewhere unknown in the city.
Her hair was messy, whole body wet from falling in the snow, and her dress torn in some places bumping into random things.
Kagome was still in Rose Petal City but it was empty and no one was there.
Soon something poured in the sky, not snow but rain.
"A perfect weather to my 'perfect' mood. Great." Kagome thought and walked across the empty part of the city.
END
Me: In my opinion, THAT SUCKED!!! Don't even say it was good. That's what I get for not writing for so long. But a nice twist to it. Plz review anywayz! I have 98 reviews! 98 I SAY!!! Almost 2 a hundred. Well now I have another writer's block. School's almost here. On my words to hate list here r 3 of them: Back to school...
Bye-bye!
UltaAnimeFangurl2004
P.S
I'm thinking of doing a one-shot/song-fic w/ Kelly Clarkson's song Breakaway. U think I should?